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Sumit: Kumkum tum mujhe itni acchi tarah kaise janati ho?
Kumkum: Kyu tumhe isse pareshaani hai.
Sumit: Nahi mujhe bahut accha lagta hai yeh sochke, but at the same time I am surprised also.
Kumkum: Smiles.......


They have got a music system also and while they are chit chatting eating a wonderful music is playing at the back,

Jab koi baat bigad jaaye , jab koi mushkil jab aaye, tum dena saath mera, o hum nafasz.

Sumit: Chalo dance karte hai.
Kumkum: Pagal ho gaye ho kya, lagta hai sir per choth ka asar hua hai zaroor.
Sumit: Pleaseeeeeee.
Kumkum: Accha

They start dancing holding eachother. Sumit remembers the times how Kumkum has stood with her in thick and thin.

Kumkum is thinking how much she loves him but has never got guts to tell him and may be would never have.

Suddenly Sumit eyes gets wet and he sees Kumkum and she looks back wondering what happened and before she could ask anything Sumit bring her close and hugssssss her tightly.

They remain like this till the song ends and then Kumkum ask
Kumkum: Sumit kya hua?
Sumit: Tum mat jaaooo. I need you.
Kumkum: Tum pareshaan mat ho sab accha hoga.
Sumit: Kumkum please mat jaao and brings her close to him.
Kumkum: Looks at him and kisses him on his forehead and says ok I am not going anywhwere, you relaxe.
Sumit keeps holding her.

That night Sumit has a dream and he sees Kumkum. When he gets up he feels why he is thinking about Kumkum sooo much, why he misses her when she leaves and feels soo good when she is around. He never felt like this with anyone.

That night they have to go to a friends birthday party. They both go and Kumkum is looking great in an evening gown. Sumit keep seeing her.
Sumit: Tum itni khoobsurat lag rahi ho aaj ki mera mann kar raha hai ki sirf tumko dekho.
Kumkum: Laughs!!! Aaj yeh karishma kaise hua, mera dost meri taarif kar raha, jisse mein hamesha ajeeb si lagti thi.
She laughs and goes and meet other people in the party. Then the dance start and Kumkum is dancing with someone. Sumit doesn't feel good. He wants to dance with Kumkum.

When he sees Kumkum is not dancing he rushes towards her before anyone else ask her.

And then they are dancing on a slow music. For the first time Sumeet feels something different when he holds and touches Kumkum. He himself doesn't know whats happening.

Slowly they are in eachothers arm. Sumit loves her fragrance and looks at Kumkum and quietly says Kumkum come out in the lawn.
She follows him.

Sumit: Can you explain me kya ho raha hai mujhe.
Kumkum: Perplexed kya ho raha hai tumhe.
Sumit: Tum toh mujhe janati ho na then tell me
Kumkum: Mujhe nahi samajh araha hai kya ho raha hai tumhe.
Sumit: Jab tum paas rehti ho toh accha lagata hai , tumse baat karma accha lagta hai, tum mera dhyan rakhti ho woh accha lagta hai. Par yeh sochke kit um chali jaaongi ajeeb sa hota hai mann aur mann karta hai ki tumhe apne se door nahi jaane do.
Kumkum: Shocked and is just listening but doesn't know what to say.
Sumit: Kumkum please meri madat karo, mujhe kuch samajh nahi arahaa hai

And then he becomes silent and after a pause he says
Kumkum tumko pata hai mera kya mann hota hai. Kumkum is still, she doesn't know what to say. Mera mann hota hai main tumhare paas aao and he come near Kumkum. Tumahare baalon se khelon, tumhare kaano ki baaliyon ko choo. Tumhare maate ko choomo. And all this while whatever he is saying he is doing that. Kumkum is still.

Aur mera mann karta hai tumhe apne se door nahi jaane doo, tumhe apne paas rakh loo. He hold her hand kisses it and then says Kumkum I LOVE YOU.

Kumkum looks up and tears start dropping and she is about say something when Sumit seals her lips with his.

