Abhigya SS - Endings UPDATED 23/12 Part 5 Page 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Really nice update I like how Bjlbul was there for her and talk to Pragya through the door

Glad Pragya said what she was thinking out loud to Bulbul now things will be good for her

It's nice to see her dadi is supporting her I know where her mum is coming from no mother will want her daughter to suffer as much as Pragya

Can't wait to see what happens now that she went back to the to dadi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

Pragya depressive state is very well written. She is lucky tohave a supportive sister bulbul.
She is change and that is great.
I am eager to know what will happen at Mera mansion.


Thank you so much for your comment Javeria, glad you liked it. I was wondering if her transformation was too abrupt...but I'm glad it worked for you. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice update I like how Bjlbul was there for her and talk to Pragya through the door

Glad Pragya said what she was thinking out loud to Bulbul now things will be good for her

It's nice to see her dadi is supporting her I know where her mum is coming from no mother will want her daughter to suffer as much as Pragya

Can't wait to see what happens now that she went back to the to dadi


Thanks for the detailed comment Ray! 😃 Hope the next part doesn't disappoint.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WHOA WHOA PART 2 BEFORE I UNRESD ACCCK

ok trying to catch up now!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my god rani so gorgeous!! this second part slays me uff uff thank you! i love how she comes out because it's time for a bath. i hope she finds some renewal in the hot water; how typical of her life that she's going to be thrown right back in the pressure cooker just when she was about to take a free breath. oh please forgive my mixed imagery! this is just so fabulous i can't quite find the words. thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us! and oh please please post more soon, my heart is seriously getting strained under the ache of expectation!!!

hehe. gonna go try to retroactively comment on part 1, sorry for the delay!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bulbul reminds me of my own sister, she always has my back
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -mina-

Oh my god rani so gorgeous!! this second part slays me uff uff thank you! i love how she comes out because it's time for a bath. i hope she finds some renewal in the hot water; how typical of her life that she's going to be thrown right back in the pressure cooker just when she was about to take a free breath. oh please forgive my mixed imagery! this is just so fabulous i can't quite find the words. thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us! and oh please please post more soon, my heart is seriously getting strained under the ache of expectation!!!

hehe. gonna go try to retroactively comment on part 1, sorry for the delay!!


Thank you for your detailed comment Mina! Really means a lot to me. Hope your heart is still holding up fine after today's episode also! Next part coming up real soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

Bulbul reminds me of my own sister, she always has my back


I'm so glad it reminded you of your own sister - means my writing wasn't too unrealistic! Thank you for your comment 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3
Hope you guys enjoy it. I would really appreciate your comments and criticisms. 😃
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He wasn't looking at the door, he wasn't! Was it so wrong that he wanted to pace the floor of his own foyer? Abhi glanced at his watch in frustration. It had been an hour since Aakash had called the Aroras and still there was no sign of that Chashmish. Why was he expecting anything from her anyway? Why would a liar, gold digger and all-around cunning woman care enough to run across Mumbai in the rain for the sake of the grandmother-in-law from her farce of a marriage? Especially after she had been so unceremoniously insulted? Even if she deserved it! But the venom in his mind towards Pragya had diluted slightly. Try as he might, he couldn't forget the sight of her as she had left his house. A walking corpse; that was what she had looked like. And as much as he tried to label her agonized sobs as her best performance, the (admittedly small) rational part of his brain urged him that not even a trained actress could fake that broken look in Pragya's eyes. And as much as he tried to resist it, tendrils of guilt closed around his heart, as they always did.

Suddenly, Abhi was jolted out of his reverie by the harsh trilling of the doorbell. Unthinkingly, he darted further into the house and up the stairs. For some reason he wanted height on his sight when he first caught sight of her.

