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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simsim25

Diahh, I liked how you started the beginning, they both do understand each other a lot! And it is good that they do! So neliya is affecting abhigya, really wanna know if they get back together! Also I like how you had abhi lashing out at her in the end, very much like the CVs where he is too angry to think about her feelings. Really wanna know what happens afterwards! Update soon please cause I am greedy! 😆

❤️


Simi!!! 🤗 Awww!! Thank you so much!! Especially for pointing out the things you liked!

Lots of love!!❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Asma-

Interesting aww feel bad for Pragya
:/ I can't wait for the next part


Asma beti!! Aww!! 😆 Hope you would like the next part then?😉 And Thank you!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

i am almost crazy when i read the last part wonder what happen next, pm me dia


Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

thank u for the story, loved prags caring and abhi tense abt aliya, so hope everything will fine bt two, pm me buddy


Aww Ayesha!! Thank you so much!!😃 Yes. Things will turn better! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kubare

Chapter 6

😆Our Obsession with him in White comes into play through Pragya..😆Yeah...to that and what followed...😆 Yeah Yeah don't call Robin he's too busy...😆



Abhi Abhi Abhi...😆the only thing on his mind is Pragya Pragya Pragya...😆Yes Abhi it's nothing but attraction...yeah right...😆


Awww...the best part...Prag Alu...I love them and so wanted to see them bond in the show as well...but..alas...

Loved their conversation and most of all loved how Pragya could empathize with the whole situation...


Once again Diyu darling Loved it Loved it Loved It!!!!

Oh and Neel and Aliyah mystery of broken relationship is it completely done with...😆😆😆


KRISHUUU!!!🤗

Lol!! Yeah!! Pragya is us!!!😆 😆

And yayyy congrats!! Finally mystery revealed!!😉 😆

As always had fun reading your feedback!! Thank you!!! Lots of love!!!❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kubare

Chapter 7


Diyu ...😆lucky me getting to read two parts together...

Thus double the fun and more to read...😆😆😆

Hahahahah...Plan A a flop...😆

Plan B it is and BB and Purab are cute cute cute and Dadi...impressed with Pragya...yeah...😆😆😆

Purab...Fattu indeed...😆😆😆

Love BB...😆


Loved how the plan started...Dadi and BB discussing the pics of Aliyah's wedding...with Purab's chiming in...😆reluctantly though 😆

Abhi hearing it all and his blaming Neel...😆😆😆


Awww again loved PragAlu bonding...

OK Abhi Abhi Abhi..with his OTT reaction and Dufferness...urgh ...Anger truly rules his mnd and mouth...stoping his brain from working...The JackAss...

Aww...my Pragya...*hugs* Don't worry I have given him a knock on his head with a cricket bat..all will be right soon...if not Iron rod ..baseball bat ...hockey stick all are ready...😆😆😆

Awww...can't wait to read the next part soon...like real soon...

Oh forgot to add...LOVED IT!!!!!!😆



OMG!!! Krishuuu!!!😆 😆 Well, violent Krishu!! 😆 Hope he will make it up to her soonnn!!😉 😆

Thank you again!! And lots of love!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sudanindia2014

