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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
loved it ,excvellent episode i think party sumit aur kumkum miley ge am i rigth or wrong waiting for next
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: maheen55

loved it ,excvellent episode i think party sumit aur kumkum miley ge am i rigth or wrong waiting for next



thanks 4 liking the part
summit kumkum milenge yan nhi ye to ab next yd me hi pata chalega
i will update soon
luv preet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
here is the 4th part:-


Part four:- As summit enters his room, his cell start ringing and an unknown number flashed on its screen

Summit:- hello......whos dat?

Person:- summit.

Summit:- ya...whos...............rahul?

Rahul:- happy birthday yaar

Summit:- u still remember that?

Rahul:- of course, how can someone forget ur lavish parties yaar

Summit:- thanks buddy

Rahul:- m sorry yaar for....

Summit:- u need not to be sorry yaar.....u r just defending ur girl friend

Rahul:- no no, she's just my friend

Summit:- thank god...

Rahul:- i know she behaved quite weirdly there but she is gud at heart

Summit:- i dnt care.....

Rahul:- ok...leave it yaar... i hope to see u soon

Summit:- yup, i hope to see u tonight

Rahul:- but i dnt think , u will be able to come out of ur home tonight

Summit:- than u r coming here

Rahul:- i dnt think

Summit:- its possible to refuse me..........i dnt think so.................so u r coming here

Rahul:- u will never change

Summit:- i dnt need to...u know i am the best

Rahul:- i know

Summit:- so see u at the party tonight.......hopeu haven't forget my address

Rahul:- of course..........not

Summit:- bbye

They hung up and a smile appeared on summit's lips and he thought "look like he got his brains back"





In the evening, wadhwa house was decorated and the party was on. But it seemed to be a business party rather than a birthday party. As most of the guests are from Mr. Wadhwa's circle and they are discussing about the projects and the meetings and nothing else (look so boring people na). After some time everyone notices that the birthday boy is missing from here and Mr. Wadhwa said armaan to find him and said him to behave properly in the party. When armaan enters his room, he find him talking on phone with some one

Summit:- ya i will be there on time. Ok....bbye see u there

And he cut the call and as he turned he found armaan behind him

Armaan:- u r not going anywhere else today?

Summit:- i will not go but i will slip easily before anyone notices

Armaan:- no bro. Not today unless dad will be very angry on you and he has told me to keep an eye on u so that u dnt misbehave with anyone. Now lets go out

As he enterd the hall, we see that all the people start gathering around him to wish him and he feels like trapped between all of them

Armaan:- hey.....i dnt know that u have so many admirers....he said so in order to irritate him more

Summit:- u called them admirers but i feel them like irritators

And then we see some ladies proceeding towards him and they attacked on his cheeks sequencing it and saying he is so cute. He look towards his dad for some help but in turn he just get a stern look which means behave properly and he just have to smile back...(poor summit)

At the same time vikas enters the venue

Vikas:- happy birthday yaar

Summit:- oh...vikas..what a surprise And vikas was just confused of summit's behaviour

Vikas:- what do u........

Summit:- look he is my frnd and m seeing after so many years as he is just here to wish me on my birthday.............thanks yaar.......m really touched

He said that loudly so that people can listen it and can excuse them for some time and summit takes vikas to another corner

Vikas:- what was that?

Summit:- it was just... And rahul completed his sentence

Rahul:- natak

Vikas without turning to him:- look, he also knows that...and then he stopped after seeing him

Summit:- thank god, u came here

Vikas was very confused:- what is this? and who is this?

Summit:- he is my frnd, rahul

Vikas:- U mean u became frnd after having a fight

Summit:- no we were frnds before that

Rahul:- i m sorry i was wrong that time

Summit:- oh just, forget about that

Rahul:- ok...happy birthday yaar........he said handing him a bunch of flowers

Summit:- thanks, come i will introduce to another frnds


As the malhotra's entered the party venue, shainna jumped out of joy

Shainna:- wow, it looks so nice

Prerna:- i want u to behave properly once we enter the venue

Shainna:- ok, mom

And they entered they saw Mr. Wadhwa

Mr. w:- welcome mr. And mrs. Malhotra

Anurag:- that's my pleasure mr. Wadhwa

Mr. W:- so..these r ur lovely daughters...he said looking at bot of them

Anurag:- yes, these r my two princesses, she's kumkum my eldest daughter and she's shainna

Kumkum and shainna:- hello uncle

Mr. W:- hello beta

Anurag:- kimi, shenu dnt u want to wish the special person today

Shainna:- ya dad, but we dnt know him act

Mr. W:- oh no thats no prob

Then he called Armaan and told him to talk kumkum and shainna to summit

Shainna:- so u r not the birthday boy urself

Armaan:- no, its my brothers

Shainna:- no i mean the way ur father called u, i thought its ur birthday.....kumkum signalled her to stop

Kumkum:- m sorry mr.

