Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity - Page 25

Plz plz plz..someone write...shafoo, preethi di, seema di..koi toh likho.

ok i will continue with!!!

su and kk reach hospital.

Kk ia taken in strecher to room and su rushes to doc.

Su: doc ,main kk ko yahan le kar aaya hoon. aap jaldi chaliye.

Doc: chalo.

Doc reaches and cheks kk. Doc ask kk to realx and not to shout.

Su outside is worried.

Su: yeh kya ho gaya kk ko. bhagwan kare sab thik ho. bechari kitna sehti hain...
Doc comes out.

Su: kya hua kaisi hai kk?

Doc: Su, chinta karne ki koi bat nahin hai!!aisa aksar hota hai. Lekin haaan kk ko proper rest ki zaroorat hai. aur khata to bikul nahin...verna pressure badhega.

Su: bhagwan ka lakh lakh shukar hai ki everthing is fine.

Doc:tum kk ko ghar le ja sakte ho!!lekin uska khayal rakhna..

su: thik hai.

Su meets kk.su is scting kinda anhry

Kk: kya hua kya hua hai mujhe!!!tum aise kyun dekh rahe ho. kuch hua hai kya!!mera baccha to thik hai na and starts crying.

Su: arrey ro mat!!sab think hai!!main sirf acting kas raha tha. tun thik ho sirf aaram karna hai tumhe!!think chalo ab ghar chale.

kk: tumne to mer jann hi nikal di thi!!!

su-kk reach home.

Kumkum is sitting on the bed as Sumit isn't even letting her to put her feet on the floor... 😳

She's again craving for something sor and spicy.... 😳 Sumit comes from the bathroom and checks his mobile phone..

KK:Sumit...?.. 😳

Su:Hmm.... 😳

KK:Sumit..kuch maangun toh doge na?..

Su:Ye koi poochne waali baat hai??...maango baba..

KK:Khatta...kuch khatta khaane ka mann kar raha hai... 😳

Sumit gets alarmed, remembering what doctor had said... 😳

Su:Kk..i am sorry..par..Dr. ne khatte ke liye strictly mana kiya hai...tumhaara BP badh jayega aise...

KK:Thoda sa bhi nahin?... 😳

Su:Shorry...

She makes a sad face and he hugs her ...

Su:Aww...meri princess udaas ho gayi?..

She hides her face in his neck... 😳
😳 😳

awwwwww so sweet of sumit and kumkum

Hey thoda sa main bhi likhti hunnnn 😳 😛

Kk luks at him,

Kk : Kya Sumit... aise to bada kehte ho ki main tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun.... aur itna sa nahi kar sakte mere liyeee..

Su (caressing her hair) : Of course kuch bhi kar sakta hun... par wo jo tumahre liye achcha ho... tumhe kuch nuksaan pohunchaaye..wo main nahi karunga... aur na tumhe karne dunga... 😉 😳

Kk : Theek hai jao.... jao apne kam se...

Su : Kaam? 😕

Kk : Kisi bhi kaam se.... mere paas kyun baithe ho? 😳

Su : Hmm.... itna gussa.... 😉

Kumkum doesn't speak anything...

Su : To main jaon? 😳

She is still quiet...

Su : Pakka jaon? 😉

No reply....

Su : Soch lo..... theek hai... jaata hun.... 😳 😉

He gets up but Kumkum holds his hand...

He smiles and then turns.

Su : Kya hua ?.... tumhi to keh rahi thi... ki main jaon... 😉

Kk : Maine kaha aur tum chal diye...

Sumit sits near her,

Su : Main tumhari baat nahi maanta to gussa.... maan jaata hun... to bhi gussa... 😆 😆 Kya karun tumhari khushi ke liye??? 😳

Kumkum luks at him, for sometime,

Su : Aise kya dekh rahi ho?

Kumkum hugs him, Sumit too hugs her back, smiling....

Kk : Bas hamesha mere paas raho.... saath raho 😳 😳

Su : Wo to main hun hi hameshaaa 😳

ok i will cont thodha

su lies on kk lap fr sometime 😳 and they keep on talking sudenly dhruv wakes up and comes near sukk cryieng 😭
kk:kya huva dhruv beta
dh:mujha darr lugh raha hii 😭
su:why beta kya huva
dh is still cryieng and kk takes her in his lap and pacify saying ki mera beta bahout strong hii like superman 😛
dhr:mumma mujha appka mas sona hii
su:nahi beta mumma ko sona do beta she is not feeling well chalo i will make u sleep 😳
bt dhr dosnt agree and kk ask him to come and sleep with him and takes him in his lap and puts her to sleep
bt dhr ask fr story and kk starts saying the story and soon dhruv falls asleep holding kk hands
su was just looking at them 😳

cont now

great one
ill write a small part
tell me how is it
i am writting for the first time


su looks at kk and dhruv both looked so adorable together
he comes towards them and takes dhruv from kks lap kk looks at him and smiles
su-abhi meri doosri baby ke soone ka time hai
kk smiles and giggles
su puts dhruv on one side and puts pillow next to him so tht he doesnt fall he comes towards kk and makes her lie down he comes next to her and kk at once comes in his arms and keeps her head on his chest su smiles and switches the lights off
kk and su stay awake for sometime both cant sleep both are thinking abt their new bundle of joy both at one time put their hand on kks stomach both looks at each other and smile
su--kk
kk--hmmm
su--tum ab tak jag rahi ho
kk--tum bhi toh jag rahe ho
su--ha main hamari beti ke bare mein soch raha tha
kk--main bhi
su--i love u kk tum ne mujhe zindagi mein sab kuch diya hai thank u
kk-- su tum bhi naa thanks kyun bol rahe ho maine jo bhi kiya tumhare saath ke saath kiya main akele kuch nahi kar sakti thi agar tum mere saath nahi hote i love u too main tumse bahot pyaar karti ho
su kisses kk on her forehead and says -kk main tumhaare bina jee nahi sakta jine k ebare mein soch bhi nahi sakta
kk--main bhi
both smile at each other and hold hads kk and su looks at dhruv who is fastt asleep and smile and then go to sleep in each others arms

awesome parts ... 😉 ...i luv this... 😳 may i cont.next??..i know koi mana nahin karega ...fank U... 😳

At 4:00Am

Sumit feels someone pulling his kurta... 😕 He opens his eyes and finds Kumkum trying to wake him up... 😕 He sits back, and luks at her...She has been crying...He hugs her instantly... 😳

Kk:Tabiyat theek nahin hai...(crying)

He caressed her hair concernedly...

Su:Kya hua?..ro mat kk..batao...kya pareshaani hai... 😳

Kk:Nausea...vomitting-like feel kar rahi hun... 😭

Su:Chalo...get freshened up..theek lagegaa...

Kk:(crying)..dhruv so raha hai...uth jayega... 😭

Sumit luks at him... 😳

Su:Accha..chalo..mere saath aao..

He takes her to Dhruv's room..entering which, she starts crying loudly... 😭

i know it was short..nothing was there in my head... 😆