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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3:

[Introducing another important character of the story.

Mr vikram kapoor: Mohnish behl]

Su and kk came down and their breakfast was ready there. seeing two plates,

Su: kya kk? They don't give you anything at home huh?

Ve: su.. What is this? Is this the way to talk?

Su: oh ho maa.. I was juz joking naa..

Ve: wont she feel bad if you talk like this?

Su: oh ma..you are talking as if you don't know kk at all.. Juz look at her eating the breakfast as if I said nothing at all..

Kk (still concentrating on eating): no aunty.. that's because I don't listen to what fools say.. !

Su: ha ha ha… what a joke..

Ve: sumit..(ve had a warning tone)

Su: ok ok ok…

Kk: by the by .. Where is sneha? didn't see her at all..

Ve: oh.. They are having some arts celebrations going on in school. So she need to go only by ten. So I thought I'll wake her up late..

Su and kk was done with their breakfast and leave for college when kul arrived.

Kul got out of the car. Veena saw kuls car coming and came into the front porch. Veena saw that there was someone else too in the car with kul.

Kul: arre veena.. dekho kaun aaya hai? This is vikram kapoor.. Mera aur raj ka college ka dosth..

She greeted the man with Kul.

Vk: namaste bhabhi.. He greeted her back.

Kul: I just met him at airport today.. Its more than twenty years that we saw each other. But he has not changed a bit..

Kul was so excited in meeting his ol' friend that he was still at the porch. Veena noticed this and said:

Ve: now will you keep him standing at the door and talk all the things kya?

Ku: oh..I forgot..come in naa..

They come and si in the hall. Dada and dadi was sitting in the main hall. They saw kul and veena coming accompanied by some other person..

Kul greet dada dadi. So does vk.

Ku: baba, you are thinking who it is right?

Da: [lookin at vk] I think I ve seen you somewhere..[he thinks for a while and says].. Kahi ye tumhare college ka dosth tho nahi.. Who jisne america shift hui thi? kya naam tha uska..

Vk was surprised at this. He couldn't believe that dada was remembering him after all these years.

Ku: waah baba.. I admit your memory..waise.. He has not changed much all these years..that same vikram who studied with us.. Just a few pounds extra.. But face looks the same.

Vk: [to dadaji]: aap ko abhi bhi mujhe yaad hai..?[he was so happy to know that they all still remembered him]

Ku: you are the one who forgot us naa after going to new york.. (kul said in a complaining tone)

Vk: its not like that I forgot you all.. I was so much into my business and stuff..

Kul: ok ok… I will give you its punishment later.. Now come sit..

Ve: mein abhi aayi. Saying this she goes to kitchen to take something for vk.

Da: [to kul] kaha mila tha vikram ko?

Kul: I saw him at airport while waiting for car. At first didn't recognise. But when I looked closely patha chala..

Vk: well I didn't recognise you at all.. You have changed a lot.

Kul: his driver was late.. So thought to take him here..

Dadi: where are you staying beta?

Vk: I just came here to meet my son. He is doing mba here in st.johns.. Final semester hai.. Also I was planning to shift to Mumbai. So came to check the new house we bought here.

Da: that's a good decision to shift here beta..

Di: waise ghar mein aur kaun kaun hai?

Vk: my wife, priya and two children, rohan and riya.. Rohan is doing the mba.. And riya has just finished her schooling. She is also joing college here.

Ku: oh I see.. Su is also in the same college.. doin engineering..

Vk: oh really.. that's a great news.. By the I didn't ask.. Where are your children? Aur kitne bachche hai?

Ku: bus ek beta hai, sumit.. Baba sumit hai yaha?

Da: he went to college.. Jus two minutes before you came.

Vk: oh.. Will meet him next time I come.. by the by ..hamara raj.. What is he doing now?

Kul: [pointing to malhothra house through the window] woh dekho.. Woh ghar.. Woh raj ka ghar hai..

Vk: what? that's so surprising..

Kul: haa.. Everything is still like olden days for us..

Vk: what is he doing now? Its long time I met him too..

Kul: raj is happily married with two kids..[noticing at the questioning look on vk's face] don't worry.. He married gayathri only..[raj and gayathri had a love marriage] He is now the chief cardiologist and md of medical trust hospital.. Gayathri is also working there.. Got two kids.kumkum and sharman.. Kk and su were born the same day and are studying now in the same class..

Vk: achcha.. Will he there at home now?

