AbhiGya FF -The Perfect Deal-Epilogue Pg 43- 13/06 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: simsim25

Aww such a cute and adorable start! So it's all starting with no MU's and certainly no hate which I love! Daily updates Diahh! YAY! <3 *hugs


SIMI!! 🤗 Thank you!!

Originally posted by: 5roseparvin

nice story line... look forward...


Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Both Pragya and Abhi are so cute


Thank you for reading and commenting! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update.loved it.


Glad to know you loved it! Thanks for commenting! 😃

Originally posted by: vlhs12993

I'm your huge fan 😃
Loved the prologue ⭐️
Can't wait to read more


Aww!! So sweet of you! ⭐️ Thank you! Means a lot!

Originally posted by: _Saavi_

Oh god that was so freaking adorable... seriously cant wait to read this... this has quickly become one of my favorites.. 😊 👏 continue soon please..


Awww!!! Means a lot! Thank you for reading and commenting!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MinMinMehra

Dhinglu!!! Omg! I love it!!!! Excited that you're updating daily...excited for the next part already...Just soo happy you're writing again!!!

Big hugs and kisses for you.


MINMIN Mehra!! 🤗 Thank you!!! As always your comments mean a lot!! Big hugs and kisses to you too!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: rutu83

eeps a new story! and i didn't get a pm :((

anyways, looking interesting- waise how did they end up in the "deal" to begin with?
continue soon :)


Rutu!! 😃 Good to see you!! Haha! Sorry! Didn't send any! 😆

Deal will be revealed soon. 😉 Thank you for commenting! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello All! Thank you for the lovely comments and likes! As always means a lot!😳

And here you go with the first chapter! Don't forget to leave your feedback!😉

Lots of love!🤗

Happy Reading!

⭐️

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Chapter 01


Honk honk!

Daadi awoke from her slumber to find themselves stuck in traffic.

She looked to her side to see Aaliyah looking at the towering buildings lost in thoughts as she cuddled a sleeping Aditi in her arms.

Aditi! Barely three years old she had managed to have the entire Mehra clan dance to her tunes from the day she was born. She had quite successfully replaced her Mumma as the Apple of her Mamu, Abhi's eyes. Oh yes, little Aditi had him wrapped around her finger from the day he first held her.

Daadi sighed and rubbed her tired eyes before wearing her spectacles. They were already passing through the city and in no time they would reach their destination. She knew all the tiredness, pains in her tired limbs from sitting in the same posture for hours would vanish when she finally get to see the faces of her dear potha and bahu after months. Few minutes more... Just few minutes...

The mere thought brought a smile on her face.

***
Abhi turned hearing footsteps hurrying down the stairs. Pragya entered the hall wearing a red Anarkali.

"Don't say anything!"

She hissed at him seeing his expression.

"What? I wasn't going to say anything bad! I was going to say you look beautiful."

"Really?" She asked as she adjusted her dupatta.

"Yeah! Just like a typical Bahu from a Saaz Bahu serial!"

"Oh! Shut up!"

Abhi looked around.

"What! What are you searching for?"

Pragya asked looking around.

"Where is your pooja taali Bahu Rani?"

"Okay! You know that's it! I am not going to do this!"

Pragya turned to go only to be stopped by Abhi.

"Okay! Sorry! Sorry! I will behave!"

The door bell rang.

"Well, you better!"

"Ready?"

Abhi asked her.

"No!"

"Very good! Okay here we go!"

