moment of love updated part 7 on page 9

Introduction to characters of moment of love :-
The malhotra's:-

Shweta tiwari:- Prerna malhotra


cezanne khan:-Anurag malhotra



Juhi shroff:- kumkum wadhwa



Sanaya irani:- shainna



The wadhwa's:-
Paritosh Sand:- Kulbhushan Wadhwa
Prabha Sinha:- Veena Wadhwa
(sorry i dnt have any pics of them but these are the mother and father of summit in serial will post the pics when i got them)

Karan singh grover:- armaan wadhwa



Hussain kuwajerwala:- sumeet wadhwa



Gauri tejwani:- nandini wadhwa (now khanna after marrying karan khanna)



Hiten tejwani:- karan khanna




Gaurav khanna:- rahul kumar



Gagan malik:- vikas saxena


now introduction to main characters:-
sumeet wadhwa:- The youngest of the 3, after nandini and armaan, is a very jovial kinda guy, full of life, away from its worries, doesn't wait for opportunities to cum his way, converts moments into occasions to celebrate, Love is a still alien to him, in fact, to put it correctly, nowhere exists in his dictionary.

kumkum malhotra:- She is a lively girl, with her own share of dreams, she parties, enjoys life to the fullest, being her papa's fav. has never been denied of nething, but still has sum thing void inside, a place for sum1 spcl. A strong believer in destiny, waits for him to cum her way, Is closest to her sis.

now here is the first part:-
Part one:-
We saw a room which is very beautifully decorated and has two beds and then we saw a girl who is sleeping very sweetly there and her face is not shown. Now we see an elderly woman entering the room and she is Mrs. Prerna malhotra and she is asking a girl to wake up..
P- Prerna, G- girl
P- beta, uth ja. Dekh bahut time ho gaya hai. Chal ab jaldi kar. Uth ja
G – nhi ma, plz sone do na
p- beta uth dekh 10 baj gaye
g- what??????
She said waking up and we see that girl is kumkum
K- maa, where is shaina?...she said looking at the vacant bed
P- she has gone to her clg. Remember u are having holidays after ur 2nd year exams but she has to go to the clg
K- ok maa. We see her coming out of the bed, taking her towel and heading towards the washroom..
After almost half an hour we see her on the table, her mother was quite irritated abt her habit of getting late on day offs, serving her with the food (they had servants but her mother did these things on her own, can't trust others on this, she was a bit strict in this, liked to maintain a discipline in the house)
p- kumkum, i think u should change ur habit of getting late on day-offs
k- maa, plz let me enjoy my holidays now as after some days, there will be the same daily routine. She says somewhat in a pleading tone
At this Prerna just smiles and said- ok, but do u think u will have the same habit even after ur marriage?
k- plz maa, dnt start it again as i dnt think that i am ready 4 marriage and dat to with some stranger
p- wht do u mean by that?
k- i mean i am not going to marry any guy and i want to marry a guy who is normal but yet so serious about me but he must have a childish like innocence in him, his eyes must be pure and ........the list would be continued but if not interrupted by her maa
p- anything else and after hearind this kumkum looks up and Prerna continues- no i mean we must have to order some one as i think no one exists like this on this earth.
k- ya maa.. the one i should marry must be like that and ya i forget one thing dat is his eyes must reflect his heart.
p-" ok, now eat this up as i want to clean dis mess...".and she calls out their servant...."shamu, zara bahar aana..."
k- " he might be somewhere around" she said in a dreamy manner and then she yelled"maa........."
p- "whats now? Cant u come up there? I was doing my work" she said coming from kitchen....
k- wo i called u to know whether we can go to disc tonight?
p- "we?" she said raising her eyebrow
k- i mean can i take shainna with me?
p- "why she?"
k- as i thought she was asking me about that last time and i cnt tke her due to her exams so i thought if u agree
p- ok...u can go but dnt be late... u know ur papa get worried about u if u r late.....
k- "thanks maa......u r the best" she said hugging her and then rums quickly to her room switching on the music very loud and starts her craziest dancing but she stops in mid-way guessing some-one's presence in her room....she turns and found their servant
k- tum?...............tum yahan kya kar rhe ho?
s- wo memsahab ne kaha hai ki awazz thodi kam kijiye.....he said all that very hard suppressing his laughter after watching her dance like that
k- ok.............she said and lowers the voice of music system as he is very scared of her maa...as she knows that she is very strict in all these
now the scene shifts to evening when shainna comes back from clg and gets over excite over the news that she can go to disc today
sh- " haye!!! M not watching any dream na..... pinch me"
k- plz dnt over react shenu
sh- no di maa has given me permission so this is the party time...yipeeeeeeeeeeee and she jumped out of joy
k- now please save this energy and gets ready...we have to reach their by 9 and its already 7:30
sh- ok...but plz help me in choosing a dress?
k- "cant u do anything on ur on? I too need to get ready" as she said shainna'a face drained off and she said again.." ok...i will do dat.......no need 4 that nautanki"
sh- u r the best...........she said hugging her