Dadi: he must have left for hospital now..

Vk: oh no.. missed him..

Kul: koi baat nahi.. This is not your last visit to here or anything .. Next time raj will also be here..

Vk: ok.. [looking at the watch]..lemme leave now.. Rohan will leave for class if am late..

Veena who was coming from kitchen with coffee and snacks told him: " aise kaise jaa sakte hai? Please have something.. You came home for the first time..

Vk have the coffee.. Vk talks some more time with dada, dadi and veena and then leave with kul for his meeting his son!!..

(next part: su-kk at college)

[well .. Please do leave your comments.. Also suggestions… ]

[and guys.. To play rohans role.. Whom do you think will be apt?.. lemme know your idea about rohan.. He is next important to su kk in the story..]

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Posted: 16 years ago
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cool part plzzzzzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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rohan role what abut aatul frm DMG
yaa cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part ashita!
cont soon dear😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok i can sence something now...............but will wait 4 ur updates..............want more of Sukk now...........nice part................do update soon..............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: preethi

rohan role what abut aatul frm DMG

yaa cont soon



thanks dear..but i want someone with li'l more mature look.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mdtafan

great part ashita!

cont soon dear😉



thanks buddy..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pearl29

Ok i can sence something now...............but will wait 4 ur updates..............want more of Sukk now...........nice part................do update soon..............



lol.. May be ya r ryt... But i wil try things a different way!:) and thanks for readin it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey'this update is a short one.. Hope you all will like it.. I did it in my break time.. My exams are going on..

Part 4:

At college..

Su kk come to college in su's car. He stops the car in front of a gang of guys and girls.

Su: kk.. Look.. We are on time today. I told naa..why to worry?

Kk: su.. Its because that you were driving at such great speeds.. I warn you..next time you will be caught for overspeed.

Su: ok..now all the fault is on me. Huh? It was for you that I drove so fast. You wanted to be here so fast. Otherwise who wants to come to class so early?

Kk: I know I know..its all my fault that you wake up late everyday..now you go park the car and come..(she said laughingly.)

Saying this she got out of the car and walked towards a gang..

There were two guys and a girl talking.. Kk joined the gang..

Kk: hey guys .. What's up? What is the hot topic of discussion today?

The three others in the gang are amit, sameer and megha . They all are in same class and sameer and megha are a couple in the gang. Amit is the happy go lucky fellow of the gang.. He is always into something that makes everyone laughs.. The gang is so famous in college.. Everyone admires them very much.. The way they all excel in some kinda extra curricular activity and how they excel in studies too.. Its their togetherness that everyone loves. They are always together for anything and everything. They all met the first year in college and became friends in the process.

Amit: good morning sweetie.. We were talking about the change in the match timings this week..

Kk: what change?

sameer: kk.. they have postponed the time of today's cricket match..damn..

Kk: uff.. Such a silly thing..

Amit: oh yea.. You only watch basketball matches ryt?

They were teasing kk.. Coz she only watches basketball.. Not because she liked the game.. But just because sumit plays basketball.. They just love teasing kk with su.. They all know that they are the best of friends but just love watching the way kk gets irritated when they tease her with su's name..

On hearing the comment from amit kk goes mad as usual..

Kk: amit' kya kaha tune?.. Am gonna kill you..

She starts running after him.. Sumit saw kk and amit running around.. He was coming towards them after parking the car. megha saw su coming towards them.

megha: su' come quickly na,.. or else today amit will be killed..

Su came there and catch hold of kk.

Su: kk.. What is this? What happened?

Kk: su..they are making fun of me yaar..

Su: hey guys.. Stop teasing my kk ok..

He scolded them with a naughty tone..

Kk: I know su.. You were also teasing me there.. am an idiot to have complaint to you..

Sameer: ha ha ha.. Good that you know that you yourself is an idiot..

Everyone laugh.. After that they all try to pacify kk's anger and finally she agrees..

Kk: haa'I will forgive you people.. But only cos you four are gonna gimme the treat at luciya's today evening.

Luciya restaurant is their favorite hangout place..

megha : ok my dear.. [then looking at the watch] now c'mon guys..its time for bell..if we don't go now we will be out of the class today..

They all walk towards the college main building..

Next part: su-kk from childhood!

Edited by Ashita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ashita very nice part!!
bechari kk everyone was teasing her even su😆
really liked sameer's dialogue when he said kk is an idiot!!...............sooo funny😆
cont soon dear😉

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