Diah Diah Diah as much as I was so sad to miss your updates all these days ( and not be able to res 😉) as much as I'm so happy now ...I enjoyed reading the 7 parts together pure fun,excitement , joy and many many good feelings in the time I spent reading through.. I loved how you bent some of the facts of the show for your story ..made it unique yet so familiar how they get married for example like the show no love , no behind closed room relationship😆 ☺️ but unlike the show no negative feelings..Neel and Aliya I loved their totally invented story.. BB our same bubbly loving BB but here she is the cousin..business woman Sarla ma 🤣 and PA Purvi ..loved that Rapul are married spared us a lot of the drama Dadi and Rockstar Dadi ( oops music director Dadi here 😆) they are old friends here so cute and made the arranged marriage so reasonable for me ..all in all I loved where your imagination took you with the story and I'm so eager to follow till the very end ( I know you are a happy ending junky like me so I always enjoy reading your FF from the start to the happy end..I hope)
I want ROMANCE a lot of romance 😉 I'm already a fan of his hand 😆 loved the way this hand thinking.. so liberal😳 and so straight forward..I mean from all the places it can go look where did it choose to land
Loved the presence of little Aditi in the story so so sweet
I love planning so much specially when BB is included so I'm so exited about their ( Neel-Aliya reunion ) operation ..poor Purab
Aliya and Pragya friendship is a dream we never know if will come true in the show or not so making it true here is so amazing to read
our dear Abhigaya they are both in love now in the show but I'm ready to relive their love story again and again ..they are a perfect couple and it's always a delight to see and read how they fight their way to love ..
Thanks Diah for this story ..have fun writing we sure have fun reading
waiting for the new update tomorrow inshallah ..I think our Abhi is in trouble 😈


Nuha Nuha Nuha!!! 🤗 Thank you so much for this!! So sweet of you!! And I am so glad to know you enjoyed reading this!! 😃

Haha you know me!! Happy ending junky!! Yes!!😆

UFF!! So like you to become a fan of his hand!! 😆

Enjoyed reading this so much Nuha girl!! Lots of love to you!!! And I am glad you are back!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

Hey diahh..!! I'm apeksha.. as i'm new to this forum,,couldn't comment earlier..😊

Now coming to ur SS..
read all the parts in one go..Oh My Gosh!! it was really A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!! 🥳🥳 loved aditi she is soo sweet..😳❤️ Aliya and neil might make it better by getting together..😊

bechari pragya kuch accha karne jaati hai toh usse hi daant padti hai.. 😔

well i think abhi and pragya are developing feeling for each other 😳 well if it is so then its getting much more interesting
waiting for some romantic moments between abhigya..

do continue soon😉


Hey Apeksha!!😃 Welcome to KKB forum!! 😃 And thank you for this!!! So glad to know you are enjoying the story!!

Will continue soon!! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apple123flower

Read the chapters from part 5! 😳

"The perfect deal" 😃 Loved their conversation..
And in the next chapter, the best part,
White looks way better on him. ☺️

And, OMG! The last heated up conversation!! 😲 I don't know why but I could fell my heart beating fast! I could see it happening just in front of my eyes! But I thought Pragya would cry! But she had promised her mom right. 😃

Do update soon! 😃


Aww Appie!! 😆 You are so cute!!! And yes!! She did promise her!! Yayy!! You remembered!!

Thank you Appie!! Glad to read your feedback!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asulpyaar

please please continue sooon


Will do! Thank you!!

😃

Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice update aww poor Pragya feel sorry for her he keeps telling her to stay out of it, I feel bad for Aaliyah to he has been hurt by Neel but she is willing to give him another chance hope things work out for her, Aaliyah has to think about herself and Aditi. It's nice Abhi wants to take care of his sister and niece but he has to let Aaliyah make the decision herself can't wait to read the next chapter

Ray!! 🤗


Thank you so much!! And yes! Aalu needs to decide for herself!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally!! you've finshed...still stalking...kyunki I want to know what is happening!!
Just ignore me...Take your time...I'm just getting impatient!
Edited by MinMinMehra - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello All! Thank you for the lovely comments and likes! As always means a lot!😃

Okay here you go with the eighth chapter! Don't forget to leave your feedback!😳

Lots of love! Have a good day!

Happy Reading!

🤗
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Chapter 08



Damn!

Abhi mentally cursed himself seeing Pragya's pained expression as she left the room.

"Bhai! You did not just say all that rubbish to Bhabhi right now! That is just so mean! How could you even think like that! I can't believe this! How could you talk like that to Bhabhi..."

He heard Aaliyah rambling nonstop but he didn't stop her knowing it is the truth. He deserved it.

How did this happen! How could he be so thoughtless!

He collapsed on to a chair.

"What do you think you are doing?"

Aaliyah asked crossing her arms.