Abhi went to open the door.

~~~
The door opened.

There he is. Tall, dark and handsome. Her Abhi.

"Abhi!"

"Daadi!"

He was already by her side, mirroring the wide smile on her face on his. He touched her feet and engulfed her in a hug.

"Daadi!"

"Abhi!"

She lovingly touched his head as they broke the hug.

"Now where is my princess!?"

Abhi moved to the side to quickly hug Aaliyah and took a giggling Aditi in his arms.

Daadi looked past Abhi and there stood her Bahu Pragya.

"Daadi!"

"Bahu!"

A beautiful smile adorned her bahu's face as she quickly bended to touch Daadi's feet dutifully.

"Pragya you look so pretty!"

Daadi said as she placed a kiss on Pragya's forehead.

"Haina Daadi? I was just telling her, but she didn't believe me! See Pragya?"

Abhi asked good-naturedly as he wrapped his arm around Aaliyah guiding her inside.

"And Aaliyah don't you miss me at all? No calls, no messages! What is this?"

"Oh come on Bhai! That is my line! Hello Bhabhi! How are you?"

Aaliyah said as she went to Pragya and hugged her.

Daadi smiled looking at her grandson already busy chatting with Aditi, his niece.

Still in his early 30s, he has already created a niche for himself. He has come a long way from where they were. She had never felt so helpless as she did as on the day she heard the news of her son and daughter in law passing away in an accident leaving behind Abhi and Aaliyah.

Aaliyah has cried her heart out hugging her tight, whereas Abhi stood like a statute away from all of them. All the relatives were surprised by his seeming indifference given how close he was to his parents, but she could see the torment in his soul through his eyes. He had never been the same since.

Soon she took the kids back with her to their village thinking being among their own would help them to get over their pain. It seemed to be working until one fine day Abhi decided he would move back to the city leaving them behind. Of course she has objected they had everything there. But he was adamant and soon she gave in. Through the years he steadily rose up the ladder of success and today is one of the most promising music directors in the country. She was proud of his success.

"Daadi why are you standing here? Come inside na..."

Pragya took Daadi's hand and guided her inside.

When she first met Pragya nearly a year ago it seemed as god has finally listened to all her prayers. An Interior designer by profession she was the perfect match for her Abhi. She left no stone unturned to arrange their marriage.

Of course her friend Balbir Arora has been a great help. Together they matched their horoscopes to find it so compatible, so much so that they knew it was god's way of telling them that Abhi and Pragya are meant to be together.
Then Balbir convinced her Bahu, Sarala for the marriage. They all thought getting Abhi and Pragya to agree for the marriage will be the biggest hurdle. But surprisingly after one lengthy first meeting both agreed to get married.

It all happened so fast, it still surprised her to think that it is almost six months for their marriage now. Oh! How the time flies.

Daadi recollected as she sipped at her tea. She turned to look at her kids.

Aditi was busy explaining something to Abhi as Aaliyah and Pragya watched them laughing.

Yes. Her decision to come here for few days is correct. She would talk to Abhi soon and he will handle it all. Aaliyah always valued his opinion more than anyone else's. He will know what to do.

***
Phew!

It was a long day! But the day is nothing compared to what lies ahead. Sharing a room with Abhishek.

Pragya peeked inside his room. Well, for these few days 'their' room!

Hmmm... He was nowhere to be seen.

Good!

She quickly gathered her stuff and entered the washroom.

After few minutes she opened the door and was greeted with a familiar humming sound.

Oh no!

She heard the humming stop only to be replaced by a whistle.

"Well, hello roomie!"

She turned to him and rolled her eyes.

"Oh stop it!" Abhi said suddenly looking all shy.

"What? I am not doing anything!" Pragya asked bewildered.

"Stop checking me out!" Abhi said smirking as he came to stand in front of her.

"Oh Abhishek! Grow up!"

Pragya gently nudged him as she made her way towards the bed.

He went around and sat on the right side.

"Listen Pragya!"

Pragya turned to him hearing the seriousness behind his voice.

"Pragya please promise me you won't take undue advantage of me!"

Abhi said in all seriousness.

"Urgh Abhishek! You idiot!"

Pragya threw a pillow at him laughing.

"But you don't worry! I know what to do!"

She placed few pillows between them creating a border.

"Hmm! Smart!"

Abhi said as he lay on his side.

"Tell me something I don't know Mr Mehra!"

Pragya replied him as she lay on her side.

"So Pragya... I was just wondering... You know... Err... Daadi... She had no doubt right?"

He finally asked.

"Don't worry Abhishek. She won't know. Everything is going just fine. It's only a matter of few days. It will pass before we know it. Go to sleep now! Good night!"

***
Daadi tossed and turned in her bed unable to sleep.

There was something wrong. But she couldn't quite figure out what. Her kids, Abhi and Pragya were doing alright but her motherly instinct told her that all is not well as it seems with Aaliyah.

She seemed to be her old cheerful self with Abhi and Pragya, but Daadi had seen her pensive moods for the last few weeks. And it somehow made her uneasy...

What is going on? It has to be something related to Neel... Only he had that effect on her. But what?

Daadi laid on the bed waiting for sleep to come to her as unanswered questions roamed in her brain.

Edited by Diahh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res

Unres!!!


OH MY GOD!

Thank you Dhinglu!!! I love it!!

I loved Dadi thinking about the past and how Abhi withdrew after his parents death. Loved how rodadi and dadi are friends and have gotten Abhigya married.

Their nok jhok started from the beginning. Dadi sussing out that something was wrong!!

And adjusting in the room!!!

More more more chahiye!!!

Hugs & Kisses!!
Edited by MinMinMehra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
ohhh my goddd diyuuu my brilliant baachuuu so much you have going on here!! exciting!! aaliya as a mumma! gudiya aditi warming everyone's hearts! alert daadi looking out for everyone's best interests! i'm so intrigued. and i love love love the hints of what abhigya's relationship has been like and will be like. basically this is really really really satisfying to read and i'm so pleased!! and i feel so spoiled knowing there will be more tomorrow itself!! omg!! diyu!! di loves you so much haayeee!! excellent work, thank you for sharing <333 😃
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Originally posted by: -mina-

ohhh my goddd diyuuu my brilliant baachuuu so much you have going on here!! exciting!! aaliya as a mumma! gudiya aditi warming everyone's hearts! alert daadi looking out for everyone's best interests! i'm so intrigued. and i love love love the hints of what abhigya's relationship has been like and will be like. basically this is really really really satisfying to read and i'm so pleased!! and i feel so spoiled knowing there will be more tomorrow itself!! omg!! diyu!! di loves you so much haayeee!! excellent work, thank you for sharing <333 😃


Awww Di!!! I am all 😃 this after reading your comment!! I am so so SO glad to know you enjoyed it this much! Thank you for pointing out things you liked!! Means a lot!!! Love you Di!! Muwahhh!! ❤️
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Great first chapter
Loved the banter between abhigya
U got me hooked to this
Waiting for next:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww yayyy Diahhh!!!!! A new story to reeead 🥳
Very interesting start.. so Abhi and Pragya seem to be more friends than husband and wife which is nice.. they both agreed after one lenghthy meeting... hmmm dhaal meh kuch kala hai😆

Aaliyah has a child.. awww baby!! And she seems positive!!! 😛 Love to read more on Abhi-Pragya baby bonding!!!!😳

Awww and dadi.. always playing the matchmaker. Got to rate this woman 😃

Continue soon xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow Diah great story I like how both Abhi and Pragya are funny and carefree in front of Dadi at least, aww Aaliyah has a baby that's nice, it's good to know Abhi and Aditi have such a nice relationship. Can't wait to read what happens next

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