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Posted: 18 years ago
i will come with mine a little later 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shabzz123

i will come with mine a little later 😊

haan plz do...

aur woh shabu kya kehti hai.....ermmm πŸ˜•..... haaan 😈

make it romantic... super duper romantic... πŸ˜†

haan ab likh k bata na wat u mean....😈

main bhi to dekhun if am getting it right!

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Posted: 18 years ago
hii make it a super duper romantic which i can read and again get lost in my dreams πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
haha see resh loadzz of demand now
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Posted: 18 years ago
uff shabu u all will write kab then? πŸ˜†

better u write it, I will also write bt I have to come and think of some super solid scene naa... πŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi All,

Your Great mesmerising stories has inspired me to write my story, which is so small in front of all of you but still. I hope you will like it.

Sumit (he does not have any family,his family is his friends)Kumkum are in a College. They are good friends and hangs around in the group. Kumkum loves Sumit but Sumit likes another girl in the same group and Kumkum knows about this. She feels bad but then always prays to God that wherever Sumit's happiness lies he should go there. She always listens to him, advice him what to do or not etc.

It was Rose day in the college. Sumit buys a rose and wants to give to that girl, but is afraid. But Kumkum says you should tell her about your feelings before its too late. Though in her mind she says I am giving you this advice but I could never said you anything. But wont let you do the same mistake.

Sumit goes and gives the rose to that girl and she accepts it and she reciprocates the way Sumit feels. Both are very happy.

Slowly and slowly Sumit start to hang out more with that girl and very less time with Kumkum. Kumkum feels really bad but always pretends to be happy in front of them.

One day Kumkum is sitting where usually Sumit and Kumkum use to sit on top of a small hill at the back of there college. She is sitting and thinking about Sumit and decides she cant stay here anymore and hence decides to go somewhere else.

She tells to the whole group that she is leaving as she wants to be with her Parents. Everyone is shocked and sad, even Sumit. That night she does her packing and doesnt realise that its morning, hence she goes to the same hill and is sitting when she feels that someone has come and sat near to her and its Sumit.

Sumit: Why are you leaving?
Kumkum: I told you I want to be with my Parents.
Sumit: But we will miss you, anyways its only a year thats left here, why not complete and then go.
Kumkum: Jokingly says, tumlog ki adat ho jayengi toh ja nahi paaongi.
Sumit: But why such a sudden decision, you never told me.
Kumkum: Little irritated, tum milo toh batati na. You were soo busy.
Sumit: Why you saying like this.
Kumkum: Sorry Sumit, but its difficult for me to leave but I have to. And sorry what I said.
Sumit: Dont be sorry, I know I have not beem able to meet you for quiet sometime. But must thank you for bringing me and her together( lets name that girl Renuka). Will miss you.

He sees Kumkum eyes are wet and he holds her and they both hug eachother. Kumkum is sad as she is going away from the man she loved and Sumit is sad that her best friend is leaving.

Kumkum: Sumit I have to leave.
Sumit: I will come and see you off.
Kumkum:(Smiling)Dont worry I will go, I wont stay back.

Both laugh and Sumit says Shut Up.

They are at the station. Kumkum is controlling her tears and smiling, she cans ee that Sumit is sad. But thinks its good for both of them.

Kumkum: Apna aur Renuka ka khayal rakhna.
Sumit: Aur tum apna.

And then her train leaves both waving at eachother.

Sumit returns back and miss Kumkum alot. He wonders whats happening to him as he is feeling to cry. He meets Renuka .
Renuka: Hi Sumit. Did Kumkum left.
Sumit: Ya I went to see off her.
Renuka: Ok.... accha suno, I have to meet someone will give you a call and then lets meet. Takecare
Sumit: Ok bye ( still sad that Kumkum left).

On the other hand Kumkum is back with her family. Her parents are happy that she has come home, but her little sister feels that something is wrong. She keeps asking and finally Kumkum burst and starts crying uncontrollbly and tells everything to her. After she says everything, she feels little better.

Here Sumit comes to Renuka's place and then they go on a long drive on his bike. Suddenly a truck come and hits and both fall. Sumit is badly injured and Renuka also but not much. They are rushed to the hospital.

Doctor says Renuka is fine but has got some stiches. While Sumit has got some head injuries and they have to wait till he get concoiusness. Slowly Sumit gains conciousness and everyone is happy. Renuka looks after him but after a while she start getting bored. And after few days back she starts making excuses that she has some work here or there and thats why she cant come. Sumit is left all alone. One of his friends sends his news to Kumkum and on hearing this she comes running to him. Sumit feels really happy on seeing her. Kumkum sees Sumit and is just crying but could not say anything.