"Aaliyah you know I didn't mean any of that! I was just caught up in the moment!"

Abhi tried to defend himself.

"How could you even say such a thing to her! Can you even imagine how she must have felt? She was only doing all that for me! For Aditi! That's because she loves us! Because she considers us a part of her family. And what did you do? You go and say the meanest thing possible to the only person who really tried to understand what I am going through right now..."

"Aaliyah I know! I am sorry I couldn't control my anger. It just slipped out of my mouth!"

"I am not the one you should be apologizing for Bhai!"

***
Pragya angrily, began to fold the cloths lying on their bed.

So what! It was the truth! You are an outsider!

A little voice whispered in her mind.

But how could he! Outsider? I am an outsider for him? I am his wife! He is my husband! How could he even think like that!

Pragya argued with the voice.

Well, not really! Don't forget it was just a deal! Voice argued back.

Damn the deal! What does he expect me to do? Be blind to all the pain Aaliyah is going through? Well, I am not going to do that!

But Pragya you really have no say in the matter. You are just an outsider for him.

I.Am.Not.An.Outsider! Aaliyah is my family! Aditi is family!

Irritated, Pragya threw the cloths away and sat on the bed.

Abhi entered the room to find Pragya lost in thoughts.

He sighed guiltily.

Okay Abhi! Go! Apologize!

"Pragya!"

He saw her shoulders clench hearing her name but she didn't respond.

"Pragya yaar... I am sorry! I really am! I never meant any of that! You know I didn't!"

She chose to ignore him.

"Pragya come on! I am sorry! Please forgive me! It just came out just like that. I was angry! And I was stupid! Sorry! Pragya... Pragya!"

Pragya was about to break her silence and accept his apology when she found the TV remote pointed at her.

She looked up at Abhishek confused.

He took her hand in his and placed the remote in her hand.

While she looked on confused he went on to clear his side of the bed. Pragya saw him taking away his pillows and sheet. He went on to remove the pillow border next.

"What are you doing?"

She asked confused.

"Peace offerings!"

Pat came his reply.

"What?"

"TV and remote! The whole bed! Privilege to use the washroom first... That also without any disturbance! Privilege to keep your light on as long as you want without any complaints! All peace offerings! Do you accept them?"

Oh god! Why is he like this!

Pragya closed her eyes and shook her head trying to control the laughter that is threatening to burst out.

"Abhishek!"

"Do you accept my peace offerings Pragya?"

He asked in all earnest while his eyes glinted mischievously knowing the battle is won now.

"Oh god Abhishek! Why do you have to be such a drama queen about everything!"

Pragya said as she got up to hit him with a pillow.

He easily dodged it and caught her by her hand.

"Pragya I really am sorry! I was not thinking straight. And I just said it just like that! There is nothing more to it. I hope you would understand..."

Pragya gently tugged on the hand that held hers.

"I know. Apology accepted!"

"Really? Thank god!"

"But on one condition!"

"Oh please don't tell me you want the whole closet!"

"Abhishek! Stop it!"

Pragya said laughing as she took his free hand in hers and moved closer.

"Abhishek I accept your apology if you just promise to give Aaliyah a chance to make her final decision. One last chance. After that whatever her decision is I won't interfere in any way! I promise."

She waited anxiously for his response. She saw the conflict in his eyes but finally saw determination settling in.

"Okay!"

"Okay?"

Pragya asked again.

He nodded.

"Okay? Just like that? Aren't you the same guy who was screaming on top of his lungs playing villain few minutes ago? What happened? How did you agree so fast?"

"Okay Pragya now you are just testing my patience!"

"So you will give her a chance? Like really?"

"Yes! Really! I will! If you feel that is the best thing for Aaliyah and Aditi then I will go by your words. I just want them to be okay. And if you think this is the best for her then I trust you!"

Pragya looked up surprised. The familiar warmth of his eyes was rather comforting. She could see the truth in them.

She smiled.

"Well, thank you Mr Mehra! I am honoured that you chose to trust 'an outsider'!"

