Pranbir FF: The College trip (Final chapter Updated) pg 11 - Page 7

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

Oh no....Sanju reached here too...n he is not alone...trouble for Pranbir...

Ranbir was right in telling Prachi to run...n finally she has obeyed...hope she will be safe...

how are they going to escape?...Please update soon

Thanks a lot❤️. Will update soon

wow..is prachi realising her feelings?... that's great...

oh no...but she got caught...that sanju😡...what is he going to do now?...

hopefully arhana or someone will reach to save Pranbir...please update soon

Mangu ki neeyat sahi nahi lag rhi🤢 Where are Aryan shahana?

wow... superb update mala...loved it...

aryan saved prachi...great...but Ranbir got injured...oh no...thank god those students n teacher realised their mistake n came to help Pranbir...

prachi hugged ranbir...cutee...n she accepted his love...awesome...

it seems Aryan's wish is also fulfilled...arhana are sweet..

loved this story, mala...you did great job... please keep writing...will be waiting for you next story

Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

wow... superb update mala...loved it...

aryan saved prachi...great...but Ranbir got injured...oh no...thank god those students n teacher realised their mistake n came to help Pranbir...

prachi hugged ranbir...cutee...n she accepted his love...awesome...

it seems Aryan's wish is also fulfilled...arhana are sweet..

loved this story, mala...you did great job... please keep writing...will be waiting for you next story

Thank you❤️. Will write but after some days😆

Originally posted by: ican

I am so happy you wrote this.

Nandini describes the scenes perfectly, the surroundings

And you have a very good way with emotions and dialouges.

A very promising start.

Do continue with picnic games and cliche getting lost in the jungle 😂😂😂😂

Thanks ican. Nandini jaisa to likh nahi sakti. But i just tried 😆😆

Originally posted by: anandhi007

Finally, something relaxing and chill amidst Maya drama. This is such a good start. Please do continue soon. Can't wait to see how you are going to go about this.

Thanks a lot Anandi. Will update if after I finished it.

The second part has been updated.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Prachi is so realistic, even that she is hurting Ranbir her thought process is very practical.

Ooooh both going to be alone, now girl needs to confess☺️

Thanks for nice comment. Hopefully she will confess 😆

Originally posted by: ican

Thank god.

Prachi is more human in this story.

She does feel bad for her mother for herself for not having that perfectly happy childhood.

Do throw some light on Ranbir's flirty ways why he thought that to be apt.

Good going🥳🥳🥳

Thanks for nice comment ican❤️.

Lol I don't have any idea what to write about Pranbirs flirty nature 😆😆. But I will try if possible 😆.