PKA - Pt16 Pg29 Piyush's condition

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yes I am back with a bang....and another fanfic! ok ok im lying....I actually posted this fanfic in the fanfic section but hardly got any response....so someone suggested I move it here...well thats what I've done. Unlike my "Hum Tum" which u all loved...this is and i promise...just about our lovely Sumit and Kumkum....so here goes
Starring
Sumit Whadwa - a singer in a local cafe, well known by everyone.
Rahul - Sumits best friend, plays guitar when Sumit sings
Kumkum Sharma - sweet and loving girl, friends with Rach, Ankita and Ekta
Rach - Kumkums friend, swwet girl likes to have fun
Ankita - Kumkums friend, likes to write poems😃
Ekta - Kumkums friend, the heart of the group, loves to share everything with the girls
Other Characters!
Veena Whadwa - Sumits mom, loves her son very much, wants him to start business
Kul Whadwa - Sumits dad, also wants him to start business
Dadi - Sumits dadi
Dadaji - Sumits Dadaji
Naina - Kumkums mom
Raj - Kumkums father
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Preview
You can hear someone singing "Mitwa" from Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna.
Everyone is watching him, his voice has everyone hooked, his eyes are show, the his lips, a friend close by is playing the guitar
He is shown he is.........
commentz plz 😃😃
Edited by ~*~Rachu~*~ - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOOHOO!!!

YES FINALLY RACH IS BAC WRITTIN A SUKK FANFIC!!!

GREAT GOING RACH!!! 😃

PS. I'm the biggest fan of your work in this forum...keep posting 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww henna....lol so sweet....erm you're all my biggest fans 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Rach.. that is sooooo sweet of you to add me in.. 😊 and 'heart of the group'.. thats an honour! Thanks soooo much..

You all have a place in my heart like no other.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww eksoo....yea i had 2...aakhir dosti tumhare bina adhuri hai 😊 awww so sweeeet 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi rach 😊 welcum back
it will b great reading ur fanfic.keep it up 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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So rachuji,

U r back in business after a long time...

I will join u soon...

Kahani mere bagair bhi toh adhuri hogi naa....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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rachuu je wlcum back jee....and me too in d story...so sweet jee

w8ting fr the next part 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

You can hear someone singing "Mitwa" from Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna.

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkane hai tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khud se toh na tu chhupa

Everyone is watching him, his voice has everyone hooked, his eyes are show, then his lips, a friend close by is playing the guitar

He smiles as his face is shown, he is Sumit Whadwa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
voh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkane hai tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khud se toh na tu chhupa
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hai

tu sochta hain tu puchata hai
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hai
haan yeh vohi hai haan yeh vohi hai
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadhi hai
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
voh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
teri nigaahen pagaye raahein
par tu yeh soche jaaoon na jaaoon
yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanoo

preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
udta agar hai udne de aanchal
kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye

jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
mitwa...
Sumit looks up to find everyone clapping, he turns and faces his best friend Rahul, who shows him a thumbs up, Sumit stands up and the pair of them bow to everyone., Sumit steps off the stage and he is immediately showered with compliments
P 1 - that was awesome!
P 2 - tum bohat ache gaate ho
S - thanks
P 3 - why don't you sing professionally?
The managr arrives
M - agar yeh professionally gaane laga tho mera kya hoga?
Everyone laughs and slowly they disperse. The manager looks at Sumit and shakes his hand, he then hands him some money
S - Sir ye?
M - tumhari pay
S - lekin Sir.....main ye paise nahin le sakta
M - kyun nahin? tum paise ke liye nahin gaate?
S - nahin Sir, gaane mera kaam nahin mera shock hai, I do it to please people.....
Sumit walks away leaving the manager confused, Rahul walks to the manager
R - Sir....aap shahid bhool rahe hai....Sumit is shaher ke sabse bade industrialist Kul Whadwa ke beta hai, usse paison ki koi kami nahin
Rahul follows Sumit, they sit in the car and make their way home. As they are driving they approach a red light, Sumit is in the driver's seat waiting for the light to turn green, he looks around him, suddenly he is blinded by light, he looks closely and sees a necklace, as he looks closer he notices a girl's smile and then her eyes, he keeps on staring but before he can get a proper look at her he hears horns honking behind him as the light has changed to green
R - Sumit kya hogaya tujhe, light change hogayi hai chal, varna paanga pe jaayega
S - haan haan ja raha hoon
Sumit drives off but the girl's eyes and lips are still in his mind, he arrives home and walks inside and sees his dad busy with phonecalls, his mom Veena comes up to him
V - kahan tha tu?
S - cafe per mama
V - kitni baar samjaaya hai tujhe ke vahan na jaaya kar, humhara itna bada business hai fhir vahan jaane ki kya zuroorat hai
S - jaanta hoon mama lekin main abhi business nahin karna chahta
Kul, who has now gotten off the phone
K - haan business nahin karna chahta, ek saal se beta hai ghar par jabse graduate kar chuka hai lekin apne future ka koi andaza nahin
S - mama please, dad ko samjaaye I'm going to my room
Sumit walks off while Kul continues his lecture, Sumit just rolls his eyes and walks into his room and puts the stereo system on, he closes his eyes and flashes of the girl from earliercome before him, he smiles and buries himself in the duvet cover.
To be continued
how did you like the first part????? plz comment
Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...i'm the first one.........it was awesome Rach di....plz continue....I sometimes DO feel awkward when I read fan fics about Sumit n Kum Kum being young......since I just started watching the show from STAR PLUS in August that means after the leap........................so I'm used to them being older.......but when I see themm in jodee kamaal ki or nach baliye or here and there pictures-i DON'T feel awkward at all..............it's just coz of the serial I just (I can imagine but...) don't seem to get used to them being yound in the fanfics........................................but after this update....I'm more eager to watch episodes of Sumit being young in serials......for example-just like before the leap....as I manage to see a few old episodes...but only a few......I saw the YOUNGer Sumit when Jatin was alive.....he was too good...even now.............................I think you got what I mean.......
Edited by Romaine_27 - 18 years ago

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