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Posted: 15 years ago
#41



thanks alot dear
RadhaKrishan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: juhuti


OMG i missed some epi
preet extremely sorry dear
these days little busy...will read it soon and post my comment
do cont
afreen




hi afreen....
plz dnt fell sorry...i know we all are busy
even i was waititng 4 ur comments
plz take ur time
luv preet
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In the other side of party, we saw Armaan who is trying to find summit but he is nowhere seen and just then someone calls him from back.

Person:-"Armaan, what happened?"

Armaan:- "oh......di. nothing but i am just looking for summit and he is nowhere. He is not picking up his cell too. Dad will be very angry on him"

Nandini:-"just stop sounding like papa, Armaan. And summit is not here. He just fled. We know him, he dnt like these kind of parties"

Armaan:- "but di......he must have wait to meet jiju?"

Nandini:- "karan is not an outsider and summit can meet him later also....understand"

Armaan:- "ya.........u r just defending him"

Nandini:- "now stop all this and lets go inside. Now plz dnt tell anyone that summit is not here. Just tell them that he is with his friends."

Armaan:-"ok...lets go"


The scene switches to Kumkum and Shainna who are just roaming in the garden

Shainna:- "di its so nice here."

Kumkum:- " ya......the environment is very soothing here."

Shainna:- "d ii will just be back"

Kumkum:- "but where r u going?"

But Shainna has already left and Kumkum just said that:- "pata nahin kya hoga is ladki ka...kuch nhi sunti yeh"


She was just roaming when she saw some shadows behind her. She got worried and as she was just to turn behind, she feels an arm around her waist and a hand on her mouth so that she cant shout

Person:- " dnt u dare do that?".....the person said behind her ear and she got frightened because she had never been so close to a man in her life. As he saw that his friends had made their way. He left her with a jerk and also climb the wall and said:- "its so fun fleding from ur own house on ur birthday"

Vikas:- "ya.....i can see that."

Rahul:- " now, lets move. Unless someone will caught us here and we have to go inside again."

Summit:- "ya..lets move."


And on the other side we saw Kumkum trying to got up but she failed because she got a sprain in her ankle. Shainna saw her in that state and came to her running

Shainna:- "di, what happened to u?

Kumkum:- "nothing, i am fine. Plz call maa here. I dnt want to enter there like this."

Shainna:- "ok ...i will just be back."

Shainna said and took her to nearby bench and start looking for her maa but failed to do so and someone called her from back

Person:- "what happened?"

Shainna:- "oh...armaan. can u please tell me where maa is?"

Armaan:- "ya...but what happen?"

Shainna:- " actually di had fallen down and got a sprain in her ankle"

Armaan:- "oh where's she?"

Shainna took him to her di

Armaan:- "oh....is it hurting?" and he got a nod in reply "can u come in?" and got a negative answer
"ok...than i will arrange some relief spray for u" he said and went inside to get some spray

Kumkum:- "i said u to call ma not Armaan?"

Shainna:- "di ....i cant see maa anywhere. So i just call him."

Armaan:- "here u go." He said and apply some spray on her ankle. "but how this happen?"

Kumkum:- "I dnt know. I just saw some figures and when i tried to turn, one of them caught me and then later he left me sudden and I lost my balance and just fell. I thought he must be some thief."

Armaan:- "no, he is him.................my brother."

Kumkum and Shainna together:- "what?"

Armaan:- "ya....I told u that he don't like these parties so he just fled from here............ R u ok now?"

Kumkum:- "ya..... m fine now."

Armaan:- "ok...then i must leave and shenu plz bring ur di in." He said and leave

Shainna:- " isn't he sweet di?"

Kumkum:- "ya."


They were driving off at top speed, when suddenly he stopped with a screeching sound,

Summit:- "dnt tell me that we are going there?"

Rahul:- "what do u mean dude?"

Vikas:- "summit, its a pub not not her home that u will found her everytime."

Rahul:- "oh... u mean kimi?"

Summit:- "now, whos that?"

Rahul:- "that girl at pub yesterday night...but dnt worry she will not be there. She has to gone to some birthday party."

