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thnks heena,reshu
anw ka liya app logo ko wait karna padaga 😆

Originally posted by: preethi

thnks heena,reshu
anw ka liya app logo ko wait karna padaga 😆

😲 tum mujhe jaisi... zalim kab se ban gayi?

😆 😆 😆

badla leh rahi ho for makin u wait in my ff? 😆

ahhhh sooo awesum preeti...ab jaldi se aage likho na 😳

Originally posted by: Henna042

😲 tum mujhe jaisi... zalim kab se ban gayi?

😆 😆 😆

badla leh rahi ho for makin u wait in my ff? 😆

aab jo thumra saath rahna sa usur tho padaga na😆😆

haa badla 😆😆ithna zo wait karana par😆

Hi Preethi,

Was waiting for your story for long. Thanks for this wonderful writeup. Its a great story and is eagerly waiting for your next part. Do write soon.

Takecare

Aditi

chalo again cont 😆
su asks for kk bieng friend.
kk:says yes and gives her hand forward 😛 .
su:skook hand and ek ajib sa phelinga laga.
kk says that they have to go bye and su was little upset tht she is going but covers with a sweet smile 😛 .
su:kash vho humasha mera saath rehthi tho 😳 .
days pass bye sukk become good friends.
one day su was waiting for kk but she did not turn up he was little upset and tensed why dint she come and goes and ask her friend priya ki kk kyu nahi ayi 😕
priya:says usa nahi path
su now gets even more tensed and keeps on loking at the door for but she didnt turn up.
as 2 day also passes and kk didnt turn up to college even her friend priya also dint come.
now su becoming restless he all the day sad all his friend wht is matter but he didnt say anything finally he ask whether any body is having kk phone no and everyone why her no
su:makes some story and says bass isa hii kyuki vho do din sa college nahi ayi na islya.
all his friends understand wht he is saying to make him smil one o his friend ask
friend says:jaab hum kabhi na aya tho u was like this
su:says app our kk alag hii 😳
all friend says kya 😕 .
su:chodna is baath ko
then tht day he was not able to eat sleep do anything.
next day priya comes to college and he ask her where is kk
priya: says ki kk tabyat kuch thik nahi hii so she didnt come to college
su gets tensed and ask abb kisi hii
priya:says she is feeling much better.
su ask for kk phone no and priya gives her the no
su imm calls her up
kk:hello
su:hello (little smile appears on his face)
kk:who is this
su:says it is me su
k:suprised su how come u called up
su:i came to know u was not feeling well so i asked for u no from priya.
now how r u feeling now
kk:says much better
there conversation goes nearly for an hour
su:ask kk r u comming tomm
kk:may be i might come
kk tells bye now it is late night.
su:dosnt wanted to hang up but says bye kk
kk:bye
su:also bye
this bye was lasted for half hour finally they hanged up.
next day mor su comes to college little happy his friends thinks isa kya hogya
finally kk come on seeing her a bright 100 watts smile appers on su face 😃 😛
su goes near and ask :abb how r u feelin
kk:much better
and days passes by sukk becomes very close frinds and finally thr college is going for an excurtion to ooty
everyone r happy but kk is nt happy su notice this and ask her wht is reason .
kk:says her father wont allow
but su ask why
kk:i just now recovered from viral fever and my father wont allow me
su says he and everyone would ask u dady for permission
kk says ok
su goes to kk house to talk to his father.
su speaks to his father mihir
mihir dosnt say anything 😕

wht could be mihirs reaction wheather he would say yes or no just wait and watch 😆 😆

Its valentines day 14Feb and sumit kumkum are in college..both are very good friends of each other and both have a soft corner for each other but they fear to tell it out,but one of sumit's friend tells him to tell out his feels at least on this day and tells that kumkum will not say a now,but still sumit's hesitate but says a yes..

