pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 17

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Posted: 17 years ago
sumit tries to wake her up but in vain....

Su-(touching her hand)....iska shareer toh jal raha hai bukhaar se...kya karoon

He suddenly gets an idea...he uses a mirror embedded in kk's suit and cuts the ropes within 5 mins.....

su-kk...bas ...dekho meri taraf...

But she's still unwell....sumit takes her in arms and walks in search of water...

KK is groaning...sumit keeps talking to her ...half an hour later they reach a pond....sumit makes kk sit....

Su-kk...bas dekho...aankhein kholo...pani piyo..

He takes water in both his hands and maes her drink it..then he sprinkles a little on her face...

KK-sumit...

Su-tum thik ho kk?...

KK-sumit...wo log...

Su-wo chale gaye kk...tum pareshaan mat hona...

KK-ab kya karenge?...

Su-tum aaraam karogi thodi der?...hmm?

KK-hmm...

Su-aao..

He makes her sit on a rock...after 5mins..

KK-sumit?..

Su-haan?...

KK-chalo...ab thik hai...

Su-pakka?....

KK-hmm...

He holds her hand and they walk thru the jungle...

Su-bukhaar hai abhi tumhe?...

KK-na..nahin...

Su-jhooth?....

KK-rehne do sumit...

Su-haan..wahi kahogi na...haq nahin hai mujhe...

KK looks at him through tear-filled eyes...

Sumit-sorry...

KK(wipes her tears)-nahin...galat thodi keh rahe ho tum.....sach mein tumhe koi haq nahin hai sumit...hamara rishtaa toot gaya na?...i m sorry jo..wo...vomitting se main thoda...maine tumhe pareshaan kiya....i m sorry

She moves forward and sumit looks on
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Posted: 17 years ago
After Sumit Kumkum's Red Hot Mohabbat is turned into Red hot jhagda, this fan fiction soothes us.

Lovely part waiting for the next one
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely prt.bt unite sukk atleat hear
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Posted: 17 years ago
great
i hope they tell each other abt their feelings
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
bachcha....yeh dooriyan kyun.bring them closer 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
kk and sumit move on....its 9 o clock n they r still struggling to find a way back to main road....
kk is exhausted....sumit is upset with her n they dont talk to each other....

KK's mind is full of thoughts...she's getting angrier every moment n sumit is unable to understand that she's in love with him n wants to stop her.....

It starts raining....sumit quickly pushes kk under a tree to protect her from getting socked in rain...

Kk-kya hai su?...

Su-baarissh...bheeg jaogi...waise hi bukhaar kam nahin hai....

KK moves his hands aside n gets wet....

Kk-kyun...sumit kyun karte ho meri fikr...koi haq nahin hai tumhe mujhse baat karne ka...mujhe choone ka...

Sumit is stunned....

kk-tumhe to jaana hai na...jao...chod do mujhe jao...

She keeps moving in the rain....sumit follows her...mum..

After walking for a few minutes...she gets dizzy again....

KK-sumit....?...

su-kyun...kyun bula rahi ho?...ab bhi kuch kehna baaki hai kya?....

KK-nahin......nahi nahin bulati....

su-thik hai wahi sahi rahega ki hum baat hi naa karein....
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Posted: 17 years ago
kk feels dizzy and sits under another tree...sumit understands she's uwell....he sees her paniting and rushes to her...n rubs her back so she gets sum relief...
su-saans nahin aa rahi hai kk?...

KK(panting)-jao...jao ab...pls...

Sumit moves aside but still concerned....

As she gets a little better...she again starts walking...

Su-kk?...kk?...thik hai...nahin manana meri baat bas pls...abhi mat zid karo....raat ka waqt hai...tumhaari tabiyat kharaab hai...kk...agar attack pad gaya...to kya karoonga main kk?...tumhe kuch ho gaya to?...

KK(shouts)-hone do ....kya matlab hai tumhe?...main mar bhi jaoon na...tumhein kuch nahin hoga...tumhein mujhse kya?....

She unknowingly steps backwards and falls in a pond....n gets drowned...
Sumit jumps into the pond to save her.....
In the pond...kk is unconscious when sumit gets hold of her hand....he cluthes it and pulls her towards himself....he approaches the bank....and gets out with kk...

KK had fainted...
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she's not breathing properly...her breath is very slow...sumit rubs her back n lies her with her face down...
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Posted: 17 years ago
sumit rubs her back ....
su-kk...kk...?...kk saans lo kk?...

But she's still not breathing....

Su-(shouts)-kk...listen to me...kk?..try to breathe...meri baat suno....

he even hits her back with a little force..but in vain...

He turns her to face himself...her face is blue...she's not breathing at all...

Su(crying)-kk?...pls...utho na kk?...kk?..try to breathe kk?...kk?...KUMKUM??...

she's still unconscious...n getting paler...
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Posted: 17 years ago
su-kk?...kk...tumhe uthna hi hoga...ankhhein kholo na....kk...kya bachpana hai...aankhein kholo...saans lene ki koshish karo....

Suddenly he realsises...he's acting childishly...

He gets closer to her....puts back the hair on her face n dries her face..

his hands tremble..partly, due to cold and partly due to nervousness...he's shivering...

he gets closer to her face and puts his lips on her...holding her hand...he breathes deeply and tries to blow air into her lungs....he's desperate to see her breathing again...

he repeats the process and rubs her neck and back...

he's in tears....even thinking about sumthing happening to kk...he just wants her to open her eyes...to talk to him...to hold him...to hug him...to scold him...to smile at him...to laugh with him...to cry...to fight with him...yeah!...any thing!...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great, Krishna. Kya baat hai, Superb, excellent, bas dono ab maan jaaye.

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