Summit:- "whos?"

Rahul and vikas together:- "not urs." And give hi-fives to each other.

Summit:- "ya....but I do have some feelings for that person."

Vikas:- "ya...u two share same birthday."

Summit:- "no, not like that. I fell pity on that person as she will gonna create mess there."

Rahul:- "summit.....that' not true. She is good at heart. Please stop behaving like this."

Summit:- "i know...she is ur girl....no no ur good friend."

Rahul:- "ya....now stop talking rubbish about her."

Vikas:- " y r u guys fighting for a girl?"

Summit:- "firstly, we both are not fighting and secondly, girls will be the last topic on which summit
will fight............got that?"

Vikas:- "ya....u r right. Now, lets go."

Rahul:- "no summit, one day a girl will change u and ur life entirely." He said smiling to himself.\

Summit:- "what?" he said to rahul seeing him smile unusual

Rahul:- "nothing, lets move."




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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here is the 5th part of my ff. I know I m late and m sorry 4 that. please comment or criticize and if u have some suggestions than plz tell me.
i know its a small part and m sorry 4 that
but i will definately upload a big part before week end
will wait 4 ur comments
luv preet
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
it is very interseting to read......
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Hugs to all
sure will read and comment later
a nice part
Edited by surakshita - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi preet
the part was nice
tumne sukk ki meeting to karwayi par adhori reh gayi plz ab in dono ko milwa do na
and plz send a bid ud....its quite small
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Posted: 15 years ago
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PART-6

Wadhwa house me party khatam ho chuki thi aur sab guests bhi ja chuke the aur ghar me ab sirf family members hi reh gaye hain aur Mr. Wadhwa to bahut gusse mein hain summit ne aaj jo bh kiya uski vajah se

Mr. Wadhwa:- "aaj to is ladke ne had hi kar di. har baar apni manmani karta hai but this time he will have to repent for this. aaj uski vajah se kitni sharmindagi ka samna karna padha mujhe. sab guest sirf yehi pooch rahe the ki summit kahan hai?"

Nandini:- "par dad hum sab jante hain ki summit ko aisi parties bilkul bhi pasand nahin hain and after all its his birthday. please let him enjoy this day in his own way.

Veena:- "nahin nandini, kul bilkul theek keh rahe hain. jab tak summit ko iski saza nahin milegi wo nahin sudhrega aur aaj jo kuch bhi hua uske baad bhi tum summit ka saath de rahi ho. kyun?

Nandini:- "mom............"

Mr. Wadhwa:- "nahin nandini, is baar mujhe kuch nahin sunana. jaise hi summit ghar aata hai usse mere pass bheej dena. chalo veena."

Kul aur Veena iske baad vahan se chale jaate hain aur bachte hain armaan, nandini aur karan.

Karan:- "is baar to summit gaya. dad ka gussa dekh ke lagta hai ki is baar summit achi tarah se phasega."

Nandini karan ko bahut hi gusse se dekhti hai

Karan:- "What? Mene to bas wohi kaha jo mujhe lag raha hai. Ab dad jis tarah se yahan se gaye hain us hisaab se to yehi lagta hai ki is baar to summit gaya." And he started laughing.

Nandini:- "karan. Can't u stop all dis?"

Armaan:- "Relax dids, jiju to bas mazak kar rahe hain."

Nandini:- "yahan mujhe summit ki itni chinat ho rahi hai aur tum log yahan mazak udha rahe ho. Sharam karo tum dono. Aur ab hasne ki jagah mujhe is problem ko solve karne me help karo."

Armaan:- "But dids, galti summit ki bhi hai aur is baar summit ko mein nahin bachane wala. m sorry."

Nandini:- "armaan, its his birthday. can't he celebrate his day in the way he wants."

Armaan:- "I understand di, but dad ko kaun samjhayega, wo is baar bahut gussa hain aur wo is baar nahin manenge."

Nandini:- "Me bhi dekhti hun ki dad kaise nahin mante."

Armaan:- "ok...dids. u won."

Nandini:- "I always win. but where is Summit?"

Karan:- "pata nahin, usne apna phone bhi band kiya hua hai. pata nahin kahan hoga."

