Pranbir FF: The College trip (Final chapter Updated) pg 11

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Hello guys, this is my first FF based on request by ican and Nandini. Honestly, I am very lazy and have low confidence in my writing. Hence, I was thinking I won't do it and hand hoped everyone would forget about it😆. But, unfortunately everyone remembers. So as promised this is my first part. I am sorry for being so late. I wanted to make only one shot. But it seems the story will be longer. Any reviews are welcome. I also apologize for my bad English in advance.

The college bus was departing for picnic in few minutes. Ranbir was impatiently waiting for Prachi. He was waiting for this day since it was announced about the trip. He had thought to spend all the time with Prachi and this had made him excited. As the clock was approaching the destined time, he was more and more impatient.

Suddenly from behind, someone tapped Ranbir's shoulder. He thought it was Prachi and happily looked back. But to his disappointment it was Aryan.

Aryan happily sat beside him on the empty window seat. Ranbir had reserved it for Prachi. Aryan too was enthusiastically waiting for picnic although for different reason.

Aryan had resolved he would find a perfect girlfriend for himself. He had hoped Ranbir would help him. But, Ranbir was so busy thinking about Prachi that he didn't give much attention to Aryan. Whenever Aryan brought this topic, Ranbir would go back thinking about Prachi, how she was beautiful, how he fell in love and so on. This irritated Aryan. So this time he had decided, he himself will do something.

Aryan's presence in the reserved seat irritated Ranbir. He got Angry at him. Aryan too knew it was for Prachi and still he went ahead and sat there just to annoy him.

Ranbir:(Making face thinking Prachi can come anytime) Aryan leave this seat. I reserved it for Prachi.

Aryan: No. We are brothers naa, we should sit together. Nowadays you only think about Prachi. You should give time to us too.

Ranbir: You know How much I love Prachi. Please Aryan please !! I will do anything you say, give anything you want. But please leave this seat. Can't you do this much for your bhai? Ranbir said impatiently

Aryan : Really? Then will you lend me your car for a day?

Ranbir: Yes. I promise. A good boy always remembers his promise.

Aryan: Ok. But remember it.

Then Aryan left the seat. He started walking inside the bus. The last seat was occupied by noisy students and only the third last seat on the left was empty. He sat there.

Afterward, Sahana and Prachi reached the spot. Sahana wanted to let Prachi sit beside Ranbir. She looked for a lonely seat within a pair so that Prachi won't follow her and when her eyes found one, hurriedly sat there. To her surprise, Aryan was beside her. He, too, was surprised looking her desperation to sit beside him.

Sahana was the reason they were late. First, she woke up late then, took hours to get dressed. She, like Aryan, had hoped to get a boyfriend for herself and also act as a cupid for Pranbir.

Prachi now was angry with her. She went towards her.

" What is this Sahana?" cried Prachi angrily"

"You can't see Prachi? I Want to sit beside Aryan. "

"Wha.....?" Before Aryan could speak, Sahana stamped in his feet and he couldn't speak.

" Why do you want to stay with him... "

" Because I like him," said Sahana without thinking and regretting later. Aryan was looking at her with a shocked face.

" What! I know why you are saying this" Prachi said angrily"

"Then tell me." Prachi couldn't say anything.

Now only one seat was left( besides Ranbir). But she didn't want to be with him. Ranbir was lovingly looking at Prachi." Prachi let them be. Please come here. Leave them in each other's company"

After Ranbir's confession and Prachi heroically saved Ranbir from Maya, somehow their relationship felt different for her. She was being affected by him. When he touched her, her heart started to beat faster, and she would not be herself around him. This feeling was making her anxious. She felt weak around him and weakness was something Prachi loathes the most. She remembered her mother becoming sad and weak whenever she ask question about her father. She didn't want to experience the same.So she decided to ignore him. She only came to the picnic for Sahana. So when Ranbir called him again she ignored him and looked if there are other empty seats. This made Ranbir angry. He instantly went towards Prachi.

" Prachi why are you ignoring me ?"

" I am not ignoring you Ranbir."

" Then, why don't you sit beside me? You know clearly I reserved it for you."

" Because I don't want to. I didn't like that seat" Prachi said angrily." "Really?"

" Yes"

Then which is your favorite one tell me, I promise I will arrange that seat for you "

" Ranbir, sometimes I also want some space why don't you give me one ? I am just fed up with you!"