Its 8:30 and both the sisters are ready. Shainna in white skirt and blue top and kumkum in blue fitted jeans with red halter top, when her phone rang and its rahul
k- hi rahul
r- hi kumkum, where r u?
k- we r just leaving for there
r- means u r still at home?
k- ya. We will be there by 9. Sure. Bbye.
She hung up the phone and tell shainna to be fast and then leaves after bidding bood bye to her maa
Here is the first part of my fanfic....will wait for ur comments and will continue only if u want......

here is the first part of my ff...............will wait for ur replies and will continue if only u guys want.
plz tell me whether i should continue with it or no...thanks

luv preet

OMG...a new ff
wow, will sure read it soon
and let u know how is it...
the introduction of the character is awesome⭐️
thanks a ton dear for writing ff

afreen

OMG what a nice start of ur ff
i really luved the start of ur ff
please do continue to write this ff
will luved to read this ff
thanks for writing the ff
thanks for the PM

mariam

OMG preet read the part
loved it sooo much...
i liked the way u started...awesome part
its my request that u should continue with this...plzzzzzzzzz
will wait for the next part😊

afreen

wow preet it's fabulous👏
I'm really looking forward to how the story is going to develop
plz continue soon

here is the second part of my ff:-
Part 2:-
At the other part of the city, we see a big gate opening itself to a grand house with a sprawling lawn, as a car enters n stops in front of the house, a handsome man and guess its armaan wadhwa who enters the house and run upstairs, enter a room and said
Ar:- cut it mom and di...cant u plz stop watching all dese soaps?

N:- y r u sounding like summit today?

Ar:- what?

N:- ya...he is also irritated with these daily soaps na?

Ar:- ya di...between do u know these daily soaps can be harmful for ur child also?(nandini is expecting her first baby so she is staying at her parents home)

N:- and hows that possible?

Ar:- ya expect its possible that ur baby says "maanji" instead of "olla"

N:- ha ha ha very funny
And they all laughed at that

Now veena says:- by the way y r u home and dat is to early?

Ar:- mom u know me i dnt like doing late night parties like summit

V:- ya thank god u r early. So can we all have dinner together?

N:- but summit? Where is he?

Ar:- he might be in some club with his friends doing some party and he will return late night thats m sure

V:- let him enjoy after all tomorrow is his birthday.

Ar:- by the way di r u keeping fast tomorrow?

N:- ya i will. I always do

Ar:- but dad is planning a party for summit

N:- i know but it will be over soon and then i can attend the party

V:- armaan, ur dad wants u to settle now so he would like u to meet some girls in party tomorrow

Ar:- but mom itni jaldi kyun? Its only six months that I had joined the business.

V:- so what? U have to settle down some day then why not now?

Ar:- ok...can we discuss it later? Plzz. He said in a pleading tone and went to his room



After some time Mr. Wadhwa came and we see the whole wadhwa family sitting on the dining table and discussing about tomorrow's party, its arrangements and karwa chauth ceremony but there chat stopped as they heard a screeching tone of car outside and there servant informed that summit has arrived
Ar:- summit and so early? There must be some problem?