Armaan:- "ye ladka hamensha aise kyun karta hai. ab isse dhundhe bhi to kasie dhundhe?"

Karan:- "chalo koi baat nahin, wo khud gahr aa jayega. But Nandini, I think tumhe ab rest karni chahiye. kafi raat ho gayi hai aur is halat me itna stress tumhare liye bilkul theek nahin hai."

Nandini:- "nahin karan, mein theek hun aur jab tak summit nahin aa jata me kahiin nahin jaungi."

Armaan:- "Dids please, aap rest ki jiye. mein yahan Summit ki wait karta hun. Par please aap rest kijiye."

Nandini:- "ok.....fine. M going. But take care of Summit."

Armaan:- "Y dids, I will. now please aap rest karo."

After this, karan and nandini left for their room and armaan proceeds towards summit's room. he enters the room and see that his phone is there and its switched off.

Armaan:- "Iska matlab, summit ne sab kuch plan kar ke kiya tha. Thank GOD, dad ne summit ka phone nahin dekha. nahin to unka gussa aur badh jata. But ye summit hai kahan?"

Then armaan summit ka phone drawew me rakh kar, ussi ke room me summit ki wait karne lagta hai.

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The scene now shifts to kumkum and shainna who are discussind something.

Shainna:- "Di, the party was great na and armaan, he was so nice."

Kumkum:- "Yes, he was really nice. par me to uske bhai ke bare me sooch rahi hun jo apne birthday wale din, apne hi ghar se choro ki tarah bhag gaya."

Shainna:- "Ya di, I really want to meet him. He is so funny. I wish I could meet him."

Kumkum:- "What? mujhe uspe itna gussa aa rha hai ki agar wo mere samne aa gaya na to me usse maar sakti hun aur tum ho jo usse milna chahti hun. pata hai me kitna dar gayi thi us time."

Shainna:- "Di, please bataiye na w aapke kitna kareeb tha."

At this, Shainna stands from her bed and move to kumkum and hold her from back and when kumkum tell her about her closeness with summit, then shainna only does...."OOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo."

Kumkum:- "what OOOOoooooo? Tumhe kuch aur nahin akrna aata kya?

Shainna:- "di, how were feeling that time?"

Kumkum:- "I was just scared."

Shainna:- "Was he handsome?"

Kumkum:- "He was holding me from back. so, i don't know about that."

Shainna:- "Oh........so sad."

Kumkum:- "Ya....very sad. Now just go to sleep. Its quite late and u have to go to college tomorrow."

Shainna:- "Ok Di. Good night."

Kumkum:- "Good night."

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It was 3 AM and summit and vikas were driving towards summit's home after droping rahul on their way. they were about to enter in summit's house but summit told vikas to stop the car.

Vikas:- "par kyn yaar? andar tak chood deta hun na tujhe."

Summit:- "Are yaar, aaj jo mene kiya uske baad m sure ki dad mujhe bahut naraz honge aur agar car ki awaaz ki vajah se wo uth gaye na to meri problems aur badh jayengi."

At this, vikas started laughing and then he drops summit outside his house and then drive to his house. summit enters his home silently and directly goes into his room. As he entered into his room, he found armaan there.

Summit:- "Bhai, aap is waqt yahan kya kar rahe hain?"

Armaan:- "sawal mujhe tumse karna chahiye summit? kya me jaan sakta hoon ki tum is waqt kahan se aa rahe ho?"

Summit:- "Bhai jab aap jante ho to pooch kyun rahe ho?"

Armaan:- "mein to bas tumhari practise karwa raha tha kal jab dad tumse poochenge tab tumhari ache se preparation honi chahiye na.....vese dad tumse is baar bahut naraz hain."

Summit:- "I know bhai, chahe dad jitne bhi gusse mein ho, aap aur di mujhe unke gusse se bacha lenge."

Armaan:- "no way summit, is baar me tumhari koi help nahin karunga."

Summit:- "agar aap meri help nahin karenge to di hai na, wo mujhe bacha lengi. Bhai, ab mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai aur kal ek badha sa lecture bhi to sunana hai dad ka. so I need to have a sound sleep. so, good night bro."

