AbhiGya SS - A Life Without You -Completed -Pg35 29/11

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sarra

@sara7iris

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

I want to kill Aaliyah she can not take a break and let pragya and abhi in peace so they can solve their problem ...I love the behavior of abhi with the two women ...beautiful and amazing update ...l can't wait to read more .pls update soon

Edited by sara7iris - 10 years ago

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Tupimanmus

@Tupimanmus

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Eagerly waited for it and the thing was worth every second and patience, I took for this story.

Destiny wants to bring them together but their egoistic mind won't let it be. I find their character's similar as both were depending upon each other to take away their loneliness. Good to see, the story is neither fast nor too slow. It is making progress with every updates.

Continue your simplistic tone, your writing is indeed fresh.

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

ooh a lot happened in that update! abhi knows aaliyah's truth. dadi knows abhi's truth. abhi knows pragya's truth. and purvi is an awesome sidekick😉
looking forward to the next update

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Hiii Diaahh *Waves hand* hehe! 😳

Sorry I'm late iin commenting but I did read both the chapters in advance hehe.. well chapter 4 when I was on the bus today and believe me I was squirming/smiling so much that people thought I was crazy haha!! 😆 This is the effect of Abhigya and you updating LOL!!!!

Oh gosh! Chapter 3.. Pragya is so selfless I honestly love her.. and Awww Akash and Rachna, they are quite cute!! I loved the Abhi-Pragya scene, awww and i love how it wasn't awkward, they are just too adorable.. and the hand nose touching.. that is just perfection! I loved the way you wrote Pragya falling asleep and tugging on Avhi's shirt.. and him falling asleep too! I honestly hope Ekta ma'am reads your fic because honestly if these scenes cam on screen, I would just.. 🥳🤗

I loved the way you showed their inner yearning for each other Diahh.. that was honestly so beautifully written.. so painful. The way you described Pragya missing Abhishek and Abhi missing his Chashmish.. just honestly no words but sad smiles! You are so fantastic it's unreal! 👏

I'm really happy and thankful that Abhi heard what the neighbourhood women were saying.. and what they were thinking. I loved Pragya's thoughts and how you voiced them.. so pure and hurt.. and the transition of Abhi's character, him becomming calm and "ohh my baby".. could literally imagine it!! Haha thats so like Abhi! Superb ⭐️

I#m honestly liking Akaash in this Fic.. I dunno why I keep mentioning him LOL! I like his smile hehe!😆

OOOH AALIYAH YOU ARE BUILDING YOUR OWN HOLE AND I'M LOVING IT... Abhi vs Aaliyah!!! Excited... I want to see what his reaction will actually be especially because he does love his sister but now he knows Pragya is innocent and she#s been suffering... Interesting!!! hehe 😳😛

Thank you for the scraps btw! They make me smile! You're awesome hehe! 😛

Pleaaase update soon!! 😃

Edited by -JollyJabeen- - 10 years ago

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Updated my lovely!!! (Can I say that?/not in a creepy way hehehe!)

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Diahhh...loved it loved it...LOVED IT!!!!!!!👏👏

Awww...loved drama queens reappearance and loved Purvi...she's cute...and ...sigh, his thoughts you got that baby bang on...

His tearing up the divorce papers, Aliyah obsession ..and then his saving the day...

Love Akash too...

And the bomb...great

So when's the next part up...like Now?... Humnm...me waiting...Impatiently...😆...

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

😆😆Am still waiting for the next part...*tapping my foot away*😉😛😆

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

god Aaliyah wants to ruin his life what will he do with her now, poor Pragya I felt sorry for her she needs someone to hold her and give her hope, I hope things get better for her soon