Abhigya SS - Endings UPDATED 23/12 Part 5 Page 7

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Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

For: PART 4

... What a flipping I.D.I.O.T!!! *rolls eyes* What's wrong with you, Abhi?! What's the need to go overboard?! Couldn't you just let her be?! *ROLLS EYES at his idiocy*

Yeh lo! You pushed her too far and karma came to bite you in the ass. I absolutely LOVED Pragya standing-up for herself! 👏 And pointing-out all the glaring holes in his theory! AWESOME! For some reason, divorce didn't strike me initially, but then I realized that in this situation, that is the only path open to her.

What a powerful chapter! Going immediately to read the next! 😊

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Fanaah

@Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

For: PART 5

WOW! Absolutely wonderful story, Rani-sa!!! 👏

Pragya's decision, Daadi's apology and blessing, Abhi's heartbreak (that I can't FULLY blame him for), the slight joke that was serious despite being a joke...

Along with Pragya, I felt the sense of loss as well. Since I know there is a sequel, I'm hoping for at least a semi-happy ending in that. But even without that, this is a wonderful take on the MMS track and it deserves praises even as a stand alone! 😃

Now, to get to the actual, ORIGINAL reses! 😳