At the same times in another part of the college kumkum friends tease her that today something special is gonna come her way she blushes and hides her face.then one of her friend tells her to tell out her feeling to sumit but kumkum say no thinking that what if he reject me,but all her friends force her and so finally kumkum too agrees

Both kumkum sumit go with their respected friends to the hallmark shop to buy a card,both looking at cards but nothing coming to their mind suddenly both of them see a very beautiful card red in color with hearts etc, and so both go to get it at the same time both just when they are about to get the card kumkum friend takes it and sumit kumkum are left holding each other hand..Both notice this and feel a little different but surprise

Sumit:<Thinking to himself> How come kumkum is here she told me she does not like coming to cards shops and all?
Kumkum:<Thinking to herself>What is he doing here?..Maybe must have come with his friends
Sumit:Kumkum what are you doing here?
Kumkum:Nothing just seeing cards actually planning to give someone😳
Sumit:<Having a little confused look>Someone?
Kumkum:Haan why?
Sumit:No just i though you dont like coming here na thats why
Kumkum:Ohhh..but how come you are here?Planning to give a card to someone?
Sumit:kumkum tum bhi na
Both have a laugh
Kumkum:Ok sumit seriously tell you giving a card to someone special?
Sumit:<looking at kumkum> Haan
Kumkum:Wow what is her name?
Sumit:<Telling him self>Its you
Kumkum:Sumit tell na
Sumit:You will know very soon
Sumit:Ok kumkum i will see you later bye
Kumkum:Ok bye

Both leave in different direction but keep turning to see the other one..

Its evening time and both sumit kumkum friends are with there love one..Sumit telling him self when will i be able to give the card to her..and just then kumkum comes sumit all smiling and very happy both walking towards each other when suddenly sumit falls and his card gets all dirty in the mud..

Sumit is all so sad, kumkum tells him not to feel sad if he loves the gal a lot he does not need a card to express his love.Listening to this sumit jump up and hug kumkum and thanks her and runs off somewhere,Kumkum not knowing what happen to him suddenly start laughing and goes home,but just when she so about to go she remembers that she had to give sumit the card and so tries calling him but sumit phone is switch off so kumkum feels a little sad but goes home..

Later in the evening around 7:00 kumkum is with her friends all trying to cheer her up but in vein,just then kumkum phone rings and one of kumkum friends tells its sumit kumkum jumps up and grabs the phone and runs out..
Kumkum:Hello
Sumit:Kumkum meet me at the place where we always meet
Kumkum:but what is the matter
Sumit:just come
Kumkum Ok i will be there in 10 mins

Kumkum goes up to her friends and tells them she is going to meet sumit ....

After 10mins kumkum arrives its is all so very dark kumkum calls out sumit name and just then one light focuses on her then she call out his name again and all the lights switch on ..Kumkum is all so surprise the whole room is filled with roses in the center of the floor there is a big heart shape made out of roses,kumkum is just shock she keeps looks round and finally finds sumit standing in black suit.<looking very handsome>
Kumkum:Sumit what is all this?
Sumit:Shhhh

Kumkum this is for you..kumkum opens it and its a beautiful red dress..kumkum is all so happy but still not understanding what is going on

Sumit:kumkum go and change into this dress

Kumkum goes and after a little while comes out she is wearing a short red dress looking extremely beautiful,sumit just keeps on looking at her...

Kumkum:sumit i am not getting anything what is going on ?

Sumit takes kumkum hands and goes down on one knee and proposes to her

Sumit:Kumkum will you be my valentine for today and always ..I promise to love you always to always be by your side never let you cry and always keeping you smiling..I LOVE YOU KUMKUM👏👏👏

Kumkum is all crying she is so surprise but so happy she to goes down one her knees and tells
Kumkum:Sumit i love you too

Both look at each other and give a very tight hug...😳...

Later sumit ties a black cloth on kumkum eyes and takes her some where..When the reach the place he unties her and then slowly tells her to open her eyes

Kumkum is surprise all over again.. She finds on the floors written
I LOVE YOU KUMKUM ME MIND 4 EVA
kumkum is all crying and hugs sumit again .. both go in the middle of where sumit has written all this and cut a small heart shape cake written I LOVE YOU again ..both holding each others hand and cut the cake..sumit takes a pieces and feeds it to kumkum..kumkum takes a pieces and feeds it to sumit but puts the rest of the cake in her hand on his face...

