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Posted: 16 years ago
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ashita lovely writting i enjoyed reading ittt
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ashita loved read this part too as always
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Posted: 16 years ago
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faulous part ashita dear!!!..............aur upar se it was a long one😃
really enjoyed reading it!
cont soon dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wowow cooll part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for a lovely long update!!!

Continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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love ur ff
plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 6

Veena was sitting in her room thinking about something.. She didn't notice someone entering the room. It was su.. He saw his mom deep in thoughts and all the thing scattered around..

Su: maa..

Ve: [back to her senses] su.. When did you come?

Su: just now.. What were you thinking? Why is everything scattered around?

Ve: nothing beta.. I was taking something and all this fell down..

"but why should you cry for that?'' su asked her noticing the tears in her eyes.. He could never see his dearones sad.

Ve: who told I was crying? Something just went into my eyes..

Su: ma.. I know when u cry and when something goes into your eyes..now leave these excuses and tell me.. What happened?

Ve: su…these stuff reminded me of jatin..

She stopped from saying anything further. Su looked at the things lying around. It was his jatin bhaiya 's things.. Su also became emotional seeing those..

Ve: these things.. They told me that my jatin will never come back to us..

She started sobbing.

Su: ma.. Aap bhi na…its now three years that bro passed away.. What will sneha think if she see you like this?

Veena continued crying.. Su didn't know how to console her.. Jatin was kul's sister kanchan's son. Kanchan passed away giving birth to jatin.. Kul bought jatin home after kanchan's death as he reminded kul of his sis and he never wanted his sis to be away from him. Kanchan's husband knowing how much kul loved his sis allowed him to take jatin with him. Jatin was six when veena came into wadhwa family.. Jatin and veena shared a mother-son bonding.. Three years later su was born.. Jatin was great son and brother.. Jatin married his lady love he met in college with everyones permission and they had a beautiful daughter, sneha. Everything was just so perfect.. But then three years before when they were coming home for diwali in a car accident jatin and wife passed away.. Sneha was not with them at that time was saved cos of that.. Sneha is with them and is a darling of everyone.. She is sharman's best buddy and partner in all the pranks..

"su.. Veena.. Where are you two?" sumit heard dadi calling them..

Su: maa.. Please stop crying.. If dadi see you in this condition..you know naa.. They all are trying so hard to forget everything..

Su wipe away his moms tears and hugs her..

Su: ma.. Jatin bhaiyya will also be sad if you cry..

Veena nods to su's words and then go to wash her face.. By that time su keeps all the things back in its place..su heard dadi calling him again..

Su: coming dadi..

Su went to dadi's room..

Da: su.. Where were you?

Su: I was with ma.. Why did you call me dadi?

Da: sneha had gone out for her piano classes.. Can you go and take her back?

Su: ji daadi..

Sneha was a great kid.. She like jatin was good in piano.. Sneha was so like jatin in everything.. Sneha was going to same place where su went for his guitar classes..

Su was about to leave for taking sneha back.. Then he heard a sound calling him..

"are you going out somewhere?"

Su saw a sweet small kid smiling at him.. She was standing there with a question in her eyes.. Just the kind of looks his mom gave..

Su: sneha.. How come you are here?..how did you come?

Sne: I came with sharman bhaiyya.. Now you tell me.. Wher are you going?

Su: ok my princess.. I was coming to take you home..

Sne: kk kaha hai?..

Su: kya hua?..

Sne: first you tell me.. Where is kk?..

"yaha hoon".. she heard a voice from the door.. From the tone sneha understood that their prank had already worked out and kk will be soon after her and sharman bhaiiyya.. And sneha ran from there leaving su and kk..!!

[next part: the prank sneha-sharman played!]

Please do leave your comments and suggestions.. hope you all are liking my story..

And all these parts I mainly concentrated on introducing all the characters.. Next part onwards it will be more of su and kk…

Posted: 16 years ago
#58
fantastic, it so nice to read this ffs. specially on weekends, cause our serial kk is not telecast on weekends, so it is a good dose for us to have, keep it up please. thanks again.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwww wonderful part ashita!!!.......................very emotional scene between su and veena😒
hope to know sneha and sharman's prank soon lol😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
i love your part really plzz contuied soon

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