"What are you saying Prachi, Is there any problem? " Ranbir asked with astonishment as well as concern at the same time.

"You are the problem Ranbir. Didn't you say you won't force me? So why are you forcing me to sit with you? If I don't want to I don't. Why are you not understanding ?"

Her words stroke painfully at his heart. He was silent for sometime.

"Fine then" He said and went angrily towards Aryan. He asked Sahana to sit in the seat he reserved for Prachi while he will with Aryan"

Sahana too was feeling bad for him but couldn't say anything and did what he said.

Both Prachi and Ranbir were sad now. Prachi knowing that what she said broke Ranbir's heart while Ranbir listening to Prachi's words. All his expectations and dreams were shattered now.

The bus then started to move towards destined place.

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Hi guys. I am back. This is the second part. I am not sure it is good but still due to your kind encouragement, it motivated me to write further. I have also updated my heading. More than picnic trip I felt it will be better if I say it a college trip. Also the part might be little depressing. But I assure you good parts will also come. Please also don't forget to give me your reviews. It will motivate me to write further.

Part II


Ranbir requested Aryan for the window seat. He then looked outside so that Aryan won't notice and started crying. Aryan wanted to say something but couldn't. He was angry with Prachi for behaving so rudely with Ranbir. Ranbir didn't deserve this.

On the other side, Sahana too was angry with Prachi.

"Prachi! Why did you behave so rudely with Ranbir?" Asked Sahana Angrily.

"Because he was pestering me to sit with him and I told him I don't want to. What's wrong there? " Prachi replied. Subconsciously she knew she was wrong. But, she still believed it was the best way so that Ranbir would start to maintain distance with her.

"You know clearly he respects you a lot. He likes you and he was not pestering you. He just asked you to sit beside him. You spend a lot of time on office and in the college together so naturally he will ask you. But you didn't need to behave so rudely!"

"Don't give me lecture Sahana. I know what is right and what is wrong and if you start to give me further lectures. I am going to leave this trip midway!"

Afterwards Sahana couldn't say a word. Prachi too was heartbroken but couldn't show it to anyone. Many thoughts kept circulating in her head. She remembered yesterday her mother was crying looking at something. She knew it was because of her father. Even though her father left her and her mother, she still loved that guy. This made Prachi furious.

She knew Ranbir was kind-hearted guy. Initially, because of looks and flirty nature she hated him. But, after working together with him for such a long time she had become used to him. She started liking even the things she hated about him and now whenever he came late in the office she used to feel restless.

Ranbir had recently confessed his feeling to her. She didn't know how to react about his confession. She at first though to sort it after Maya's issue. Also, she had also started to feel something she didn't realize what. After thinking a lot she came to conclusion that this relationship will be more of a problem. The major one being the contrast in background between the two families.

Ranbir was from a rich family. He got whatever he wanted in his life while she has struggled. She also knew Ranbirs family well too. They were very kind and sweet to her But that doesn't mean they would accept a middle class girl as their future daughter-in-law and even if somehow her family agree about their relationship the differences will remain. The other reason for her conclusion was because she found out that her father was rich and hence misunderstood that her parents separated because of background issues.

She knew she was attracted to Ranbir and since she didn't want this relationship to develop further and becomes as weak as her mother, she wanted to close this chapter as soon as possible.

After half an hour of bus trip. Finally, they reached their destination. The spot was in a flat barren land in a high elevation. Below it was a river and then on the other side of the river was big forest. There was also a rainfall nearby the spot which converges to the river. Although the spot itself wasn't great, very beautiful scenery could be viewed from the spot.

But it didn't make any difference to Ranbir. He didn't want to see anything besides Prachi. He had hoped she will give him attention again after they reached the spot. But, the wish was too good to be true. Prachi kept on ignoring him.

The college students then formed a round circle. They at first played antakshari, and then they decided to showcase each one's talent. Prachi started having headache and left the spot and went in her camp.

Ranbir's sadness was very visible in his eyes. Even his friends could see it. Some of them wanted him to make him happy, so they joked with him. They then requested him to play a song. Ranbir at first declined but after a lot of request accepted.