Armaan:- Armaan, and thats ok

Armaan tried a lot to find summit but he failed

Armaan:- m sorry, u know he might hate these parties so might be somewhere with his frnds

Kumkum:- thats ok

Armaan:- would u like to have something

Shainaa:- ya sure

armaan went to get something for the two girls

shainna:- di, he is too nice and handsome na

kumkum:- not again, everyone appears handsome to u

shainna:- oh, he's sweet but the one at club was too hot

kumkum:- ok....and a smile appeared on her face

shainna:- y r u smiling like that?

Kumkum:- now i cnt even smile also

Shainna:- u can but u have to tell me the reason

Kumkum:- i was thinking that he was shouting at me like that and i was standing in front of him like a dumb

Shainaa:- its not ur fault, di anyone would be like that

Kumkum:- thanks but after a pause what do u mean by that

Shainna:- i mean if such a handsome man would be talking to me then i can listen to him for ages

Kumkum:- he was not talking with me ......he was just about to hit me

Shainna:- but that rahul came between

Kumkum:- r u my sis or his?

Shainna:- first of all, m very thankful to god that he is not my brother

Just then Armaan came there with drinks

Armaan:- here we are

Kumkum:- oh....u dnt need to do that, we can help ourself

Armaan:- its ok....i have no problem in it.......by the way what u were talking about?

Kumkum:- nothing

Shainna:- we were talking about u?.........she said and kumkum just get amazed

Armaan:- what about me?

Kumkum:- that u r an ideal host, taking care of the guests so well when ur brother is missing

Armaan:- thanks but he is not missing....he doesn't like these kind of parties so he stays aloof from them

shainna:- i would like to meet ur brother. He is so correct......ahhhh........as she get a stab on her feet be kumkum...

Armaan:- what happened?

Kumkum:- nothing

Armaan:- well if u wish, u could roam around here

Shainna:- ya, we would love too, its so nice here

Armaan:- ok, then i will join u later...............and he went




Kumkum:- why cant u keep ur mouth shut for a moment

Shainna:- look di, i cant lie. I just say what i feel

Kumkum:- ya ya i know, ab chalein


In other part of the house we see summit, rahul and vikas discussing something:-

Summit:- plz guys, lets go. I cant tolerate this anymore

Vikas:- oh yaar, have some patience

Summit:- i feel bored here

Vikas:- summit is u will be out from here so soon, then they will start searching u

Summit:- they r already doing that...and i cant go there again

Rahul:- if u cant go in, then lets go somewhere out

Summit:- thats what i was saying yaar


And then we see the three of them climbing down the pipe, with summit at the top, vikas in the middle and rahul at the bottom

Rahul:- summit i dnt get this yaar, is there no other way to escape

Summit:- u think i am enjoying this

Vikas:- but u r habituated na

Summit:- for ur kind information, we have a normal door to our house

Vikas:- this means u r also doing it for the first time too

Summit:- no, i am professional at this

Vikas:- please make it quick rahul

Rahul:- what can i do? I cant climb a 3 storey building in seconds

Vikas:- ok fine, but make it fast. If anyone see u there in that situation they might take us like thieves

Rahul:- don't worry, summit will take care of that


Finally they got down

Vikas:- thank god, i am not wearing my white shirt, otherwise........

Summit:- stop sounding like a girl. no onw cares about ur dress

Vikas:- then y were u sounding like that one last night

Summit:- no i was not

Rahul:- u two r fools who r fighting here. Now make it fast unless we will be caught

so here is the next part........plz comment or criticize




.DarkandTwisty thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
cute lovely part preet......
i'm enjoying ur ff a lot
update soon
surakshita thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
lovely update preet just dreaming all that
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
hey preeti pls continue this part sounded good ...& fuunny too ......
hoping to see intereting things soon .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
OMG i missed some epi
preet extremely sorry dear
these days little busy...will read it soon and post my comment
do cont
afreen
RadhaKrishan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: nehanne

cute lovely part preet......
i'm enjoying ur ff a lot
update soon





thanks neha for ur comment
m happy that u r enjoying my work
will update soon
luv preet
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
RadhaKrishan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: surakshita

lovely update preet just dreaming all that




thanks dear 4 liking it and 4 ur precious comment
RadhaKrishan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: preeti4huju

hey preeti pls continue this part sounded good ...& fuunny too ......

hoping to see intereting things soon .





thanks 4 reading it dear
will try to keep it interesting
luv preet

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