Sumit: Kumkummmmm... I am soo happy to see you. Thankful to God that you came.
Kumkum: Shut up Sumit, I told you to take care of yourself and yeh tumne apna khayal rakha. Main gayi ki tumne apna yeh haal kar liya.
Sumit: Sorry baba, actually main tumko miss kar raha tha toh socha bulane pe tum aaogi nahi par meri tabiyat ka sunke zaroor aaogi.
Kumkum: Chup. Aisi baat mat bolo. Even I missed you.
Sumit: I am soo happy to see you.
Kumkum: Renuka kaisi hai, suna usse bhi stiches aaye the.
Sumit: Haan she is fine.

Kumkum takes lot of care of Sumit. Day and Night. They talk,laugh and is enjoying eachothers company.

One night they are sitting and talking.....
Sumit: Tumne kabhi kisi ko pyar kiya hai Kumkum...
Kumkum: Surprised.. nahin abhi tak nahi, par kyu. Though it was difficult for her to say this.
Sumit: Nahi aise hi. You are soo caring so nice, lovable how could no one fell for you. I am just wondering.
Kumkum: (sad)Meri chodho apni batao, kab kar rahe ho tum dono shaadi.
Sumit: Dont know, havent talked to her parents nor they know about me.
Kumkum: Sab theekh ho jaayega, dont worry.
Sumit holds her hand and smiles.

But before this Sumit has to face a truth about himself..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
WoW nice part. Now what is the truth Sumeet has to face??? Cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap: One night they are sitting and talking.....
Sumit: Tumne kabhi kisi ko pyar kiya hai Kumkum...
Kumkum: Surprised.. nahin abhi tak nahi, par kyu. Though it was difficult for her to say this.
Sumit: Nahi aise hi. You are soo caring so nice, lovable how could no one fell for you. I am just wondering.
Kumkum: (sad)Meri chodho apni batao, kab kar rahe ho tum dono shaadi.
Sumit: Dont know, havent talked to her parents nor they know about me.
Kumkum: Sab theekh ho jaayega, dont worry.
Sumit holds her hand and smiles.

But before this Sumit has to face a truth about himself..........

Sumit has got a scar on his left cheek, and he doesn't know about this and his face really looks bad. With help of doctors and Kumkum, he quickly gets well and one day sees his face for the first time after the accident. And is shocked to see this. He screams.

Kumkum comes running and says Sumit don't worry. Sumit says what has happened, he looks different. Kumkum says he will be fine, there is a doctor who says Sumit's scar will go away but he has to be patient.

For Renuka one of these reasons were there to cut her self from Sumit. Kumkum comes and meet Renuka and tells her Sumit needs you.
Renuka: Kumkum I am sorry he is not that Sumit who I loved. He has changed.
Kumkum: Shocked! No he is same and he will be fine soon. He needs you.
Renuka: Sorry but I cant wait. Aise bhi I am going States for my further studies.
Kumkum: You cant do this.
Renuka: Tell Sumit that We wont meet any more. Our relationship has ended.
Kumkum: What are you saying, just because his face has a scar doesn't mean he has changed. He loves you. And he will get fine.
Reunka: Sorry.

Kumkum leaves Renuka's home and is shocked, don't know how she will tell this to Sumit.

She comes to hospital. Sumit waiting for Renuka. As he thought she will come with Kumkum. When he doesn't see her he asks
Sumit: Where is she?
Kumkum: (doesn't know what to say) Who mili nahi ghar pe. Main phir jaaongi. Tumne dawaai khayi.

Par tabhi there another friend says, Kumkum jhooth mat bolo. Tell Sumit what is truth.

Sumit: Sach!! Kya sach. Kumkum kya bol raha hai yeh?
Kumkum keeps quiet and is sad.

That friend tells Sumit everything that happened, how Renuka ended the relationship, how Kumkum tried to explain her but she didn't listen.

Sumit is in shock. Kumkum come near him and they look eachother. And she hugs him tightly.
Kumkum: Sumit sab theekh ho jaayega. Hum us doctor se milenge, tumhara ilaaj karayenge. You will be fine and then you both will be together.
Sumit still shocked.

Sumit's ka ilaaj shuru hota hai and after an year he becomes fine and gets back is charming charismatic face back. And all this while Kumkum was there for him.

Kumkum is soo happy to see him. She holds his hand and says now you can go and meet Renuka.

Sumit: Nahin Kumkum, main Renuka ko ab pyar nahi karta. Jo ladki mujhse nahi mere chehre se pyar karti thi woh kab tumhe chodhkar chali jaaye pata nahi. Hamara rishta khatam ho chukka hai.

Kumkum is just listening.

Sumit is now fit and fine and Kumkum tells him she has some work which she will finish and has to leave for home in a month.
Sumit: Tum chalo jaogi phir se. Thank you for being there Kumkum. Mujhe apne is bure waqt ko face karne ke liye kisi saathi ki zaroorat thi and I am glad that you were there with me.
Kumkum: Friends hote kis liye hai.

Sumit just looks at her and hugs her tightly. Even kumkum hugs him. They stand like this for long. After a while it starts raining and then they realize and get apart. Both little embarrassed.