Mr. W called summit but he seemed to be very angry and it looks like he has some fight and totally ignored everyone, went straight to his room

V:- what happened to him?

Ar:-i will get him, dnt worry



Armaan entered the room with caution because last time when summit has returned in this situation he was throwing all the things in fury so he is taking the precautions and was hesitating but for a change he saw him talking on the phone, almost shouting n facing out
(he was talking with his frnd vikas)

S:- no,I am not coming back

Vi:- but they r gone already and we can go to some other place also.

Ar:- whats wrong? Summit

S:- "I will talk to u later and I am not coming anywhere" he said to vikas and then returning to
armaan he said "what?"

Ar:- i should have asked this?

S:- bhai plz dnt irritate me this time

Ar:- what happened summit?

S:- u know bhai that stupid, idiot, follish...............and he was cut between by his brother

Ar:- girl, right?

S:- was she one? I dnt care.............he was really angry(i know guys we never seen summit so angry but just imagime him in this condition)

Ar:- what did she do that makes u so angry?

S:- I cnt understand? Y people drink so much that they cnt handle that?

Ar:- so she was drunk?

S:- yes and she was so drunk that she clashed with me and poured her whole drink on my shirt...i just felt like slapping her but then that rahul

Ar:- rahul came and did nothing to u?

S:- ya....he came. He tried alot but I am too smart for him. I just wished I could spit it on her face itself

Ar:- ok...stop it now summit

S:- but i punched hard on the face

Ar:- the girl?

S:- no....that rahul

Ar:- whos rahul now?

S:- may be her boy frnd but who cares?

Ar:- no one

S:- i dnt know how can anyone fall for that idiot girl?

Ar:- may be his choice is not that gud as urs

S:- plz bhai I dnt need to have choice and anyways rahul's choice was never so bad

Ar:- so u know rahul before?

S:- ya..he was my classmate but then we have a fight and since then he always find some excuses
to have a bash with me


Ar:- ok fine, now forget about that and lets go

S:- where?

Ar:- papa is calling u

S:- ok...i will meet him after some time.

Ar:- ok....and then he left and went to see his sis and mom

N:- where is summit?

Ar:- he is coming

N:- so is that really some girl?

Ar:- ya....who else can make him so upset

N:- oh god.....i dnt know what will happen with me but what has happened?

Ar:- nothing as big but u know him na........

N:- hmmmmmm.....and she signalled him to stop as she saw summit coming down

N:- its ok summit...it happens

S:- its not ok....dids u know i had never seen such a stupid girl in my life

N:- so girls r stupid?.......she said in an explaining tone

S:- no i dnt mean that but that girl is really a stupid one

V:- ok summit...stop it now..its enough

S:- but mom, i haven't done anything but she ........anyways

V:- do u have dinner?

S:- yes mom...and his mom walked away

N:- i think we should thank her

S:- m sorry

N:- yes today because of her u r home early and i got some time to spend with my sweet bro

S:- why r u talking like that? Do I never come when u call me?

N:- ohhh...............u always do dats y u r my sweetest bro

S:- i know that

Ar:- do I exist in this happy family?

S:- of course .................no .....he said hugging him



And then the servant came and said him that mr. Wadhwa is calling him and he went
S:- hi dad

Mr. W:- its gud to see u home at this hour

S:- I know dad everyone is saying me this from the time I am back

Mr. W:- so want to inform that I have kept a birthday party for u tomorrow and u can call ur friends
4 that

S:- dad, u know I dnt like that. I feel like a child on the name of birthday parties

Mr. W:- but parties are done for socializing, isn't?

S:- yes dad, but dnt expect me to attend the guests. Bhai can handle that very well.

Mr. W:- ok...now go to sleep and make sure that u dnt misbehave with anyone at the party

S:- ok...gud nyte dad and he went


here is the next part.....plz let me know how was that and help me to improve