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyan hai

An-dekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyan hai

An-dekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai

Lagne lagi ab zindagi khaali hai meriLagne lagi har saans bhi khaali

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere

Koi khalish hai hawaon mein bin tere

Bin tere, bin tere, bin tereKoi khalish hai hawaon mein bin tere


Prachi listened from inside. She, too, was emotional. Afterwards tears flew from Ranbir's eyes, and he left the spot midway and went inside his camp.

In the night there was a huge thunderstorm. Everyone were inside except Prachi. Prachi couldn't sleep and went to cry outside in the rain. She felt as if her own emotions were coming from the sky . She went in the border from where she could see the river. The boundary was separated by wooden wall so that no one would fall from the mountain top.

Prachi started to cry holding the wall. As Ranbir too couldn't sleep, he too went outside. He saw Prachi there and then planned to go inside when suddenly the wall Prachi was holding started to break.

Prachi!!!! Ranbir cried and rushed towards her as fast as he can. Prachi was now holding a portion of the wooden wall and was barely hanging on.

"Ranbir!!" She cried

Ranbir held her hand tightly.

"Don't worry Prachi. I won't let anything happened to you!" Ranbir cried and then used as much force as he can to pull Prachi upward.

The rainfall was so extreme that none of their friends could hear their voices. There was also no time to call anyone. Ranbir used all of his force. But the place was very slippery because of the rain. Instead of him pulling Prachi upward, he was the one who was instead being pulled down.

Ranbir couldn't hold any longer and both of them fell down from the top and plunged into the river.

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Hi friends. I am back again. Sorry for being late. I hope you guys like it.

Part III

Prachi was unconscious and the river discharge was high. Ranbir was still in his sense. He didn't leave Prachi's hand during the entire fall. He knew he needs to do something and soon. Both of them were now flowing along with the river. Ranbir was able to grab one of the tree branches that was floating by. Some of its parts were still on the ground and the river had not been able to completely wipe it off. Ranbir tightly hold one of its branch from one hand and pulled Prachi along with him from the other with enormous strength and both of them were out of the river.

Afterward, he tried to bring Prachi back to consciousness. Prachi was trembling because of the cold. It was very important for them to stay somewhere. Ranbir was very worried. It was a miracle that they survived the river. But, the problem was not over. He carried her in his arms and started to look for a place where they can stay against the rainfall and do something about Prachi's condition.

After a long walk in the forest, he found an opening in the mountain. It was big enough that they could stay for a while. After careful inspection, he took Prachi inside. He needed to make the place warm. He started making fire. he loved going camps with his friends. He hadn't realized it would be so handy one day.

He placed Prachi near the fire and started to rub Prachis's hand and legs in turn. He continued it for the whole night.

Next day

Sahana woke up but Prachi was not there and she kept on sleeping. The rain hadn't stopped and there was a high chance today's trip might be postponed.

"Prachi must be enjoying the rain" Sahana thought and then slept again until there was a whisper in her ear.

"Sahana! Wake up" it was a boy's voice. She ignored the voice and turned other side

"Sahana! Sahana! " These voice kept on echoing in her ears.

Irritated by the voice she opened her eyes only to see Aryan.

"Ar...." before she could speak further Aryan tightly closed her mouth with his hands.

"Keep quiet Sahana the other girls are sleeping and come outside with me. " he said.

Sahana followed him.

In the forest

Prachi was still unconscious. She finally showed some movement which Ranbir noticed and went close towards her. He curiously stared at Prachi when suddenly Prachi opened her eyes.

For an instant, they were lost in each other but Prachi got her sense back and threw Ranbir away.

"Flirt! Pervert! Idiot! Fool! What were you trying to do?"

"Wai..."

"Wait what?" Prachi didn't let Ranbir speak and start blasting him until she again felt weak, dizzy and nearly fainted again.

"Prachi!"

Ranbir went towards her and grabbed her.

"You don't have the energy to even stand but have all the energy to lecture me. Now be quiet!"

Ranbir carefully placed her in one of the corner of the cave. Prachi kept quiet for some time and carefully inspected her surrounding. she started remembering yesterday's incident. For a split second, she had believed she was going to die. It's only because or Ranbir she was alive .

All his branded shirt, trouser, his shoes, and even his face was filled with mud. Coming from a rich family, he must never have to face such problems in his life she thought. It again made her feel guilty.

"Why did you save me? " Prachi asked in a strict tone.

"Why? Does there need to be a reason to save anyone?"

"I don't like it when someone suffers because of me. " Prachi said to him.

"I am not suffering, on the contrast, I am enjoying the time here. We are here alone and no one to disturb us. I was waiting for an alone moment like this! " Ranbir said in a funny tone.

"Don't joke Ranbir. I am serious. You always have to suffer because of me"

"Oh! so I am the only one who suffers? What about you? Didn't you risk your life to protect me from Maya?"

"That scenario was different! "

"How is it different and lately what has happened to you? You were so different before but since coming this trip you don't want to talk to me. I have noticed You are trying to distance me from you. What is going on in your mind?"

"Its nothing like that"

"It's like that! Is there any problem Prachi? is something bothering you? Tell me Prachi. We can solve the problem together but if you don't tell me I can't do anything. Please tell me." Ranbir asked with concern while Prachi stayed silent.

In the camp

Aryan took Sahana outside the camp.

"What happened Aryan? Why did you bring me here?" Sahana asked.

"Where is Prachi?"

"She must be enjoying the rain"

"But I don't see her anywhere. "

"What! Sahana then looked at the surrounding only to realize Prachi was not there."

"Then where is Prachi?"

"Even Ranbir is not here since last night."

"What?" Sahana asked surprised

"Yeah. Yesterday he was sleeping with me. In the night I felt thirsty so I woke up in the middle of the night only to not find him. I didn't care yesterday but even today I can't find him."

"Are you guys playing a prank with me?"

"No no. Why would we? today I searched for him everywhere but he is nowhere to be found. Then while coming to search him, I found the fence broken. Out of curiosity, I went there to check what had happened and then found a ring there. It looked like Prachi's. But I was not so sure. I had to ask Prachi about Ranbir anyway so I came to the camp to ask about Ranbir to realize even Prachi is missing."

"Can you show me the ring?"

"Yes. Look here"

"It is Prachi's!" Now Sahana was Panicking.

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Part VI

Hi friends. This part is especially dedicated to Nandini and Ican. I still haven't thanked them enough for encouraging me to write.

"Because we are getting too close that's not good"

"What do you mean? Tell me clearly

"Listen Ranbir. I know you love me, but we are different. We come from different backgrounds. You are from a rich family while I am middle class. A rich boy and poor girl love story only looks good in a novel. But, the real-life is different. Your parents must have aspirations to get you married with rich girl. They will never agree with our relationship. So it's better we maintain distance." Prachi expressed her views to Ranbir.

"But I love you, and in any relationship, love is most important, social class is not"

"Yeah. I agree love is important but only love is not enough. Look at my parents, they claim to love each other but still, they separated. It must be because of class, and what's the guarantee that you won't leave me like my father? Decisions in life should be made through the brain, not through the heart. " Prachi didn't realize her words. Her comparison with her father pierced Ranbir's heart.

"Do you think I will leave you Prachi? Do you think I am like that? Is this how much you trust me? I am not like your father! I will never leave you !"

"I know you are good-hearted but still ...."

In some other part of the forest

The forest was getting denser as Aryan and Sahana kept following the river bank. Aryan was sure that if they follow the river bank they might find them hence kept following the river. He was still helping Sahana walk. Aryan had no problem walking and supporting Sahana but even Aryan support was not enough for Sahana. She was finding it difficult to move her legs. Her fall was forward hence had injured her knees. At every step, the pain kept on increasing. But, in fear Aryan would scold her, kept silent, until she couldn't hold it any longer.

"Aryan Please stop for a while, I can't walk"

"Yeah! I know that's why I am giving you support." He didn't understand what she meant.

" No Aryan! my pain is increasing. I won't be able to move my legs further now!"

"If you can't walk why did you come? I told you to stay in the camp but you had to come here and now look what is the consequence!"

"Stop Aryan! You have said to me enough! I am already in a lot of pain and instead of giving me sympathy you just keep on scolding me." Sahana started crying. Aryan never had an experience of making girls cry. He didn't know what to do. He was missing Ranbir. Only his bhai could give some tips relating to girls. But, it was not possible now. He needs to do something himself. He took out a handkerchief from his pocket and gave it to Sahana. Sahana took it wiped her tears.

"Show me your wounds. Why didn't you tell me before?" He said in a soft voice so that she wouldn't cry further.

"I was afraid of you"

"Afraid of me? You are the first person who is afraid of me" Aryan said smiling which made Sahana smile too.

She showed her wounds. She had hurt her knees. The wound was deeper than what Aryan had expected. Blood was oozing from her knees. He felt dumb not noticing it and was surprised that Sahana was able to endure pain for this long.

He then tied the handkerchief, he had gave her in the injured area. After resting for a while. Aryan decided to continue the walk. All of a sudden Aryan came towards Sahana. He placed his arms under Sahana's knees and around their back. Sahana was surprised but couldn't say anything.

"Can we travel now?"

"Yes" Sahana couldn't speak further.

Both of them were feeling awkward, but liked the moment. They were feeling different sensation never experienced before. Aryan cheek was turning red which Sahana noticed and kept smiling looking at him. Aryan was blushing hard. He couldn't look back to Sahana.

Back to the cave

"Still? Do you think I will leave you? If I really wanted to leave you, I would have left you by now and never take all this trouble."

"Then leave me Ranbir! I didn't tell you to take so much trouble for me. Look at your condition now. You don't look like you belong to a rich family. You always end up in mess because of me and later if we actually get close there will be more trouble for you. Let our relationship be like before. Let us just be employee and employer"

"But I enjoy these trouble if I am with you. I don't care how I look, what will I become when I am with you. I forgot everything and just enjoy looking at you. You are very precious to me, infact one of the most precious thing to me. When you are with me nothing matters to me."

Prachi remembered the time Ranbir stood up for her. In Diwali when everyone were against her, when she was kidnapped, he was willing to take a bullet for her, he went jail for her even when they used to hate each other. These moments made her happy but she still had a hardened face. Ranbir continued his speech.

"Also your father was wrong to leave you and mother. If your father was bad doesn't mean everyone will be like him. You need to move on Prachi and give chance to others. Don't lament on your past and destroy your present. I am sure your mother too has the same wish. Give me a chance. I am confident I will never let you down. I will fulfill every expectation you have, I will never get affected by what others say. "

"And what about your parents?"

"Don't worry about my parents. They will not have any problem My mother too is middle class and adores you and my dida too. In fact, I have already shared my feelings to dida."

"What?" Prachi was surprised

Their conversations continued. They were very happy with each other and both were glad to be with each other's company. by now both of them were hungry but didn't care. Both were engrossed in the talk and enjoyed the moment without caring about any other things until they heard footsteps approaching them.

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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I am so happy you wrote this.

Nandini describes the scenes perfectly, the surroundings

And you have a very good way with emotions and dialouges.


A very promising start.

Do continue with picnic games and cliche getting lost in the jungle 😂😂😂😂

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Part IV

Aryan and Sahana reached the teacher and explained everything. Aryan also called both families and told what had happened Both families were worried. The teacher called police to search for Ranbir and Prachi while sahana was crying.

"If they fell from this height. They are as good as dead" the teacher was pessimistic.

"How can you be so sure without properly searching them? " Aryan was angry at the teacher.

"I, too, think the same Aryan" one of Ranbir's friend said from behind

"But we should at least try to search for them before reaching conclusion!"

"The police will do it. Don't worry"

"But it will take time for police to reach here. If Ranbir and Prachi are hurt and need us right now?" Aryan was concerned for both of them.

"But we can't risk life other students. The forest is dense and there might be wild animals"

"Fine then!! I am going to look for them myself. Is anyone willing to come with me?" Aryan asked his fellow friends but unfortunately no one was interested.

"So this is your friendship! Ranbir helped you guys when in need but when he needs our help no one is interested! I am disappointed with you guys. All of you are selfish! "

Everyone was silent.

"Ok but whatever happens I will not be responsible for you. Go at your own risk. " Similar to other students, teacher was not much concerned about Ranbir or Prachi

"Ok. I am going on my own"

"Wait Aryan I am also coming" Sahana was now hopeful that they could do something about Prachi and Ranbir.

"No sahana. The forest is dense and not good for girls. So I will go my self"

Sahana tried to make Aryan understand but it was in vain. Sahana had to agree with what Aryan said and Aryan headed towards the forest.

In the forest

Prachi and Ranbir were silent since their last conversation. Finally Prachi started speaking

"You know Ranbir, My father left my mother when I was young"

"Yeah. I know. You told me once. "

"But you still don't know many things."

"If you tell me only then I will know. "

"He is very rich and popular. But I don't know who he is. I even don't know his name."

Prachi then started to pour her heart to Ranbir

When I was young, I always wanted a father. My mother although struggled, was able to fulfil my needs. But I always felt something missing in my life. I could see my friends coming to school with their father, even Shana's father was very nice. He used to care about her every small wish which made me envy even her.

I was curious about my father so I asked my mother many times. But, she never gave details about him. Most of the things I know are from the neighbors or through my mother's gossips.

"One day I found out that he left my mother. I know she loves him a lot. She also tells me he too loves us but I still don't believe her. If he love her he wouldn't leave us . I mean can someone leave the person who love them so blindly? "

"No never" Ranbir said.

"Ranbir if you love someone, don't you want to see them ?"

"Obviously! I wouldn't have been able to stay one second without looking or thinking about my loved ones. "

"But my father never came to look at us even once. If he is rich he must have resources to know about us. But he just doesn't care. Only my mom is foolish enough to think that he loves her

After knowing the truth I got very angry with him. I bashed him infront of my mother and guess what my mother did?"

"What?"

"She slapped me. But even that didn't stop me from insulting my father. I told my mother I hate him, and don't want to see him ever again. My mother started crying and since my insult was unbearable, she fainted. Although I hate my father, even to this day, I can't see my mother in such a sorry state. So afterward I didn't talk about him in front of my mother"

Ranbir silently continued to listen to her.

"My mother cries thinking about him even now which annoys me. After knowing the truth, I started hating boys. I know not boys are the same but still, every boy reminded me of my father and his betrayal. I had difficulty talking with them or making friends with them. I started being rude to them. My friends used to talk about boys, their crush, which never interested me. They wanted to look good so that someone could notice them. But, these things never came in mind. I was only interested in studies. I wanted to have a good career so that I could fulfill my mother's wish and have an independent life. Even after coming here, I kept maintaining distance with the boys and then you came in my life"

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Hi guys I am back. I wanted this story as os but it just keeps on elongating😆. I don't know when it will finish. I think maybe with 4-5 more chapters. Please bear with me for the time being. Also don't forget to like and comment.

Part V

"What was your first impression on me?" Ranbir was curious to find out.

"Do you really want to know? I am sure you won't like it"

"Yeah I want to know"

"I disliked you. You were the type I hate the most. " Prachi suddenly started smiling remembering their first interaction.

Ranbir wondered women are really difficult to understand. Little ago when she told about her father, her mood was off but now talking about him brought back her smile. He, too, was glad that his topic brought a smile back to Prachi's face.

"Really? Am I that bad?" Ranbir was making face.

"No. Not" You are good. I don't hate you but initially, I misunderstood you.

"Tell me what you thought about me?"

"I thought you were flirt, idiot who likes girls company. After all, when I first meet you you were surrounded by girls" Prachi was enjoying the conversation

"I couldn't understand why any girl would be crazy for you just because you were a good athlete. Your looks too were average for me."

"What?"Ranbir was surprised.

"You think I am average looking?" Her words hurt Ranbir.

"Yeah" Prachi was enjoying teasing him

"How Prachi how? I am the most handsome boy in the class. You have a very bad taste for boys. What is wrong with my looks?"

"Your nose is too long and your face is a perfect circle just like the ball you play !"

Ranbir was very proud of his looks. He couldn't believe what Prachi said. Her words hurt him.

"Don't feel bad Ranbir. It was my initial impression. As I started to interact with you, I started liking you as a person. You are the first guy whom I enjoy talking. Also, your looks seem fine now"

Ranbir felt a little better.

"So if you like me why have you started to behave weirdly especially in this trip?"

Ranbir was intensely looking at her. Prachi sensed that she won't be able to lie to him this time.

In the Forest

The intensity of rainfall was gradually decreasing with time. Aryan was now inside the forest looking for Ranbir and Prachi. He went towards the river bank. The area was muddy because of the rain. He had felt someone was following him, but he was so engrossed in looking for Prachi and Ranbir that he didn't care until he heard someone crying and calling him. It was Sahana. Despite him saying not to come to the forest, she secretly followed him.

Aryan pace was faster than her, and she was having difficulty catching him. It was very important that she is nearby someone otherwise she herself would get lost. Since her whole focus was on Aryan she slipped in a muddy puddle. All her clothes were now filled with mud and in fear that she will not be able to catch him and she will be alone she started crying and calling him.

"Idiot! What happened to you! and why are you here? I told you not to follow me." Aryan was surprised to see her.

" But I won't be satisfied until I find my sister. I won't go until I find Prachi" Sahana was still sobbing

"Idiot who herself will get lost has come to find her sister Great!. Go back!"

"No"

"Why?"

"Because I don't know the way."

"Oh god! I had enough problems and now one new problem has been added. Now stop crying and stand up"

"I can't. Can you give me your hand?"

Aryan gave his hand so that sahana could come out. She had injured her leg so he gave her shoulder to walk.

Aryan was angry with his fate. He wanted to enjoy the picnic and find new girlfriend. But he has been stuck Sahana who is not his type.

Slowly they started going deeper and deeper in the forest.

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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Part VIII

Ranbir had fought with Sanju numerous times and by now knew his strength is similar to Sanju's. But, today he needs to fight with more strength than what has. He is one, they are five. If not for him but for Prachi. He needs to protect her at any cost.

Prachi kept on running. Her speed was faster than her usual pace. She didn't know where she was going but she ran as far as she could. It was already afternoon, and she hadn't eaten or drink anything but still, she had strength. It was something that surprised her. She kept on thinking how is this possible? Finally, she realized. It was because she wanted to help someone, someone who fought for her, who will do everything for her. Someone special, very close to her heart.

Sanju punched Ranbir, in reply Ranbir too punched him but before he could do anything further Changu grabbed Ranbir's arms and let Sanju beat Ranbir. Ranbir was helpless.

"Go and bring your bhabi!. We four are enough here " Sanju asked Mangu.

"Ok as you say, boss"

"No! I won't let you!"

Strength came back to Ranbir. He freed himself out of the clutches of Changu and then fought back. He then punched Sanju in his stomach. It was hard to punch. Blood oozed from Sanju's mouth. But, he was late. He couldn't catch Mangu.

"Be safe Prachi" Only Prachi was in Ranbir's mind while fighting with Sanju.

In the middle of Jungle

It's been an hour since she started to run. Prachi had intuition someone was silently following her for a while but now she was sure. She didn't want to look back. But, in hope that it might be someone who could help, she slightly looked back. The person hid in the trees. But, some of his clothes were visible. She instantly realized it was Sanju's apprentice.

"What should I do now? And what happened to Ranbir?" Her body shivered.

"No! Nothing can happen to him. We survived the fall. Sanju is nothing. He is an idiot, nothing is comparable between him and Ranbir. Be positive Prachi, be positive!" Prachi kept her composure.

"I just need to run and hope that I find someone for help"

She then continued her run. The place was very steep. But, nothing could stop her today. She continued running not taking any break.

Mangu realizing that Prachi had noticed him continued to chase her but without hiding.

"Bhabi! Bhabi!"

"Don't run bhabi. Sanju Bhaiya is waiting for you."

Prachi ignored him and continued running. But, Mangu was faster. Prachi got hit by a stone and fell. Mangu finally caught her.

"Bhabi come on! Come with us. There is no point running. Besides, your boyfriend must be dead by now."

"What?"

"Yeah. He was already helpless when I was there. Sanju bhaiya must have killed him by now"

"I don't believe you."

"Think Prachi think! While Prachi was sill down, She grabbed some mud in her hand without Changu noticing. When she stood up threw the mud in Mangu's eyes.

Mangu was helpless

"You!!..." He was too much in pain to go for Prachi. Prachi ran away. She thought she was finally safe. But she was wrong. Mangu recovered and then again started running towards her. This time he wanted vengeance. He caught prachi again and forcefully grabbed her hand.

"You are very stubborn. I was soft on you. But you don't understand good language and now after what you did to me, you won't get away so easily" this time, there was something sinister in Mangu. It frightened Prachi.


Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: mala06

Yeah i think so too😆. Let's see what happens. Even i am not so sure😆



The writers of the show should see our forum

In between the toxin maya drama

They should show college scenes too

Doosri peedhi young generation

They can have college fests trips competitions and exams.


We need a break from the toxic drama

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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Awesome update Mala. Loved it. Poor Pranbir. Both are hurting. But I can understand Prachi’s pov. In fact if you think logically then she is right. Often background causes a couple to part ways. Oh no! they both fall in the river! Are we going to get forest romance? Please please please.Update soon Mala. Can’t wait to read more.


You should write a SS on college fests

I swear the CVs should see it.

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