Sumit: Toh tum ek mahine mein ja rahi ho. Can I ask you all the time of this one month for myself.
Kumkum: Kya…
Sumit: Please Kumkum
Kumkum: Smile, bilkul.

They go for partying, cinema, spend time talking. They are sitting at there fav spot that small hill and talking.

Sumit: Kumkum tum mujhe itni acchi tarah kaise janati ho?
Kumkum: Kyu tumhe isse pareshaani hai.
Sumit: Nahi mujhe bahut accha lagta hai yeh sochke, but at the same time I am surprised also.
Kumkum: Smiles.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap: One night they are sitting and talking.....
Sumit: Tumne kabhi kisi ko pyar kiya hai Kumkum...
Kumkum: Surprised.. nahin abhi tak nahi, par kyu. Though it was difficult for her to say this.
Sumit: Nahi aise hi. You are soo caring so nice, lovable how could no one fell for you. I am just wondering.
Kumkum: (sad)Meri chodho apni batao, kab kar rahe ho tum dono shaadi.
Sumit: Dont know, havent talked to her parents nor they know about me.
Kumkum: Sab theekh ho jaayega, dont worry.
Sumit holds her hand and smiles.

But before this Sumit has to face a truth about himself..........

Sumit has got a scar on his left cheek, and he doesn't know about this and his face really looks bad. With help of doctors and Kumkum, he quickly gets well and one day sees his face for the first time after the accident. And is shocked to see this. He screams.

Kumkum comes running and says Sumit don't worry. Sumit says what has happened, he looks different. Kumkum says he will be fine, there is a doctor who says Sumit's scar will go away but he has to be patient.

For Renuka one of these reasons were there to cut her self from Sumit. Kumkum comes and meet Renuka and tells her Sumit needs you.
Renuka: Kumkum I am sorry he is not that Sumit who I loved. He has changed.
Kumkum: Shocked! No he is same and he will be fine soon. He needs you.
Renuka: Sorry but I cant wait. Aise bhi I am going States for my further studies.
Kumkum: You cant do this.
Renuka: Tell Sumit that We wont meet any more. Our relationship has ended.
Kumkum: What are you saying, just because his face has a scar doesn't mean he has changed. He loves you. And he will get fine.
Reunka: Sorry.

Kumkum leaves Renuka's home and is shocked, don't know how she will tell this to Sumit.

She comes to hospital. Sumit waiting for Renuka. As he thought she will come with Kumkum. When he doesn't see her he asks
Sumit: Where is she?
Kumkum: (doesn't know what to say) Who mili nahi ghar pe. Main phir jaaongi. Tumne dawaai khayi.

Par tabhi there another friend says, Kumkum jhooth mat bolo. Tell Sumit what is truth.

Sumit: Sach!! Kya sach. Kumkum kya bol raha hai yeh?
Kumkum keeps quiet and is sad.

That friend tells Sumit everything that happened, how Renuka ended the relationship, how Kumkum tried to explain her but she didn't listen.

Sumit is in shock. Kumkum come near him and they look eachother. And she hugs him tightly.
Kumkum: Sumit sab theekh ho jaayega. Hum us doctor se milenge, tumhara ilaaj karayenge. You will be fine and then you both will be together.
Sumit still shocked.

Sumit's ka ilaaj shuru hota hai and after an year he becomes fine and gets back is charming charismatic face back. And all this while Kumkum was there for him.

Kumkum is soo happy to see him. She holds his hand and says now you can go and meet Renuka.

Sumit: Nahin Kumkum, main Renuka ko ab pyar nahi karta. Jo ladki mujhse nahi mere chehre se pyar karti thi woh kab tumhe chodhkar chali jaaye pata nahi. Hamara rishta khatam ho chukka hai.

Kumkum is just listening.

Sumit is now fit and fine and Kumkum tells him she has some work which she will finish and has to leave for home in a month.
Sumit: Tum chalo jaogi phir se. Thank you for being there Kumkum. Mujhe apne is bure waqt ko face karne ke liye kisi saathi ki zaroorat thi and I am glad that you were there with me.
Kumkum: Friends hote kis liye hai.

Sumit just looks at her and hugs her tightly. Even kumkum hugs him. They stand like this for long. After a while it starts raining and then they realize and get apart. Both little embarrassed.

Sumit: Toh tum ek mahine mein ja rahi ho. Can I ask you all the time of this one month for myself.
Kumkum: Kya…
Sumit: Please Kumkum
Kumkum: Smile, bilkul.

They go for partying, cinema, spend time talking. They are sitting at there fav spot that small hill and talking.

Sumit: Kumkum tum mujhe itni acchi tarah kaise janati ho?
Kumkum: Kyu tumhe isse pareshaani hai.
Sumit: Nahi mujhe bahut accha lagta hai yeh sochke, but at the same time I am surprised also.
Kumkum: Smiles………..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Aditi,

kya write-ups hain... πŸ‘

wowwwww

love da kkhh beginning πŸ˜† (my fav movie)

was jus superb...

hoping u'll cont soon 😳

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