Both start running and sumit finally caught hold of kumkum and tell

Sumit:Where do you think you are running now
Kumkum:sumit please leave we
Sumit i will leave you only in one condition
Kumkum:What
Sumit you will clean and take out all this cake from my face
Kumkum:Bas ok but first close your eyes
Sumit:how what is there in this that i should close my eyes
Kumkum:Bas you close
Sumit :OK

Kumkum goes closer to sumit and takes out the cake by the mouth and kisses him on the cheek..Sumit cant believe what he just got and so opens his eyes and kumkum is all blushing..
Sumit:kumkum what was this?
Kumkum:Nothing why you like it ?
Sumit:Haan a lot
Kumkum:Want one more:
Sumit:Sure

Kumkum hits him playfully..Sumit pulls kumkum closer to him and both looking into each others eyes and have a very romantic dance...Both lost in each other that they dont even remember that they have to go home then after sometime kumkum phone rings and it is her friend asking where she is ?Kumkum suddenly remembers she has to go back..and so tells sumit that they must go sumit a little sad but agrees just when kumkum is about to take a step sumit pulls her back
Kumkum:What happen:
Sumit nods saying nothing just wanted to look at you one more time..
Kumkum:All 😳

Sumit lifts kumkum up in his arms and takes her out and both going towards kumkum places..kumkum hugging sumit on the bike and both having a wonderful time.....

THE END

awww shabu.. dat was so so so so cuteeee... 😆

had me smiling al the way thru...

👏 👏 👏

(sorry didnt notice ur write up b4.. forgot all about this thread ☺️)

Originally posted by: preethi

chalo again cont 😆
su asks for kk bieng friend.
kk:says yes and gives her hand forward 😛 .
su:skook hand and ek ajib sa phelinga laga.
kk says that they have to go bye and su was little upset tht she is going but covers with a sweet smile 😛 .
su:kash vho humasha mera saath rehthi tho 😳 .
days pass bye sukk become good friends.
one day su was waiting for kk but she did not turn up he was little upset and tensed why dint she come and goes and ask her friend priya ki kk kyu nahi ayi 😕
priya:says usa nahi path
su now gets even more tensed and keeps on loking at the door for but she didnt turn up.
as 2 day also passes and kk didnt turn up to college even her friend priya also dint come.
now su becoming restless he all the day sad all his friend wht is matter but he didnt say anything finally he ask whether any body is having kk phone no and everyone why her no
su:makes some story and says bass isa hii kyuki vho do din sa college nahi ayi na islya.
all his friends understand wht he is saying to make him smil one o his friend ask
friend says:jaab hum kabhi na aya tho u was like this
su:says app our kk alag hii 😳
all friend says kya 😕 .
su:chodna is baath ko
then tht day he was not able to eat sleep do anything.
next day priya comes to college and he ask her where is kk
priya: says ki kk tabyat kuch thik nahi hii so she didnt come to college
su gets tensed and ask abb kisi hii
priya:says she is feeling much better.
su ask for kk phone no and priya gives her the no
su imm calls her up
kk:hello
su:hello (little smile appears on his face)
kk:who is this
su:says it is me su
k:suprised su how come u called up
su:i came to know u was not feeling well so i asked for u no from priya.
now how r u feeling now
kk:says much better
there conversation goes nearly for an hour
su:ask kk r u comming tomm
kk:may be i might come
kk tells bye now it is late night.
su:dosnt wanted to hang up but says bye kk
kk:bye
su:also bye
this bye was lasted for half hour finally they hanged up.
next day mor su comes to college little happy his friends thinks isa kya hogya
finally kk come on seeing her a bright 100 watts smile appers on su face 😃 😛
su goes near and ask :abb how r u feelin
kk:much better
and days passes by sukk becomes very close frinds and finally thr college is going for an excurtion to ooty
everyone r happy but kk is nt happy su notice this and ask her wht is reason .
kk:says her father wont allow
but su ask why
kk:i just now recovered from viral fever and my father wont allow me
su says he and everyone would ask u dady for permission
kk says ok
su goes to kk house to talk to his father.
su speaks to his father mihir
mihir dosnt say anything 😕

wht could be mihirs reaction wheather he would say yes or no just wait and watch 😆 😆

preethi.. ab kya kahun.. amazing amazing effort 👏 👏

ab tell us fast mihir ka reaction 😉

wow shabu soooooo cute!!u've got amazing imagination guys!