Abhi-Pragya fiction: RESTLESS (Epilogue- Page 85, Dec 29) - Page 32

Guys, sorry, the update had a bunch of typos. I feel bad. Fixed whatever I found.

Tia,what should I say?

Res :)

Originally posted by: aakanchanadevi

Tia!!👏

No words to say..😳

such a Passionate Love story.. Truly Emotional..😊

Now I am more addicted and reading it again and again..😉😉

Can't wait to know what happened between them to separate..

Pragya is not able to convey her feelings in the first time and Abhi immediately coming into a conclusion..what happened to separate each other..

I am Waiting!!😃

Okai...good that now she knows about his intentions...she will trust him. But Abhi babu is leading her to a path that she is not meant to...wonder how long she can walk along.

Originally posted by: Mystery1

😭...

Res...

Originally posted by: -mina-

Res

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Awesome update Tia.. many times I said to my self " Poor Chashmish" 😭 but I'm happy for her for finding love and for talking out all her fears and insecurities and like Mina I started feeling bad for her as I know they will be separated..
Hope the coming update will be soon as we become addicted to quick updates 😊

Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Make pragya brave girl. So that she fight with g her fears. I hope their families accept them with love and care...

Nice chapter tia

Originally posted by: -Tia-

Did you read Mina?😳

Yes! My favourite moment and the moment I can't stop thinking about is Abhi's reaction to her asking if they have a future or not. On the one hand I love his sense of values that he wouldn't choose to get so involved with Pragya if he wasn't intending to be serious with her. I very much love his explanation about the time in the future when they're able to stand on their own and prove to the world that they're good together. On the other hand it really annoyed me that he expected Pragya not to question him on that point and got irritated that she didn't just realize what was in his head. Either way, such an awesome moment, with Pragya getting a simple and powerful answer in an unexpected way 😲 And it beautifully shows the difference between Abhi's instinctive understanding of their bond versus Pragya's need to put things into terms that society can understand 👏

Loved the hot moments with Abhi nibbling at her neck, playing with her breasts, etc. He so feels he has full access and can't see all the obstacles she has made in her mind. Sort of can't help feeling happy for him, imagining how good he must be feeling in some of those moments, just to have what he wants to cherish.

The description of Pragya watching Abhi work at his music is well done and feels so important for the story and the character. I like how you have shown how important it is to him, like in a balancing kind of way...he loves Pragya but even after this intense physical experience with her, he also still has that part of him that is only for music...and he can give deep attention to both, and in so doing be more fulfilled himself. And Pragya understands what his music means to him, which is exactly what he needs from a partner in the long run.

Pragya's thoughts about her position and duties to Sarla and her role as an older sister feel so real. You have expressed it simply but it captures something that is deeply felt by a lot of girls in similar positions, so that is very compelling.

It's an uneasy ending for this chapter, sort of a sense that what really matters isn't resolved yet. But then how could it be? They're young people facing a road of unknowns, and they can't be sure of what will come and how the situation might change. I wish I could enjoy the thought of them at least getting to explore their addiction, but I guess I have to say my mind is restless about what's up next for them. As long as they are enjoying their interludes, though, that is very good. Making sweet memories and releasing hormones and all 😉

To be honest with you I find myself really not caring what separates them. Doesn't interest me, because we already know it's going to happen somehow or another. I am, however, very curious about how they get back together. I love this college flashback and would happily read a dozen more chapters of it, so this isn't to say any kind of rush to get back to grown up Pragya and celebrity Abhi. Just whenever we do get back to them, I will be extra excited 😆

Thank you for the chapter, I guess it was very thought provoking. Here I have written a lot more comments on a chapter I had mixed feelings about than the chapters that I adored without reservation...funny how that works! 😳