Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity - Page 17

wowieee lovelyy try Preethi n Rahila 😛

ok my turn now....start with the present track...

KK is crying over the whole event...sh-siya marriage..n dhruv-antra union...n the unorn kid...

Sumit enters the room...in anger...kk looks at him...

KK(in tears)-ye..kya ho gaya sumit?..ye sab...

Su-bas karo ab tum...

KK-main?...

Su-sab tumne hi kiya hai...ab tum kyun pareshaan ho...jo tum chahti thi wo hi to hua na kk?...

KK-sum?...ye ...kya keh rahe ho tum?...sumit main?...

Su-haan..yeh hi chahti thi na kk?...dhruv sia ki shaadi na ho?...woh antra ke saath wapas rishta banaye...dekh liya tumne...antra ko waapas laane ka anjaam?....

KK-sumit?...main ye chahti thi ki om ki zindagi mein koi takleef na ho...sumit main us bacche ke baare mein soch rahi thi...sumit maine...

Su-kk...SHUT UP NOW....tumne aaj...eksaath paanch zindagiyon ko khatm kar diya kk...aur main kabhi tumhe maaf nahin karoonga...na main..na tumhaare bacche...na bhagwaan kk...shaayad hamara rishtaa...bahut kamzor ho chuka hai kk...bahut kamzor...

KK-sumit...sumit...suno..sumit meri baat...

But he leaves in anger....

KK cries hysterically....

Kk-ek maa...apne bacchon ki zindaggi mita degi?..maine barbaad kiya sabkuch...

She thinks about all the recnt happenings...she's trubled n hurt...

She feels dizzy n faints all of a sudden....

sumit spends the entire night thinking about his chindren...sitting on the swing....

Veena comes rushing to him...

Veena-sumit...beta jaldi chalo..kk behosh hai...

Su-kya?..kk?..kya hua?>..

Veena-sumit...jaldi chal...

He enters his room n finds kk being surrounded by children n elders...

Su-kya hua kk ko?.....

veena-su ye jal rahi hai bukhar se abhi.....

sh-paa bukhaar kabse tha maa ko?.....

su-pata nahin.......

will cont later...

HeY guys...its a request...pls cont frm this...i wanna see...what diff pepl can think...pls

no one?...dissapointing guys...i m starting..pls finish it ... ...

Su is clueless...

Su-mujhe...mujhe nahin pata...iss baarey mein...

Veena-sumit?..raat ko kaisi thi?...sumit kabse behosh hai wo?...

Sumit-pata nahin maa...shaayad raat se hi ...

Dadaji-shaayad raat se?...sumit tumne usse kuch poocha hi nahin?...use dekha bhi nahin?...saari raat woh bechari aisi haalat mein rahi aur tune...

Su-main bacchon ko lekar pareshaan raha...hum mein jhagda hua tha....

Dhruv n sharman-paa...hum maa ko lekar pareshaan they....

Sharman-sia jaisi hai...waise hi maa ki bhi haalat hai abhi....

Kumkum is still unconscious....

Kul-jhagadne se accha hai...dr ko call kiya jaye...

Dhruv-main karta hoon...

great jj.
i dont want to think abt this situ now 😭 😭

great
i hope this happens then su will know the importance of kk

ok but i hope this happens.
su:mujha nahi path kab sa
dadji:su thum ya kya kha raho?
meanwhile doct comes and checks kk.
su:kk kya huva dr
dr:i think she is in any mental stress wht?
su:Dr he hesitates bt and finally says yes.
dr:if she takes any tension now it would be dangerous she may go into coma as now she is in semi con state
dadi:ha bagvan 😭
veena:saab ya antra ka wajha sa 😡
kul:veena shut up this is not right time to speak 😆
dr:tell me wheather before she had memory loss
su:ha dr 😭
dr:it is more difficult
dadji:tell the truth the dr
dr:if she dosnt gain cons till morning it would be more dangerous to her life.she might die or forget her momery or go into coma 😭
su:nahi meri kk ko kuch nahi ho sakta 😭 .
dr leaves and dadi tells meri kk will be alright dont worry.
su says he will take care of kk and ask everyone to leave k.
su cryieng 😭 😭 😭
su:ithni badi saza mud ho mujha 😭
pls open your eyes.i sorry i blamed you.wht can do u 😭 😭 .
yr the one whr i can shout and talk becouse i love you dammed open yr. 😭
open yr eveys kk i cannt leave without pls.pls kk open 😭 😭 .
he cont cryieng 😭 😭

thanx preethi...its was awesum... 😳

now i'll cont.

Su-kk...pls...for my sake...ankhein khol do..bas ek baar kk.....

He holds her hand and cries....suddenly she moves a little...sumit is ecstatic..

kk-..(very faintly)...sumit..sumit..bula do...sumit...ko..

Su-haan kk...aankhein kholo...dekho sumit hai yahaan...kk...

KK(closes her eyes and cries)-...maine...apne bacchon...sumit...jaan boojhkar nahin kiya....main bahut pyaar karti hoon...sumit tum..sumit maine...

SU(cries)-nahin kk....

He wipes her tears and asks her to relax...

Su-tum ab kuch mat socho kk...sab thik hai..ok?...

He puts her to sleep and goes outside to call he dr....

Su-dr....wo hosh mein aa gayi...lekin injection ke baad bhi bukhaar nahin utra....

DR-i'll see....wai8...

Dr. check her up as she lies..pale n hot due to illness...

Su-dr...is she ok now???

DR-aap pls ek min. bahar aayiye...

All members look at him...

Su-ji...

Outside-

DR.-symptoms meningitis ke hain....abhi unki haalat nazuk hai...bahut khayaal rakhna hoga...bukhaar badhna unke liy bahut khatarnaak ho sakta hai..maine pehle bhi kahaa tha na...wo yaa to coma mein chali jayengi ya....

Su-nahin...main kuch nahin hone doonga aur kk...

Suddenly he turns to find sia hearing all this and crying........Sumi goes to her and hugs her...

Su-sia beta...ro mat...

Sia-auntie?...kya ho raha hai ye sab...agar auntie ko kuch hua to ....uncle...

su-main hhon na...hum sab hain...kuch nahin hoga hamari kk ko...

Sia-main..main kuch nahin hone doongi unhein...uncle...main pattiyaan rakhoongi...

Sumit-aao sia...

They enter the room....

Kul-sumit kya hua?.....

Sumit and sia look at each other...