After a while Kumkum tells her story that for the very beginning she is loving him but just couldn't say and that's why she left.

Kumkum: Sumit main bhi tumse bahut pyar karti hun aaj nahi kabse , ab toh shayad mujhe bhi yaad nahi ki kabse. Main tumhare baiger reh nahi sakti. And is crying uncontrollably.
Sumit holds her face, kisses where tears are dropping and kisses both her cheeks and smiles and hugs her and both hug eachother.

Recap: Kumkum: Sumit main bhi tumse bahut pyar karti hun aaj nahi kabse , ab toh shayad mujhe bhi yaad nahi ki kabse. Main tumhare baiger reh nahi sakti. And is crying uncontrollably.
Sumit holds her face, kisses where tears are dropping and kisses both her cheeks and smiles and hugs her and both hug eachother.


Sumit says to Kumkum
Sumit: Kumkum mujhse shaadi karogi. Main tumko bahut khush rakhoga.
Kumkum: Still in tears. Pagaal kahin ke
Sumit: Main tumko shaadi ke liye keh raha hoon aur tum mujhe pagal ke rahi ho
Kumkum: Smiles,, yeh sunk eke liye mein kabse intezaar kar rahi aur tum ab bole.
Sumit: Smiles , ab jab samajh aya toh turant bol diya. Maine bahut time waste kiya hai ab aur nahi.

It's the happiest moment of there life. Sumit goes with Kumkum to her place and talks to her Parents. At first they are reluctant, but then when they see the sincerity in Sumit's eyes and how much there daughter loves him they agree.

And the great moment comes up when both of them are married and they live happy ever after.

it was great aditi 👏 👏 👏 .
i would come with mine def by tomm

it was jus awesome aditi! 👏

really...a fantastic write up 😊

great going!

Thanks Henna. But thank you inturn for starting such a wonderful thread. Great idea.

wowieeee aditi ths ws sooooo sooo sweet n fantastic 😳 😳 😳

i remember u hd ritten in d fan fic bfore also...u rite reli well 😳

enjoyed reading d whole sory...do rite more scenes 😳

Thanks Anku, you guys have inspired me to wirte this story.

ok her my story

at the traffic junction a blue car comes and stop in that a handsome guy is there and his name is sumit.
at the same time a red scooty comes and stop at the signal a beautiful girl is there her name is kumkum.
su was just looking here there as he was getting late for college same with kumkum.suddenly he see kk and just stares at her 😛 .
green light comes kumkum goes away from there and su tries to follow her but he cannt find her .
he reaches the college where he meet his friends and still thinking about that girl which he has seen.
he is not able to listen the class al the time he keeps thinking about her.in his mind he sings this song
ek ladhki ko dhaka tho asa ligajisa jisa
suddenly a new girl enterce the class and she sits in first bench .
after class get finished all pls r decided to go canteen but sumit is lost in his own thoughts 😳 😳 😳
fis fr:su kya ho is chup kuy hii?
su:kuch nah baas isa hi
fr:chall canteen chalta
su unwillingly agrees to go on the other hand kk makes few friends one of her friend is su friend also.
they reach cant but su stops in the middle as he sudd saw the red scooty so he thinks tht girl is in this college itself a smile apers on his face 😛 😛
but search the whole college but cannt fiend her so goes back to canteen suddenly he sees girl(kk)thr and he thinks ya tho ya hii our maa sara college chan mara.
he is about to go near her one of the friends just call him and he has to go thr and one the friend introduce kk to all 😛 .
su thinks just keep staring at her 😳
fr:su ya kk hii
kk ya su hii
so su kk meet each other 😛
su gives his hand and say hii kk
kk says hii
after somtime
su:ask kk will u be my friend

wht would kk anw 😛 just see 😛
how it is pls comment 😛

😍 ab answer kya hai yeh bhi to bata do na...

😆 😆

great going preethi 👏 👏 👏

Preethi answer fatafat.. 😆

And aditi great write ups..keep going on 👏