PKA - Pt16 Pg29 Piyush's condition - Page 4

Previously

Kumkum runs off, Sumit chases her for a while but loses her...he looks around and gets a taxi to go home. Kumkum watches him from her room window, she laughs

K - stupid boy....dil ka saaf hai.....par hai ek dun bhudhu

She laughs and goes into the bathroom

Part 3

Over the next few days Sumit cannot stop thinking about Kumkum, he sees her in his dreams, when he's eating, everywhere. On the other side, Kumkum has forgotten about Sumit and their little meeting. Her and the girls go shopping

R - uff Anku....yeh Kumkum naa bohat shopping karti hai

A - aur tu kuch kaam karti hai? dhek kitne bags hai tumhare paas

E - (laughs) - baat tho sahee kahi usne

R - oh shut up you lot

K - uff guys all of you shut up....dimaag kha liya mera,,im hungry now, chalo kuch kaate hai

E - haan i know a cafe near by chalo

Ekta leads the way to the cafe....Kumkum sees the name "Jeetu's Cafe" she recognises it but can't put her finger on it, she dismisses it and goes inside. Rach goes to order drinks

R - excuse me...4 cold coffees please

A person turns around and its Sumit

S - what?

R - suna nahin.....4 cold coffees

S - dheko main yahan....

R - hello go get the drinks! yahan kaare kyun hai?

A - Rach itni dher kyun laga rahi hai?

E - main dhekti hoon......Rach kya hua

R - dhek Ekss...main isse keh rhai hoon ke humhare drinks lekar aao lekin ye yahin kaara hai

E - hey! aapne sunaa nahin....humhare drinks lekar aao

S - chup! kabse boli jaa rahi ho! main aapko batane vala tha ke main yahan kaam nahin karta! agar drinks chaiye tho counter par jao

R - oh....sorry

Rach goes to get the drinks. Sumit shakes his head and makes his way to the stage, he gets the microphone and thinks

S (thinks) - kaunsa gaana gaoon?

He closes his eyes and imagines Kumkum, he smiles and begins to sing

chand sifarish jo karta humari deta voh tumko bata

sharmo haaya ke paarde ghirake karni hai humko kaatha

zid hai ab tho hai kudh ko mitana hona hai tujh mein fanaa

Kumkum hears his voice and realises, she looks towards the stage and...

K - Sumit....

R - tum usse jaanti ho?

K - erm nahin...haan...uff ill tell you later

chand sifarish jo karta humari deta voh tumko bata

sharmo haaya ke paarde ghirake karni hai humko kaatha

Sumit sees Kumkum, he thinks he's imagining but he sees her sitting with her friends and has a big smile on his face

teri adhaa bhi hai jonke vali chuke guzar jaane de

teri lachaak hai ke jaise daali dil mein utar jaane de

ajaa baahon mein karke bahana hona hai tujh mein fanaa

chand sifarish jo karta humari deta voh tumko bata

sharmo haaya ke paarde ghirake karni hai humko kaatha

hai jo iradein baata doon tumko sharmayi jaogi tum

dhadkhane jo suna doon tumko gaabrayi jaogi tum

humko aata nahin hai chupana hona hai tujh mein fanaa

chand sifarish jo karta humari deta voh tumko bata

sharmo haaya ke paarde ghirake karni hai humko kaatha

zid hai ab tho hai kudh ko mitana hona hai tujh mein fanaa

Kumkum smiles at Sumit, the girls notice this

A - Kumkum kya hua tumhe?

K - huh kuch nahin kyun

R - tum usse goor ke kyun dhek rahi thi?

K - nahin tho...main tho bas...

Sumit comes

S - hi!!!!

K - hi

S - remember me....us din...bus mein?

R - bus mein kya?

K - kuch nahin....tu chup kar

Sumit sits down

S - kya main yahan bet sakta hoon

R - shahid aapko pata nahin lekin aap bet gaye hai

S - main aapse baat nahin kar raha tha

E - Kumkum..yeh kaun hai?

S - wow tumhara naam Kumkum hai...beautiful......mera naam tho tum jaanti hogi....

K - haan....erm dheko humhe jaana hai....see you some other time...chalo girls

The girls get up and go, Kumkum smiles at Sumit, he smiles back but Rach gives Sumit a dirty look as if to say "leave Kumkum alone" Sumit instantly has a frown on his face.

Outside....

E - Kumkum voh kaun tha?

K - koi nahin...bus mein mila tha

A - oh....kahin voh tumse...pyaar..

K - pagal hogayi ho tum

R - nahin par agar yeh sach keh rahi hai....aur tu bhi us se.....tho pagal hum nahin tu hogayi hai!

Rach walks off. Later Kumkum goes home and takes a shower and goes to bed, while sleeping she has a dream

**dream**

Kumkum is wearing a white dress, she is running through some woods, she is being chased by someone, we cannot see the person's face. Kumkum looks scared

K - leave me alone..door raho mujhse.....

Kumkum continues running but accidentally trips, the other person runs closer to her and shoots her

**reality**

Kumkum wakes up in sweats, she washes her face, has a glass of water and goes back to sleep. She has the same dream again, this time she wakes up screaming, her mom comes running

N - kya hua Kumkum

K - mom voh mujhe maar dale ga...mom mujhe bachaiye

N - kaun tere peeche hai? Kumkum...shhh

Naina makes Kumkum lie down, she runs her hand through her ahir and calms her down, she watches Kumkum sleep.

twist in the tale 😉
good going rachu 👏 keep it up
write kk-su's romantic scenes soon 😆 😆 dying to read those

arre gr88 rachuu jee....keep it up

Originally posted by: rachandeep

hehe nidzzzz....ab tu kya kaam acha likhti hai...tu vi bohaattt mast likhti hai!!!!! aur kaun hai,....yeh tho baad mein pata lage ga na😉

ye pata lagne ka main intezaar karoongi 😉 😳............aur haan hum dono ki fan fics ke pgs ek doosre ki tareef mein hi bhar jaayenge 😆 😛

Originally posted by: nature

ye pata lagne ka main intezaar karoongi 😉 😳............aur haan hum dono ki fan fics ke pgs ek doosre ki tareef mein hi bhar jaayenge 😆 😛