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Posted: 17 years ago
exactly rahila.....i agree..with henna.....i know u all can write..ab sukk fan hain.......to romance to sabme hoga 😳 😆 😆 .....so cmon bachcha log what are u waiting for....begin the writing..... 😃 😃

right henna....???? 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
chalo I've got some free time so lemme give it a try! 😉

SuKk are having a romantic dinner at one of the restaurants & there's some background music playing.As it's quite late at night,there's only one other couple in the hotel & they are so into each other that they're not even noticing SuKk there! 😆

Su: aaaaaah it feels so good to get away from the family & kids & have u all to myself
KK: Sumiiiiiit!aren't u worried abt the kids???u know that Sharman-Aashka are only 2 yrs old & shouldn't be left alone *frowns*
SU: Aap jab muskurati hai,tho aisa lagta hai ke mere aakhon ki roshni aur bhi bar jaati hai 😳
KK: going 😳 😳 😳 Sumit tum bhi na!
SU: arrey why are u going all tamatar jaise red?? 😆 am just saying the truth from the bottom of my heart 😉
KK: Sumit ab shayari bayari chhoro...eat fast so we can go home *starting to eat with her spoon*
SU: *takes her hand,puts down the spoon & pulls her up* chalo dance karte hai
KK: Sumit....lekin...dance...khana...
SU: Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh *puts a finger to her lips* Kumkum tum baatein bahut karti ho! 😆
He pulls her onto the centre of the room & takes her into his arms....they slow dance,eyes locked into each other
SU: Kumkum tumhe pata hai I'm the luckiest guy on this earth because ur with me *kisses KK on her forehead*
KK: Sumit yeh dialogue to mera tha!! 😆
SU: kya Kumkum main itna seriously romantic mood main hoon aur tum mazaak kar rahi ho 😡
KK: achha baba sorry...but truly I'm the luckiest girl too
SU: *smiles & hugs her tightly* I love u Kumkum
KK: I love u 2,3,4 Sumit! 😃
The music comes to an end & they go back to have dinner, then leave for home!
Rah_HuJu thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
no comments??? 😭 It's my first try yaar!
preethi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
rahi it is very good 👏 👏 nice dance must 😛 .
cont k
Jungli Billi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww hey rahila..

sorry ain't around much...

jus read it... was really good yaar 👏 👏 👏

well done 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
yawwwww...cont soon na...pls sumone write
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Posted: 17 years ago
k let me continue.

it is early morning and a lady(veena) enters a room and tries to wake up his son.
veena:uto beta subha hogayi.
boy:mama thodhi our dhar sona hii pls 5 mints more 😆 .
veena keeps forcing him but in vain.then a small girl named kushi enters the room and says bhaya tho isa thodha uthanga.
she goes and switche on radio.
on the radio it playing good morning mumbia.
in radio the girl says good morning to mumbia people ya apki kumkum app logo ko bed ka upr say uthaka chayi phelana ka time hogya so sab log zaldhi s uth jao 😳 .
on hearing the voice the boy gets from bed as kushi switches off the radio.
boy:kushi thuna radio ky bandh kia?
ks:kya bhayia app bhi me radio nahi bandi kya kudh bandh hogya 😆 .
mar khayagi ab.
kushi: comen get up.
the boy gets up in anger mood .
kus:kya SUMIT bhayai app ithna gusa yilo app ka radio and appka kumkum 😳 😆 .
then she goes out.
here sumit is listening to songs played by kumkum and he keeps thinking about her 😳 .
how would she look and keep dreaming 😍 😍 about her when his father kul calls him.
su comes out of dreamland and keeps muttering ya papa bhi na.then he gets ready for the college almost thinking about kumkum.it repeats everyday 😳 😳 .finally he decided to go and meet her but bit scared how would he meet her.so he started sending messg and roses to her saying he is great fan of her.kumkum on seeing felt very impressed by the roses and letters and decided to call him to office and interview him.
when sumit enters the radio office but with little tension and kumkum on seeing su she feels something and her heart starts beating faster ❤️ ❤️ and keeps staring at him only and sumit also does the samething and this cont for few min till somebody calls kk.sukk feels little embarrassed 😳 .
kk int su and keeps looking at him only and finally the intr gets over.
su kk still keeps staring at each other 😳 😳 .
but some how kk comes out of her thoughts and su says bye and leaves 😛 .
kk thinks kya hogya mujha sumit ko dhakar.
su still thinking about kk she so beautiful 😳 😳 .
these goes for few monthes and sukk become close to each other tht they cannt leave without each other.
su dec he will tell kk that he loves her and kk also decide do tht and both call each other and ask to meet at the resturant.
su comes and keeps looking at watch after sometime kk comes wearing red colour dress looking damm hot 😳 .su just stares at her kk calls loudly his name.
kk:su kya huya issa kyu dhakra hoo mujha.
su:kk ur looking very sweet in this and hot.
kk feels bit shy and sukk look into the each other eyes.
and background slow music is playing and su ask for dance both dance and it started rainingand su goes down and ask kk will you marry me 😳 .
kk cannt belive what she heard 😊
kk:says i will
su:says kk I LOVE YOU.
KK:I LOVE YOU u su.
and both hug each other 🤗 🤗 .
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Posted: 17 years ago
oooh thx preethi,henna & JJ....

preethi sooooooooo cute yaar!!I can just imagine Juhi in a red dress....waise these are our only romantic goings-on for sometime now...serial main tho dono larne jagarne se baaz nahin aate 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
we cannt change in serial but we can imagine na 😭
Rah_HuJu thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
definitely!!my next attempt coming up soon! 😳

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