ff:pyar kaise hota hai-pt10 uptd pg 10(10/1/09)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi frenz... Am new here.. I want 2 be active here.. I ve been watchin kk for long time now.. So thot of writin a ff on su-kk..hope you all wud like it..pleas reply..


INTRODUCTION:

This is the story of two best frenz.. Their childhood, their college life.. Their small small fights..their little pranks..and above all the love that blossoms between the both of them unknowingly.. A love both of them are scarred to express because of the fear that it may affectthe friendship between their parents..

The main characters are

Wadhwa family: dada, dadi, kul, veena, sumit and sneha..(the small sneha in kzk..the small girl who was der in panchvi paas too..)


Malhotra family: Raj (kk's dad- played by ronit roy)
gayathri(kk's mom- played by smriti irani) and sharman( kk's younger brother- our very sweet gaurav)

so that was it..hop you all wil reply to me..
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preethi thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hii ash nice to see u here
and doo cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi

welcome to the forum

the begining is well written

wiating for next part

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow niceee plzzz contuied soon your ff i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi ashita
well...................the intro sounds very interesting!😛
now im desperately waiting for the next part.......................hope u will post it soon dear😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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A new ff..............great, love it...........I love the intro..................waiting 2 read more soon.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks everyone 4 your replies..

So here it goes…

Part 1:

One fine morning at the malhotra's.

Raj malhotra, the leading cardiologist in the city and md of the medical trust hospital lives there with his wife and two children. His wife gayathri was also a famous gynecologist and was working at the same hospital. Their elder daughter kumkum is a final year engineering student and the younger son sharman was a medico like them.

Raj was having the breakfast with sharman while gayathri was busy preparing their lunch. She was having a medical conference and was getting already late for that.

"sharman…. Did you take my pen drive?" kk came down the stairs…she waz dressed in white salwar and was looking like an angel…

He heard his sister coming down but continued eating the breakfast.

"sharman…dint you hear me?? Did you take it?" kk was getting angry now.

Sh: I dint take any thing..

Kk: dekho na pa .. this sharman took my pen drive and is not giving it back"

She complained to raj..

R: sh..did u take it?..if so give it back..

Sh: no dad..I dint take it seriously..

Kk: no pa..he only took it..I know..[to sh].. Give it me sh..I got my presentation today..

And am already late..

Sh: how can I give u if I don't have it?..

Now kk was getting mad at sharman.. Raj understood that it's the beginning of the fight between the two.. He looked at their fight with a smile on his face..this was a usual thing at their home..but he very well knew how the two loved each other.

"arre…whats happening here?" gayathri came out of the kitchen hearing the sound from the table.

She saw kk and sh fighting and raj watching that with a sweet smile on his face.

G: "oh my god..when will you both stop these silly fights? Already I am so late.. And now if you both start like this..[sigh] What is the problem today?"

Kk: dekho naa ma..he took my pen drive..

Sh: ma.. I didn't take any..

Both complained to gayathri.

G: sh, are you sure you didn't take it?

Sh: ma.. aap bhi? I didn't take it ma..

G: kk ..did you check in your room?

Kk: haan ma..I am sure that sh took it..

G: just check your bag once again..

Raj was enjoying the way his wife was trying to solve their fight.

Kk went to her room. After some time she came down silently. She was with all her bag and stuff.

Kk: ma.. pa.. am leaving.

G: did you get your pen drive?..

K: ha maa..it was there in ma bag itself..

She said with an embarrassed face.

"achcha.. Tho fir.." but before she could say anything kk ran out of the gate into the house opposite theirs.

G: ye ladki bhi na. she didn't have her breakfast also.. Why didn't she check her bag?

But raj who was watching sh all this while said, " but sh, how did that pen drive reach her bag?"

Sh (with a naughty smile): who tho pa.. I only kept it there.. she was not giving me that dvd last night…so I thot of this plan.. So did you like it? Did you see that look on di's face?..

Raj couldn't control his laugh.. He couldn't imagine a day without their silly fights and pranks..

But gayathri was not laughing..

Sh: " ma.. Kya kua?..why are you so tensed?.. I'll apologise to di in the evening na.."

G: no sh.. am just worried that she didn't eat anything..

Sh: "oh..that's ok ma..she must be eating veena aunty's breakfast now…"

Gayathri was relieved at this. She looked at the home opposite theirs with a smile.. It was the wadhwa house..

{to be continued..please leave your comments..}

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi

great going. enjoyed 2nd part too,. interesting story. keep it going

norzar
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great intro just loved it do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethi

cont soon intresting thing



thanks.. Wil write next part soon..

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