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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: IPKAUR

hey. just go through ur ff
its just gr8
looking forward to read it

hi.......first of all welcome here
thanks alot for reading the ff and liking it
luv preet

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@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

here is the third part of my story:-
Part three:-

Now we see kumkum with rahul and shainna in club

Kumkum:- "is it hurting?" she said

Rahul:- "no way.......u see I m man"

Kumkum:-ya...I very well know that....infact u must have punched him back on his face....how can he do that with u?

Shainna:- leave it na di....he was too handsome

Kumkum:- r u mad?..he had bitten up rahul and u r saying that he was handsome

Shainna:- so what di?....i liked him

Now rahul spoke up:- stop it girls.........i cant believe it...u r fighting for a boy...

Kumkum:- what u girls?...y dnt u do anything being a boy

Rahul:- i dnt want him to look bad on his birthday

Kumkum:- now when's dat?

Rahul:- tomorrow

Kumkum:- and how do u know?

Rahul:- we were frnds in college

Kumkum:- and u still remember his birthday...........look like u miss him

Rahul:- so what if i miss him?.....look i know he might my reacted rude but he is very nice at heart

Kumkum:- oh....how did u fall apart?...m sure it must be his mistake at that time too

Rahul:- no, he was not wrng.....infact i had over-reacted that time

Kumkum:- looks like u miss him alot

Rahul:- ya, he was my very gud frnd....and i repent 4 what i did

Kumkum:- ok, now lets go

Now when the clock struck 12, summit got up hearing a loud noice and replied "stop it guys" but then by looking up at all his frnds he smiled back and they all shouted together... " happy birthday summit"

Summit:- thanks alot guys....how cum a all r here?

Vikas:- actually what happened at club after that i called armaan bhai and he called all of us here

Summit:- m so happy to see u all here

Another one:- but how cum rahul dnt hit u back?.... u hit him on his face

Summit:- how do i know?........ask him

At the same time, armaan enterd his room with cake in his hands saying " happy birthday bro"

Summit:- thanks bhai and he hugged dim

Armaan:- now lets cut the cake....he said facing him

All together:- yeah

Summit:- hey stop it guys...dids is in the next room and she might be asleep now

Armaan:- no, she is already awake and is having her meals downstairs with mom

Summit:- but y so early?

Armaan:- ya...its karwachauth na

Now summit cuts the cake and first offered it to armaan, then vikas and then everyone else and they put the rest of cake on his face

Summit:- what is this yaar?

After a while they all leave, his mom and dids also wish him and then he went to sleep after washing his face and now his mood was also very gud thanks to all his frnds and his bro

At the breakfast table, they all were having their food, when mr.wadhwa spoke
Mr. W:- armaan, i know u mother have discussed about it with u, but i want to discuss it with u personally

Armaan:- about what dad?

Mr. W:- ur marriage

"What?" armaan and summit said together

Mr. W:- not urs summit, its about armaan's

Summit:- but y so early dad?

Veena:- stop it summit

Mr. W:- i just want to know armaan.....do u like any girl?

Armaan:- no dad

Mr. W:- ok then i want u to meet with some girls in party. Now m leaving, u can come later

Armaan:- ok dad....he had only this to say

Summit:- bhai, whats wrong with u?

Veena:- let him decide, whats gud for him and whats not summit

Summit:- ok....he said and then left

Veena:- sometimes, i thought how will we convince him for the marriage?

And they all laughed at this.

Kumkum got up much earlier than before as she know that Prerna is quite upset with her about yesterday's night. They all were having breakfast and anurag was reading newspaper, when shainna spoke

Shainna:- mom, we are really very sorry for last night

Anurag:- what happened?

Shainna:- nothing papa, just tomorrow we come late and mom is angry with us on that

Prerna:- u will be delighted to know that ur daughters had started drinking

Anurag:- is that true?....anurag said while looking at them and they simply just nooded

Kumkum:- actually, papa we had been at disc yesterday with my frnds and they all forced us to give
them company...

Shainna:- no papa they started teasing me bu saying that m a kid so i just take it to stop all that

Anurag:- ok...drinking once a while is quite alright.....but u both r grown up now and u must know ur limits and u must be able to handle urself

Kumkum:- u r the greatest dad...but ma is still angry with us

Anurag:- come on, Prerna...they haven't anything that bad and after all they r my daughters and i really trust them

Prerna:- nothing seems to matter u na, u all r impossible

Anurag:- ok...we all going 4 a party tonight and we means we all.................he said looking at both of them

"ok....." they said

so this the 3rd part of my story....plz comment or criticize...........and help me to improve

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago