Pranbir FF: The College trip (Final chapter Updated) pg 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome part Mala. So beautiful. Loved Pranbir's convo. Awe! No wonder Ranbir is upset. Now, if someone will say he is average looking to such a handsome guy, he is bound to be upset. But Prachi is right. More than beauty it is the nature of a person that matters. Good question Ranbir. Don't let go until she replies. Awe! That Arhana moment is so cute. Poor Sahana! I just knew she will follow. Aryan sweetie you have got the girlfriend you have been looking for. ;) Update soon.


P.S - Good for me coz I love this story. So keep extending. 😉 And after it finishes I will start nagging you for another one. 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Part VII

The person approaching was none other than Sanju with his Changu Mangu and two of his villagers. He came to get the woods.

All of them were surprised. After everyone knew about Sanju's involvement in MMS, Rhea told him to run in some nearby village while she went abroad for some time. So he was living in Mangu's village.

"Oh surprise! Didn't expect to see both of you together. God has some unexpected ways to give their follower what they want. See Prachi even god wants us together" Sanju started to laugh

"Oh shut up! I will never be with yours. Don't you remember what you get last time. This time too you will get the same." Reminding Sanju of her slap.

"How can I forget Prachi? The sweet slap you gave it to me. I occasionally touch my cheeks just to get the feel of your hands "

His speech creeped out Prachi while Ranbir just kept listening. He suddenly grabbed Prachi's hand and pulled her towards him. Prachi was surprised by his sudden act.

"When you get a chance just run" Ranbir said silently.

"No way! I am not leaving you"

"Understand Prachi. There are five of them th.."

"Stop your chit-chat " Sanju was annoyed by their sudden closeness

"Ranbir! This time you won't get away. I am going to kill you and throw you in the river and then make Prachi mine. How much rich you might be, No one will find out what happened to you."

"Then let us fight. One to one for Prachi." If you win Prachi is yours and if I win Prachi is mine. Is that ok?

"Ha ha ha, No!" You think I am an idiot!.

"I am not going to leave you this time."

They came towards Ranbir to attack him. Ranbir was still holding Prachi's hand. He pushed Changu and went out of cave but before they could run further, Sanju and his friends surrounded them

"Listen Prachi! Do what I say! I will make an opening for run away!"

"No!" Prachi was still

One of the villagers grabbed Prachi.

"Prachi bhabi! You and Sanju bhaiya look like perfect couple."

Prachi tried to release herself but couldn't. His strength was beyond her tinly body.

"You!"

Ranbir separated them but the other guy beat him. Prachi was hurt seeing Ranbir get beaten. She finally realized what he meant. She will only be the weakness here. He won't be able to fight properly while protecting her.

"Ranbir started fighting with all of them"

"Prachi Run! Run fast ! as fast as possible."

Prachi was standing still, not knowing what to do. Changu came towards her but before he could come further close Ranbir punched him.

Prachi started running.

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Final Chapter

Before Mangu could do anything to Prachi, Aryan came in time and saved Prachi. Mangu realising he wasn't a match with Aryan ran away. Prachi was still in a shock after whatever happened just few moments ago. Fortunately, Sahana was there to calm her.

"Where is Ranbir?" The question from Aryan brought further misery to Prachi

"Oh no Ranbir! "

"Aryan please save Ranbir. He is fighting with Sanju and its all for me"

"Sanju? " Shana and Aryan ecoed same words. Both were surprised knowing Sanju was here.

"I don't have time to explain. Please aryan save Ranbir. He is in trouble all because of me" Prachi was sobbing.

"Don't cry Prachi. He will be fine. show me the direction "

Yeah ok. All three of reached the spot but were surprised by what they saw.

All of the friends who came with them for Picnic were there along with their teacher. Both students and teacher felt bad after Aryan and Sahana left. So they too decided to search for Ranbir. They splilt within themselves and searched for Ranbir and Prachi.

Sanju and his friends had overpowered Ranbir. He would have died but thankfully one group of friends arrived in time to save him. They beat Sanju and his goons and placed them in their inspection. The police was arriving soon to take them.

"We are so sorry Prachi. You were so much trouble. But instead of looking for you we were unwilling to go" one of the friend feeling guilty apologised.

" If you realise your mistake. Its ok. Don't stress yourself. But where is Ranbir?Is he ok?" She was anxious not finding Ranbir.

"Don't worry Prachi. These goons were trying to kill him but we arrived in time. He is still badly injured. So some students are giving him first aid treatment. You can find him there. " the guy pointed on his right.

Prachi thanked the guy and others for Saving Ranbir. Then, along with Aryan and Sahana ran in the same specified direction.

Finally, Prachi saw Ranbir. He was injured from top to bottom. His body was full of scars. His left hand was swollen as if they had been broken.

Tear came from Prachis eyes. Without thinking she hugged Ranbir tightly."

"Thank you Ranbir! Thank you for everything you have done till now"

Ranbir for an instant forgot about all the pain. Her hug was like an antidote.

