Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 33

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Why? It's not dukhi part as such..

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Pragya"s insecurity is finished so mine. Abhi is serious about Pragya, about spending life with her. it's great. Then why did they separate? One thing is, everytime when Pragya tries to tell one thing to Abhi, he misunderstands. I think because of this only they separated. Waiting for the next chapter eagerly. And thank you for the pm.

Originally posted by: frenzyy

such a pure love!! beautifully portayed! he wants his chashmish attention all the time.. she got him the tune and she was mesmerized with his voice😳awww, loved the childish rockstar when he texted her saying "becaue you cut the call"😆😆 teasing her on the phone was cute.. he is so demanding at times yet honest and true.. with every part, I like your abhi a tad bit more.. the way he assured her of their future, anger at her words and then understanding her - too good! totally understand chashmish insecurities and her constant need of assurance from him.. they are soo in love and its really awesome that chashmish found her true love in the rockstar.. Now, I am not even a little bit curious to find out what made them part ways but simply dread it.. wonderful update.. totally "addicted" to "restless"😃😛

Originally posted by: Nora9497

Tia,what should I say?

For the last 7 chapters I used to start my day by reading it and today in the morning I was so disappointed because it wasn't there but checking before going to sleep and I found this amazing chapter waiting for the next CHAPTERS

I'm getting more excited by every passing chapter to know what happened to separate them and how will they meet again and make it up hopefully I'm right

Originally posted by: Shafoo

that is amazingg update

Originally posted by: -mina-

Yes! My favourite moment and the moment I can't stop thinking about is Abhi's reaction to her asking if they have a future or not. On the one hand I love his sense of values that he wouldn't choose to get so involved with Pragya if he wasn't intending to be serious with her. I very much love his explanation about the time in the future when they're able to stand on their own and prove to the world that they're good together. On the other hand it really annoyed me that he expected Pragya not to question him on that point and got irritated that she didn't just realize what was in his head. Either way, such an awesome moment, with Pragya getting a simple and powerful answer in an unexpected way 😲 And it beautifully shows the difference between Abhi's instinctive understanding of their bond versus Pragya's need to put things into terms that society can understand 👏

Mina!!! I was hoping that you would catch on this. That's why I was like did she read and if she did what did she think of it.

Yes, that is Abhi's issue. He wants to be understood right even when things look wrong. And Pragya needs to see everything right to believe as right.

Loved the hot moments with Abhi nibbling at her neck, playing with her breasts, etc. He so feels he has full access and can't see all the obstacles she has made in her mind. Sort of can't help feeling happy for him, imagining how good he must be feeling in some of those moments, just to have what he wants to cherish.

He lives in the moment.. and to the fullest.


The description of Pragya watching Abhi work at his music is well done and feels so important for the story and the character. I like how you have shown how important it is to him, like in a balancing kind of way...he loves Pragya but even after this intense physical experience with her, he also still has that part of him that is only for music...and he can give deep attention to both, and in so doing be more fulfilled himself. And Pragya understands what his music means to him, which is exactly what he needs from a partner in the long run.

Again another thought I wanted to convey! Music is as important to him, doesn't mean Pragya or Daadi are any less.

Pragya's thoughts about her position and duties to Sarla and her role as an older sister feel so real. You have expressed it simply but it captures something that is deeply felt by a lot of girls in similar positions, so that is very compelling.

Thank you.

It's an uneasy ending for this chapter, sort of a sense that what really matters isn't resolved yet. But then how could it be? They're young people facing a road of unknowns, and they can't be sure of what will come and how the situation might change. I wish I could enjoy the thought of them at least getting to explore their addiction, but I guess I have to say my mind is restless about what's up next for them. As long as they are enjoying their interludes, though, that is very good. Making sweet memories and releasing hormones and all 😉

I know right. Uneasy it is.. that's why I was so looking for a title, that meant this kind of feelings.

To be honest with you I find myself really not caring what separates them. Doesn't interest me, because we already know it's going to happen somehow or another. I am, however, very curious about how they get back together. I love this college flashback and would happily read a dozen more chapters of it, so this isn't to say any kind of rush to get back to grown up Pragya and celebrity Abhi. Just whenever we do get back to them, I will be extra excited 😆

They need to graduate soon! 😳

Thank you for the chapter, I guess it was very thought provoking. Here I have written a lot more comments on a chapter I had mixed feelings about than the chapters that I adored without reservation...funny how that works! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetysathya

Im speechless and restless by reading this chapter thats all i can type yaar

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Amazing update Tia. Passionate love story. Pragya insecurities over can't wait for next part.