Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kumkum is feeling restless at night.... she is awake... and thinking Sumit's words.... 😳 😳

There Sumit is sitting outside his outhouse, on stairs... 😳

He starts playing guitar, ... quite disturbed.... 😳

Then he opens his eyes and sees Kumkum standing infront of him,

He gets up and goes to her,

Su : Kumkum.... tum.... itni raat ko????..... Kya hua ... sab theek hai naa???? 😕 😕 😳

Kumkum holds his T-shirt with both her hands, near hid chest.... 😉 😉 and pulls him closerrr 😉

Su : Kumkum.... 😆 😆

Kk : Suno.... Kya sunna chahte ho tum???? 😡 Haan mujhse bardaasht nahi hota ki koi bhi.... mind it.... koiiiii bhiii ladki.... tumhare kareeb to door.... tumhare aas-paas bhi aayee 😉 😉 Haan mujhse bardaasth nahi hota... ki tum mere siva kisi aur ke baare mein socho bhiiii 😉

Then tears come into her eyes, still she keeps speaking 😳

Kk : Tum mere siva kisi aur se pyaar se baat tab karo.. jab wo tumhari behen ya koi rishtedaar ho.... aur koi ladki nahiiii 😉 😉 nahi bardaast kar sakti main.... Tumhareee.... tumm (her voice was being choked now.... due to her tears and cryingg 😳 😳 )

Sumit holds her by waistt 😉 😉

Kk : Tum..... Tum mere siva kisi aur ke ho hi nahi sakte.... bcoz I m THE ONLY ONE for uuu.... 😉 😉 Got itttttttttt 😉 ...Tum sirf mere ho sakte ho.... I just don't love u... I own u....... 😉 😉

Then she breaks down into his arms....

Kk (sobbing) : U'r mine.... I luvvv uuuu... I luvv u very muchhhh 😳

Sumit too hugs her, then she moves away, feeling embaressed,

Su : U know what.... I luv this attitude of urs.... tum at least un ladkiyon ki tarah nahi.... ki jo kahen.... I luv u..... U r different.... bcoz U own me....

Then he comes closerrrrr 😉

Su : Ans I own u too..... I luv u.... 😉

Kumkum blushes....

Su : Oye.... tujhe sharm bhi aati hai? 😆 😆

Kumkum hits her fist... on his chestttt 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
OMG hope it's not a dream...........i like Sukk saying that "I own u"......

verni dear.....keep writeing.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
sakha mar jahva 😍 😳
too good verni abb agla part
verni thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
oyeeee sab hayeeeeeee karke mat baithoooo 😡

Rahiii chalo likhoooo 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hayeeeeeeeeeeee...Verni Di...!!!...mmmmmmmuuuuuuuuaaaaahhhhhh!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
i think itni ..........jaldi ...milane ki kya zaroort thi ........we know our kk is too ziddi than sumit.............ab kuch aur bi ho ho sakta tha naaaaa...............
she cant agree su so jaldi.........
well ..nicly written ...

lets wait to read/.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kumkum hits her fist... on his chestttt 😳
Sumit hugs her tightly and closes his eyes...but when he opens his eyes again, he realizes that he was talking to himself... 😛
Su: When will this dream come true...I think I will have to do something about this...I don't want to wait anymore...I want to spend every moment of my life with Kumkum... 😳
The next day, both Sumit and Kumkum went to the office but they had so much work to do that they didn't get a chance to talk to each other 😕 ...but Sumit felt his day was not complete without talking to Kumkum 😳 so he asked to drop her home and it was also getting dark....on the way home, Sumit's car broke down 😃 ...and he realized that he had forgotten to give it to the mechanic...they step out of the car and Sumit realizes that he forgot his cell phone at home, then suddenly it starts to rain really hard... 😉

Kk is about to get in the car when Su grabs her wrist 😳 ...Kk is confused
KK: Su what are you doing...get in or you will get wet
Su does not say anything, he forgets everything and is mesmerized by her beauty, he pulls her closer to him, gazes into her eyes and he slowly starts kissing her forehead, then her cheek, and then her neck, all the while hugging her tightly...KK wants to express how much she loves him too and wants to be with him but again she remembers her parents, mini/gaurav and she comes back to her senses..she pulls away from Sumit and turns her back to him..
KK: Su this isn't right..I shouldn't be so selfish...I have a lot of responsibilities.. 😕
Su moves closer to her and holds her face with both hands, and KK stares into his eyes... 😳
Su: We will get together and handle these responsibilities, I can't live without you Kumkum, I want to marry you.... 😊

KK is speechless...and at the same time a car is passing by and stops to ask them if they need any help...Su explains to them the car situation and they are nice enough to give them a ride...while Kk gets in the car...Sumit's phone rings...and this time...it is not Simi..it is Su's mom...she sounds very excited and tells him that his marriage is fixed with a very good, sweet girl.


Phew!!This is all I cud come up with 😕 before the real writers start(that includes everyone BUT me 😛 )
Now Rahila, see I actually wrote 😆 , I kept my vaada 😉

Edited by SuKk_forever - 17 years ago
Pearl29 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ab Simi nahi to koi aur mil gayi Su ko.........now what will happen.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nahiiiiiiiin....koi sumit ki kisi aur se shaadi mat karvaana.... 😭

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