The door opened and she walked in but Abhi could only see the top of her head and the edges of her flowing anarkali (muted mauve this time). She was closely flanked by Bulbul, Purab and Aakash (that traitor!) who moved in tandem with her as her shield. Was she really that cowardly and aware of her guilt that she needed bodyguards to step into her sasuraal? As they moved to the stairs, he finally caught a glimpse of her face. In the three days since she had left he had thought of her almost constantly, alternating between anger, hurt and reluctant sorrow but it was a relief to see her face again. She looked gaunt and withdrawn, shadows as dark as bruises underneath her eyes. But she was here, and Abhi felt the unease that had settled heavily on his shoulders lift a tiny bit. She finally looked up and held his gaze for a moment, before sliding it down as though she had seen nothing of more consequence than wall clock. That stung. Her eyes he noticed, still looked dead, but they had lost the hunted look they had carried in recent days. Again that twinge of guilt caught him, only to increase when he saw the trio of Aliya, Tanu and Mitali bhabhi reach the foot of the stairs. From this vantage point they really did look like lions trying to have fun with their prey.

"Well, well, well, look who we have here. Couldn't stay away from the luxury very long, could you?" Tanu taunted.

"Better than you at least. You couldn't even bring yourself to leave at all." Woah! Where had that side of Chasmish come from? She hadn't been like that in weeks!

"How dare you come in here and - " Tanu started but Pragya and her "bodyguards", as Abhi had termed them, just brushed past her and continued up the stairs.

Although he hadn't taken his eyes off her since she had entered, Abhi was still not prepared for the full force of her gaze as her eyes met his. "Where is she?" she asked simply, without any of the emotion that usually coloured her voice. All Abhi could in his flustered state was wordlessly point to the bedroom but before he could gather his wits, Pragya had hurried past him into the room and shut the door in his face.

She had thought that she was all cried out, especially when she had managed to move past Abhi without flinching but seeing daadi lying on that massive bed, so frail yet her eyes so full of love, set Pragya off again. "Daadi!" She cried, diving into the older woman's waiting arms.

"Kaisi hai tu, meri Pragya?" [How are you, my child?]

"Dadi, muhje aapse yeh poochna chahiye. Please muhje maaj kijiye daadi - sirf meri vaje se aap aaj is halat mein hai. Muhje maaf karna daadi." [Dadi, I should be asking you that. Please forgive me daadi - I am the sole reason for you being in this condition. Please forgive me daadi]

"Pragya..."

"And I know how that wretched MMS looks but please believe me, I never, did anything wrong! I was - "

"Pragya," daadi interrupted, "I never asked you for an explanation." Pragya looked up in surprise. "I know that you of all people can never do such a thing." At her daadi's kindness, Pragya's sobbing intensified. Daadi laid a hand on Pragya's trembling head, the poor girl looked so broken.

"Thank you daadi. But you know, it's not the numerous allegations of being characterless that hurt me the most. It's that...he doesn't believe me at all. Won't even give me a chance to explain." At that moment, safe in daadi's embrace, Pragya was almost tempted to blurt out the rest of her thought process - that staying in his household, in this marriage was looking like a futile endeavour. She wanted to lament that her belief that her husband had, if not love, at least a little respect and trust for her was a delusion, that her husband was never, ever going to see any good in her.

However, she stopped herself. For all his faults, Abhi had always been honest with her about their marriage. He had blurted out the reason for their marriage on the second day itself and even more recently, when Tanu had proposed marriage, Abhi had told her first. Out of the respect she somehow still had for Abhi, she wanted to tell him about her decision regarding their marriage before she told anyone else, even daadi.

So Pragya took her leave of daadi, promising to be there when she woke up. She opened the door to daadi's room and stumbled back as Abhi almost crashed into her. Steeling herself, she said, "I need to talk to you."

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
res again!

unres


aww rani so short please more soon please!

eyes actually teary here. powerful chapter - pragya's pain moreso than abhi's confusion, but both so exquisite and together amazing. sorry i don't have anything more specific to say; just revelling in the emotional response. thanks! so much! uff uff uff <333
Edited by -mina- - 10 years ago

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