Mini FF's ...Come show-off ur creativity - Page 18

there we have something to dream of sumit kumkum together here.

Thanks all

pata nahin JJ kahan hai tho I'll continue 😉

KK - Sumit batau mujhe...kya baat hai...tum dono itne pareshaan kyun ho??ghar main kucch aur hogaya kya??

She tries to get up,but is so weak she just falls back onto the bed....Sumit & Siya come rushing to her...

SU - KK tum bhi kya kar rahi ho??kahan jaana hai is waqt??koi baat nahin hain koi pareshaani nahin hai....doctor ne kaha hai ke tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai...

SIYA - Auntie aap ne kaha tha na ke main aap ki parchhayee hoon tho aaj se aap ki saari zimedaarian main sambhalungi....aap plz aaram kijiye aur main pattiyan laati hoon...

On seeing Siya's dedication, tears come to KK's eyes & she beckons Siya, kisses her on her forehead & gives her aashirwaad.Siya goes out.

KK - Sumit maine zindagi main kuchh bahut achha kaam kiya hoga jho Siya jaise bahu mili....kaash ke Dhruv aur Siya ek hote......*starts crying again*

SU - KK ab jo hogaya so hogaya....taqdeer ka likha koi nahin badal sakta...hum dono saath hai tho hamare bachhon ko kabhi dukh ka saamna nahin karna parega....hum sambhalenge unhe....tum mera saath dogi?

He holds out his hand....KK looks at him with a mixture of emotions, then grasps his hand firmly....Su pulls her into his arms & hugs her tightly, with his own eyes flowing....

it was great abb meri bari.

su:kk wadha karo ki mujha kabhi isa chood kar nahi jaungi 😭 .
kk:jha su hii wahi kk rahangi 😳
su:now kk take rest i will get the med for u.
su goes and gets medc in meanwhile kk is tryieng to sleep bt she cannt.and she is feeling uneasy and like chaaker .when she was abt to get up and due to her weakness she falls down and su comes and holds .
su:kya kar rahi hia.
kk:su feeling like vomiting and chaaker sa are hai 😭
su:ur just weak onl just u take rest and make her to lie down again on the bed and sits beside her 😳 .
kk holds su hands and sleeps.after sometime kk slept su just keeps on crieying thinking tht she is resp of kk condition 😭 😭 .
meanwhile kk mermering ki su may na kuch nahi kya 😭 .
su just hear wht she is telling tells her tht u have done nothing wrong and ask her to sleep 😭 .
su just sits like tht looking at kk and night pass by 😭

eeesh I'll take a break from this rona-dhona & try a new dose of romance 😉

It's 7 p.m & KK is in the kitchen preparing dinner & humming to herself...Veena & Dadi are also doing their own things & smiling while listening to KK...

Veena: kya baat hai KK...aaj itna gungunaa rahi ho??

Dadi: arrey Veena tum bhi nahin samaj thi...aaj in dono ki anniversary hai na??

KK blushes & tries to hide her smile,but can't.

KK: Dadi aisi baat nahin hai...main tho bas yun hi...

Dadi: achha yun hi?????

They all burst out laughing.Sumit is about to walk in, but stops when he sees his mother & grandmother.He tries to get KK's attention.

Su: Tsssk Tsskk

Dadi: *looking around* yeh awaaz kaisi he?

Su hides behind the door & again tries to wave at KK. KK sees him & is shocked, then she looks at Dadi who's looking around in wonder.

KK: Dadi kuchh nahin hai....aap ke kaan baj rahe hai!! 😆

Dadi: KK main kya tumko behri yah paagal lag rahi hoon..maine kuchh suna...

KK looks at Su & makes a face....Su tells her in gestures to come out, she shakes her head....Su gets angry & tells her if she doesn't come out, he's gonna take Renuka 😉 KK sticks out her tongue at him & tells him it's ok...Su is shocked & pouts...Veena sees KK talking to someone & when she looks at the door, sees Su gesturing....she nods her head in realisation & then taps Dadi on the shoulder & points towards the door

Dadi: Achha!!!

Su & KK both jump & look guilty...Su's about to make a run when..

Dadi: ruk!!wahin ruk!!*looks at KK sternly* mere kaan baj rahe he?? 😆

KK: umm nahin Dadi....woh....main...

Veena & Dadi both start laughing.

Veena: KK tum jao...waise bhi Sumit tumhe kuchh kaam nahin karne dega

Su: yipee!!!chalo chalo KK...

KK: lekin mummyji...Dadi...main aap logo ko kaise akela chhod dun...kitna kaam hai...

Su: *takes KK's hand & pulls her* yeh log jab khud kehrahen hai ke jao tho tumhe kya problem hai??main kuchh nahin sununga...jaldi chalo tumhare liye surprise hai...

TO BE CONTINUED 😉

gr8 job rahila...will b waiting for next part!!

its a small part from me...

kumkum is in her cabin when sumit cumes to her..

Su-madam may i cum in??...

KK-sumit?...aaoo na..

Su-haan bolo bhai..aaj kahaan ghoomne chalenge???

KK-sumit...pehle batao 21 into 44??

Su-kyun????..ye sab kya hai....aur ye tum??

KK-sumit dhruv ke liye homework poora kar rahi hoon....

Su-office mein??..

KK-kya karoon???...abhi uske teachers se mil ke aayi to yahin shuru kar diya...

Su-uski tabiyat ke baare mein poocha ghar par?..

KK-haan...aaj bukhaar kam hai..

Su-thank god...ruko...i'll complete it..calculator use karo na kk..

KK-sumit...accha nahin lag raha hai aaj mujhe...

She sits back...

Su-hey?...tabiyat to thik hai na?..

KK-hmm baba..zyaada pareshaan mat ho tum ab..

Su-accha...chalo phir hum aaj icecream khaane chalenge...ok??

KK(smiles)-ok...

Su-hmm...ek dhruv aur uski mummy...dono na..

KK-dono kya sumit?..hmm?...bolo??

Su-wo..dono bahut cute hain...

KK(laughs)-bahut badmaash ho tum....

Su-sacchi??

KK-mucchi...

they laugh n complete dhruv's hw...


i'll cont later 😳

thx jj & preethi.....wow jj sweet!!...arrey yaar preethi thora sabar karo!!am gonna continue over the weekend....hopefully! 😉

preethi door kahan hai shuru bhi hogayi hai weekend!! 😆 😆

hi plz coninue soon.this weekend have started and i am waiting.

awwwwwwwwwww awesome....

u guys are so good... so creative...

great to see u ppl keeping this thread alive...

enjoy urselves writing... let ur imagination go wild... 😆