Armaan:- "good night." he said and leave his room.

Armaan ke jane ke baad summit apne bed pe let jata tha. sone ki bahut koshish karta hai par jaise hi wo apni aankhen band karta hai usse wo pal yaad aata hai jab usne kumkum ko pakada tha ghar se bhagne se pehle aur wo jhatke se pani aankhen kholta hai aur sochta hai ki usse kya ho gaya hai (but hum jante hain ki wo itna budhu hai ki uske dimaag me kuch nahin aayega😆 😆 😆) par phir wo apna dimaag in sab baaton se hata kar sone ki koshish karta hai. ab hum dekhte hain ki kumkum ka haal bhi kuch aisa hi hai. wo apne bed pe leti hui hai aur sirf aur sirf us hadse ke bare me soch rahi hai jab summit ne usse pakada tha.

aur aise hi raat nikal jati hai.

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Ab subah ke 9 baj rahe hain aur hum dekhte hain ki Wadhwa mansion me puri family living room me summit ki wait kar rahi hai aur Mr. and Mrs. Wadhwa bahut gusse me hain. At the same time, summit stairs se neeche aata hai aur Mr. Wadhwa usse gusse se dekhte hain.

Summit:- "dad, m sorry."

Mr. Wadhwa:- "stop it summit, har bar tum apni manmani karte ho aur me kuch nhin kehta. But is time to tumne apni sari lines cross kar di hain aur is baar me tumhe maaf nahin karunga. Mene soch liya hai ki tum ab US ja rahe ho aur ab vahan tum hamara buisness handle karoge."

Summit:- "dad please don't do this. Mom, aap to kuch kahiye."

Veena:- "nahin summit, me kul ke saath hun. Tumhe US jana hoga aur yehi tumhari punishment hai."

Summit looks at nandini and armaan for help.

Nandini:- "but mom, dad........"

Mr. Wadhwa:- "nahin nandini, ab me tumhari ek baat nahin sununga. is baar summit ko punishment zaroor milegi aur usse US jana hi hoga."

Nandini:- "Ok Dad...........agar aap yehi chahte hain ki Summit US jaye to wo US zaroor jayega."

All look at nandini in shock and summit was so shocked that he just says:- "what?"

Nandini:- "par"

Mr. Wadhwa:- "par kya?"

Nandini:- "Agar summit US jayega to mein bhi uske saath jaungi."

At this all just say "WHAT?"

Nandini:- "Yes dad."

Mr. Wadhwa:- "Nandini tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? Is condition mein tum US jana chahti ho?"

Nandini:- "Dad, my decision is final. Agar summit jayega to mein bhi jaungi nahin to koi bhi nahin jaungi."

Mr. Wadhwa:- "ok fine. u won. summit nahin jayega US. Ab khush ho tum?"

He said and leave from there and after him, veena also leaves. un dono ke jane ke bad summit just hug her Di.

Summit:- "thanks Di, pehle to mein dar hi gaya tha par aapne aaj mujhe bacha liya. varna dad to mujhe US ki flight mein bhetha kar hi saans lete."

Nandini:- "Ur welcome my sweet bro. but ab kuch din tak koi badmasi mat karna varna is baar dad ko manana mushkil ho jayega."

Summit:- "I will di."

Karan:- "wow nandini, tum apne bhai ko bachane ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho. That was wonderful."

Armaan:- "ya di, u r just wonderful."

Nandini:- "i know that. Now lets go and have breakfast."

At this all leave to have breakfast.
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Hiiii friends, this is the part-6
please comment. it really motivate me.
luv preet
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hii preet sorry for the late reply😳
Awesome update dear👏
really like the characters😃
bonding between sumit-armaan-nandini & kumkum-shaina is just wonderful😛
eager to know what happens next.....continue soon🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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preet
awesome part
yaar summit ke birthday pe usse hi angry kara diya
aur usski pasand ka birthday party bhi nahi diya
peelf so sorry for summit
over all i luved all of ur ff part that i messed
thanks for such an awesome part
thanks for the pm dear

Mariam

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