pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 19

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Posted: 18 years ago
lets see what happens next after their memorable nite 😳
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one week has passed and kk su have not talked to each other...sumit is guilty of committing a sin...cheating kk's brother...n kk is confused why sumit is behaving like that...

In the evening...kumkum,rohit and anjali are having tea...

anjali n rohit r chatting merrily but kk is lost in her own thoughts.....suddenly the phone rings...rohith picks it up...

Rohit-hello...

Sumit-bhaiyya?..

ro-sumit tu?...main to soch raha tha ki abhi tere ghar jaoon..kya ho gaya hai tujhe?...kitne din ho gaye ghar aaye?...

su-bhaiiya...main abhi us ke liye nikal raha hoon...

ro-abhi?bina bataye?...sumit?..

su-bhaiyya jaana to tha hi na...kya fark padta...socha aapse baat kar loon...

Kk n anjali r eager to know...

ro-tu ruk hum abhi airport aate hain....

su-bhaiya ...aapko pahunchne mein 1 ghanta lagega aur meri flight 5 min baad jayegi...sharman aur main bas jaa hi rahe hain...

sharman snatches the phone...

Sh-big bro...aap fikr kyun karte ho...NRI toh ye banega...meri to har mahine ki treat reserved hai na...

ro-lekin sharman ye kya hua...tu hi call kar deta...

su-bhaiyya chodiye na...bhabhi ko phone dena...

ro-haan ye le...

he gives the phone to anjali...

kk-kya hua bhaiyya...??

ro-kk...sumit jaa raha hai...5 min baad flight hai uski...

kumkum is shell shocked oon hearing this ...tears fall down her cheeks and she runs to her room...

rohit takes the call from anjali..

ro-su...dekh kk rone lagi...tu us se baat kar pehle toh...

su-thik hai uske room mein milaata hoon..

Sumit calls kk next...kk picks up the phone..

Su-kumkum...

kk-kaat do phone sumit...rehne do...

su-aakhri baar bhi baat nahin karogi mujhse?...

both of them get emotional..

kk-kyun kar rahe ho mere saath aisa sumit?...keh do nahin pyaar karte mujhe...bolo...uss raat jo bhi hua wo..

su-pyaar toh bahut karta hoon kk...lekin shaayad bhaiyya se zyaada karta hoon...unko dhokha nahin de sakta...aur tum jaanti ho tumhaare liye ek ladka dekha hai....wo tumhaari zindagi...

kk-wo sirf tum ho...

su-tumhe meeri kasam...aaj ke baad aisa sochna bhi mat...aur kk...ab na hum kabhi dobaara baat karenge naa milenge...

kumkum cries hyterically...

kk-sumit mat jao mujhe chodkar...sumit?...

su-(crying)milogi mujhse ek baar?...

Kk-haan..

su-vaada karo...meri kasam nibhaogi...aur tum na hi mujhse rukne ko kahogi na hi ro gi...

kk-main aaoongi...

su-jhoot bola tha maine...bhaiyya ko bata do....abhi 45 mins hain...

kk-hum aa rahe hain sumit....

they switch off the phone.......

Sharman wipes his tears...sumit hugs him..

sh-bhai??...

su-sh...main hi khud ko rok nahin paa raha...

sh-kyun aisa kar rahe ho?..apne saath aur unke saath...

su-maine pehle bataya na tujhe aur..

he wipes his face...

su-kk aati hogi...

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kk, anjali,pratha n rohit reach the airport...

sh-kk di aa gayin...

ro-tu jhoot kabse bolne laga sumit?...

su-bhaiyya...main preshaan nahin karna chahta tha aap logon ko...

ro-shut up...

kumkum's eyes are moist but she controls herself...

anjali-aur kk...ye to rone lagi....

sharman takes pratha in arms and chats with her.....

anjali-chalo...coffee peete hain..sh?...

ro-chalo...ab kuch der in doston ko bhi akele chod do...bas kk tu marna mat sumit ko gusse mein...

sh-bhai bach ke...

Su n kk laugh...they all leave ...su-kk look at each other...

kk-jaa rahe ho...ye lo...

she takes her hand and gives her a small key ring with a teddy bear...

kk-main tumhe yaad nahin karoongi...ye tumhaara hai.

She cries pathetically....sumit feels upset and hugs her warmly....

su-bhool jao mujhe ab....ab nahin honga main tumhe iss tarah gale lagakar chup karane ke liye...

kumkum gets away...

su-apna khayal rakhna aur..sabka bhi...aur agar mujhse pyaar kiya tha to...bhool jao...bhaiyya jaise kahein waise apni zindagi shuru karna kk,,,,

kk cries.....

kk-tum bhi khayal rakhna ...apna aur sh ka...haq nahin hai par...

just then all return back...they hav their last talk...and finally sum n shar leave as per the anouncement....
kk is in tears n su too...su kisses pratha n asks her to b a gud girl...touches an n ro's feet n then...

he holds kk's hand....

su-chalta hoon....khayal rakhna....

kk holds his hand and he looks at her...

kk-thankyou...for being with me...when i needed u..thanx 4 caring for me aur...for being what u hav been to me....thankyou sumit...

sumit cutely hits her head,,"pagal..bye"

anjali gets emotional too..n sumit leaves...deciding not to come back again....kk reaches home, falls on the bed and cries her heart out....
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Posted: 18 years ago
another parting of ways.

but nice fiction. loved reading it do continue with their milan please
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi nice part.poor kk.how they also patch up soon. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
why did su go away
bring kk and su back together
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
will update tom...thanx for appreciating...ur comments guide me thanx
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Posted: 18 years ago
very emotional one jj 😭 .
pls get back sukk atleast hear 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
about one and a half year has past afrter sumit's departure....sumit misses kumkum a lot.....he hasn't ever called to sharmas in india....and he neither intends to in future....sharman has grown quite a bit....he misses india but his brother's kasam compels him to forget all happening in india....

su-sharman..aaj last day hai na college ka..

sh-haan bhai...i feel nostalgic..1 n 1/2 yr ho gaya...

su-college chodna nahin kya...fail hona hai?..

sh-accha?...