"For you everything" Ranbir proudly said.

Everyone clapped. They were very impressed by the heroic deed of Prachi and Ranbir. None of their friends thought they would survive. But here they were alive and together.

"Wow someone had so much fun in the Jungle" Aryan teased Ranbir. Aryan put his hand on Ranbir's shoulder

"Ouch! Aryan" Don't put hand its paining.

"What? And where was your pain when Prachi hugged you?"

"In Prachi's case it was different. Her hug is a medicine for me" Ranbir got a warm pleasure again thinking about the hug.

"By the way. I am feeling bad for you. I know you wanted to get a girlfriend in this trip"

"Don't feel bad bhai. The trip was not so bad" Aryan looked towards Sahana who was also looking at him and smiled.

After few minutes the police arrived there and caught Sanju and the others. The kohlis too arrived. But Ranbir denied going with them. He told them to go and he will come home with his friends. He wanted to end this trip in a proper way.

Aryan placed Ranbir in the same seat he had reserved for Prachi last time. This time Prachi directly sat besides Ranbir. Aryan and Sahana sat together. Both were blushing but were glad . But, there was still some awkwardness.

Ranbir placed his hands on Prachis and held it tightly. Prachi didn't react. Instead she placed her head in Ranbirs shoulder. Ranbir took it as green signal. Even without Prachi saying anything, he understood Prachi had accepted his love. He was the happiest person alive in the planet right now.

This trip was the turning point in the life of four people. They were never going to forget about it in their lifetime.

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oye! This is bad English? 😆 Your English is very good. Finally my nagging worked and you have posted. 😆

And this part is beautiful. Loved it totally. Awe! Ranbir reserved the seat for Prachi! So sweet! Aryan is too much. 😆 Took advantage of our Romeo. 😆 Arhana are out to find bf/gf for them. Why to look far when the solution is near. 😆Oh no! Prachi 😡 why are you so harsh? 😡Poor Ranbir is heartbroken. 💔 I understand Prachi's fear though. Poor Pranbir. Hope they get over this difficult phase and come together soon. Update soon. Can't wait to read more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Oye! This is bad English? 😆 Your English is very good. Finally my nagging worked and you have posted. 😆

And this part is beautiful. Loved it totally. Awe! Ranbir reserved the seat for Prachi! So sweet! Aryan is too much. 😆 Took advantage of our Romeo. 😆 Arhana are out to find bf/gf for them. Why to look far when the solution is near. 😆Oh no! Prachi 😡 why are you so harsh? 😡Poor Ranbir is heartbroken. 💔 I understand Prachi's fear though. Poor Pranbir. Hope they get over this difficult phase and come together soon. Update soon. Can't wait to read more.


We all need to get back to writing guys.

Chalo chalo.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandini25

Oye! This is bad English? 😆 Your English is very good. Finally my nagging worked and you have posted. 😆

And this part is beautiful. Loved it totally. Awe! Ranbir reserved the seat for Prachi! So sweet! Aryan is too much. 😆 Took advantage of our Romeo. 😆 Arhana are out to find bf/gf for them. Why to look far when the solution is near. 😆Oh no! Prachi 😡 why are you so harsh? 😡Poor Ranbir is heartbroken. 💔 I understand Prachi's fear though. Poor Pranbir. Hope they get over this difficult phase and come together soon. Update soon. Can't wait to read more.

Lol thanks yaar. Will update it as soon as I can. Hopefully they will get over this phase soon 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome start, Mala...you are such a good writer👍🏼

So never happening picnic in serial is happening in you story...looking forward to it.

Ranbir was so excited for trip..our Majnu boy❤️...but feeling bad for him😭

Prachi is fighting with her own emotions...getting affected by Ranbir...realising her love but scared to accept

Hopefully Prachi will accept her feelings soon n then will talk to Ranbir.

It seems Arhana love story will start soon too

Want to see Pranbir happy together...update soon😊

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

Awesome start, Mala...you are such a good writer👍🏼

So never happening picnic in serial is happening in you story...looking forward to it.

Ranbir was so excited for trip..our Majnu boy❤️...but feeling bad for him😭

Prachi is fighting with her own emotions...getting affected by Ranbir...realising her love but scared to accept

Hopefully Prachi will accept her feelings soon n then will talk to Ranbir.

It seems Arhana love story will start soon too

Want to see Pranbir happy together...update soon😊

Thanks a lot yaar. Honestly this was mine first try so didn't expect great complement. But you guys are overwelming me with good comments😆😆. Will update you guys when its finished.

Edited by mala06 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Finally, something relaxing and chill amidst Maya drama. This is such a good start. Please do continue soon. Can't wait to see how you are going to go about this.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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feeling bad for Pranbir....both are hurt

prachi is trying to suppress her feelings.. poor girl...she is scared to get into relationship because of her mother's pain... hopefully she will open up to Ranbir n then he will help her get over her insecurities

now Pranbir r alone...prachi won't be able to avoid him....update soon

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 5 years ago

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