Originally posted by: shivanimehta
The Perfect Deal was, in my opinion, the perfect story! Your writing style is amazing! Your story and adaptation of the actual deal between abhi and pragya (in the show) is interestingly outstanding. What I liked about your story was that it was a balanced 'deal' (story)! We had chapters with humor, jealousy, anger, fights, make-ups, break-ups, love, confusion, real-life problems with alia and Neil, and a happyily-ever-after! I am so glad u updated every day because that way it kept the readers (me) intrigued and it allowed you to complete the story and maintain the focus, because what often happens is that people start a story and than take a long break and struggle to get the back to the gist of it. All I am trying to say is that I always looked forward to reading this story and you fulfilled my appetite for a daily dose of abhigya!
And... your epilogue was brilliant. It wasn't just a 'and they lived happily ever after'! You covered some important aspects. You got Alia and Neel, you got the uncle-niece relationship between Aditi and Abhi and most importantly you very very very cutely and naughtily 😉☺️😆 got Abhi and Pragya!
You are truly an amazing writer and this is one of the more fun reads. Please don't stop, I want more and I believe I will get more!
Kind of sad that there won't be anymore Perfect Deal for me to read 😭😭
I think you have understood by now how much I like your story and how much I appreciate your commitment and style for this story! Keep up the good work! Come back with a bang... I know you will!
A HUGE HUG FROM ME TO YOU...
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