She couldn't help but pull his leg a little more.

"Come on Pragya! I said it already! You are not an outsider! You are family! You are my wife!"

Pragya felt a strange happiness hearing his words.

"Okay! I am glad that we sorted that out Mr Mehra!"

She said smiling as she turned to go back to her cloths.

Abhishek reluctantly let go off her hands.

"Hey! You know what Pragya! I think this was our first fight!"

He said after awhile.

"Oh my god you are right! First fight! Well, I don't think I like it though..."

"Well, easy for you to say! I am the one who has to give up on all my luxuries!"

"Oh yeah you are right! I mean fight isn't fun... But I like the making up part!"

"Oh you would! You don't have to give up on anything!"

"But I had to listen to all the crap you said! Oh and by the way where are you going to sleep tonight?"

"What do you mean?"

"Well, I mean you gave up your bed as peace offerings... So..."

"What? That was just for the show! I am sleeping here only!"

"What? What kind of peace offering is that? I don't agree!"

"But you got your condition!"

"What! No! I want peace offerings too! Or do you want to have the second fight today itself?"

"Okay okay baba! You take the TV for as long as they are here but please don't let me sleep on the floor!"

"I don't know! I have to think about this!"

"What?"

Abhi and Pragya went on to banter till both could reach common ground.

***
After seeing the relief in Aaliyah's face hearing his decision to leave it upon her to make a final decision, Abhi was even more sure he was doing the right thing.

It escaped him how Pragya could see Aaliyah's state instead of him. Pragya was never the one to be overly sensitive to other's emotions. Well, at least that's what he used to think.

Hearing about her involvement in this scenario Abhi wondered whether it has got anything to do with her past. Of course they have never spoken about her past or for that matter his past till now. The topic has never really come up before as well right?

By the way where is she? Abhi wondered as he roamed around the house looking for her...

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"What!"

"Haan Jiju! Today Di is making breakfast for all of us! And especially for you!"

"Oh come on Bulbul! Pragya and cooking?"

"Well, then go and see for yourself Jiju!"

Bulbul gently pushed Abhi towards the kitchen.

Oh! There she is!

Hearing his footsteps Pragya turned to him and his eyes widened seeing her appearance.

Ever prim and proper Pragya was replaced by a messy, untidy Pragya. A cuter Pragya.

"Hi! Sorry to disturb you! But what are you doing in our kitchen and what did you do to my wife Pragya?"

"Oh! Very funny!"

"Oh yes! I know! Seriously, what are you doing Pragya?"

"Can't you see? I am making breakfast! Aloo ka paratha! Daadi taught me!"

"You meant to say burnt Aloo ka paratha?"

Abhi said lifting one paratha.

"Oh! Just go away!"

"You must have some talent Pragya! See all burnt! But in different patterns! Wow! Some tal... Urgh! PRAGYA!"

Abhi stared at Pragya in disbelief as he stood covered in flour.

"Did you just... Did you just throw flour on me?"

"Well, you wouldn't stop criticizing my parathas!"

"Really! You just wait!"

Abhi grabbed a handful of flour in one hand and grabbed Pragya by waist from the other and smeared flour on her face.

"Eww! Abhishek! Stop! Let me go!"

Finally he let go off her and walked over to the stove as Pragya tried to clean her face.

"What are you doing?"

"Wait and watch!"

Pragya watched fascinated as he pinched two small balls from the dough and flatten them and dust them with flour expertly.

Hmm... He looks hot doing that!

"By the way Pragya, I told Aaliyah that I won't interfere with her decision any more. I thought I should let you know as well..."

Abhi added with a sheepish grin, much to her amusement.

In no time he placed a perfect aloo paratha in a plate in front of her.

"Wow!"

"Thank you!"

"From where did you learn to do all that?"

"From Daadi only. But then when I started to live alone I got better."

"Really? Can you teach me too?"

"Well it's not that hard... See you just have to do like this..."

Together they began to make breakfast for their family.

Edited by Diahh - 10 years ago

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