Su-chal..i'll drop u...ek meeting ke liye jaana hai...

sh-chalo...

They are seated in the car...sh switches on the stereo...

Sh-uff...kya boring collection hai...

su-change kar le...

sh-ok...

he goes through the cd's n finds..."sonu nigam collection"...gifted by-kumkum...with lots of luv n luck...

Sharman plays it and it plays....

"main agar kahoon tumsa haseen"..from om shanti om...

Sumit is lost in kk's memories....

sh-kumkum di ne diya tha?..

Su-haan...

A drop of tear falls on his face...

Sh-kyun chod ke chale aaye unhe?...

su-sh...baar baar ek hi sawaal?...aur ab...main us se baht door aa gaya hoon...dedh saal...sab badal gaya hoga...uski shaadi....

sh-nahin ho sakti....college aa gaya rok do..
Edited by jj thomson - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
This is too short............please write some more soon & a big one too........
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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 1 and half year passed away
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
main jahaan rahoon...
Main Kahin Bhi Hoon
Teri Yaad Saaath Hai...

Kisi Se Kahoon
Ke Nahi Kahoon
Yeh Jo Dil Ki Baat Hai
Kehne Ko Saath Apane Ek Duniya Chalti Hai
Per Chhupke Is Dil Mein Tanhaayi Palti Hai
Bas Yaad Saath Hai
Teri Yaad Saaath Hai

Kahin To Dil Mein Yaadon Ki
Ek Suli Gadh Jaati Hai
Kahin Har Ek Tasveer Bhahut Hi Dhundhali Pad Jati Hai
Koi Nayi Duniya Ke Naye Rango Mein Khush Rehta Hai
Koi Sab Kuch Paake Bhi Yeh Mann Hi Mann Kehta Hai
Kehne Ko Saath Apane Ek Duniya Chalti Hai
Per Chhupke Is Dil Mein Tanhaayi Palti Hai
Bas Yaad Saath Hai
Teri Yaad Saaath Hai

Kahin To Beete Kal Ki Jadein
Dil Mein Hi Utar Jaati Hai
Kahin Jo Dhage Tute To Malaayen Bhikar Jaati
Koi Dil Mein Jagah Nayi, Baaton Ke Liye Rakhta Hai
Koi Apni Palko Par Yaadon Ke Diye Rakhta Hai
Kehne Ko Saath Apane Ek Duniya Chalti Hai
Per Chhupke Is Dil Mein Tanhaayi Palti Hai
Bas Yaad Saath Hai
Teri Yaad Saaath Hai
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its kumkum singing the song to children in their ward in hospital...her eyes are full of tears...reminiscent of sumit's fond memories.....
A child holds her hand...

C-didi...aap bahut aachaa gaate ho...

KK(wipes her tears)-sacchi?...

C2-haan...aap bahut aache ho...

Kumkum smiles and hugs them...when asit enters...

asit-kumkum?...tum...baba...mana kiya tha na...tumhein uthna nahin hai...aur kahin jaana tha to bata diya hota...

kk-asit tum...

asit-wheel chair par baitho...aur ab agar tum uthi..to mujhse bura koi nahin hoga...samjhi?...aao..aaram se...

kk-to hum baad mein milenge bacchon?...hmm..

Children-jaldi aana didi..

Asit helps kumkum to the wheelchair and takes her back to her room...she lies back...

asit-ab...injection ka waqt ho gaya hai...aur bhaiyya bhi aa rahe hain...

kk-asit?...kitna waqt hai abhi mere paas?...

Asit is quiet.....he holds her hand and sits besides her...

Asit-kk...dekho..tumhein himmat nahin haarni hai bas...aur bhagwaan sab thik karenge...bahut jaldi...

KK-asit...mujhe koi fark nahin padta hai ab....aur saansein to tabhi ruk gayin thi...jab sumit...

She's in tears...

Asit-chalo...ab chupchaap leto...aur zyaada sochogi na...toh maar padegi...

Kumkum smiles at him....

kk-bhaiyya kahaan hain?...

asit-bas 10 min mein aa rahe hain...

kk-asit ...ek...ek baat poochoon?..

asit-bilkul....

kk-sumit?....

he understands what she intends to say...

asit-maine tumse kiya waada nibhaaya...use kuch nahin bataya hai...tumhaare baarey mein....

kk-wo...kaisa hai?....

asit-thik hai...kumkum...ab please exertion mat lo...aur aaraam se so jao..hmm?...

kk-haan...

asit leaves but kumkum sits and cries pathetically...cursing her misfortune

kk-sumit...ab aur nahin ji paoongi..please aa jao...please aa jao..
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