AbhiGya SS - A Life Without You -Completed -Pg35 29/11 - Page 11

Originally posted by: kubare

😆 That we are...so Diah where is the next part??---like where ....😆.

Originally posted by: Diahh

Lol Krishna and Ray!!!😆😆😆

Haven't you guys heard "patience is a virtue"!?😎 Lol!!

Will update soon... AbhiGya promise!!!⭐️😉

Originally posted by: kubare

'Patience' what's that...who's that...Ray have you heard about it?.or him/her...?

Sorry Dish...looks like we both don't know what that is...must be sleeping like Abhi when it was being distributed...🤣

Originally posted by: simsim25

Great update!!

Originally posted by: 26javey

I love how he stood up for Pragya and he ripped the papers. Aliya is really annoying and self centered, you nailed her character. I can't wait to see what Abhi does now.

Originally posted by: Tupimanmus

Eagerly waited for it and the thing was worth every second and patience, I took for this story.

Destiny wants to bring them together but their egoistic mind won't let it be. I find their character's similar as both were depending upon each other to take away their loneliness. Good to see, the story is neither fast nor too slow. It is making progress with every updates.

Continue your simplistic tone, your writing is indeed fresh.

Originally posted by: rutu83

ooh a lot happened in that update! abhi knows aaliyah's truth. dadi knows abhi's truth. abhi knows pragya's truth. and purvi is an awesome sidekick😉
looking forward to the next update

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-

Hiii Diaahh *Waves hand* hehe! 😳

Heyyy Jabeennn !!!! *waves back and sends you a grizzly bear hug🤗

Sorry I'm late iin commenting but I did read both the chapters in advance hehe..

awww i am so glad that you commented! it is always a pleasure to read your comments! and also i love getting feedbacks on the updates!😃

well chapter 4 when I was on the bus today and believe me I was squirming/smiling so much that people thought I was crazy haha!! 😆 This is the effect of Abhigya and you updating LOL!!!!

LOL Jabeen!!!😆😆 you are so sweet!

Oh gosh! Chapter 3.. Pragya is so selfless I honestly love her.. and Awww Akash and Rachna, they are quite cute!! I loved the Abhi-Pragya scene, awww and i love how it wasn't awkward, they are just too adorable.. and the hand nose touching.. that is just perfection! I loved the way you wrote Pragya falling asleep and tugging on Avhi's shirt.. and him falling asleep too! I honestly hope Ekta ma'am reads your fic because honestly if these scenes cam on screen, I would just.. 🥳🤗

awww thank you so much!! glad to know you loved it this much!🤗

I loved the way you showed their inner yearning for each other Diahh.. that was honestly so beautifully written.. so painful. The way you described Pragya missing Abhishek and Abhi missing his Chashmish.. just honestly no words but sad smiles! You are so fantastic it's unreal! 👏

awww 😳😳

I'm really happy and thankful that Abhi heard what the neighbourhood women were saying.. and what they were thinking. I loved Pragya's thoughts and how you voiced them.. so pure and hurt.. and the transition of Abhi's character, him becomming calm and "ohh my baby".. could literally imagine it!! Haha thats so like Abhi! Superb ⭐️

I really want to develope his character before he realizes he is in love!😛 i was thinking of the scene where he goes "oh baby" and all that to get Pragya out of his dressing room!😆

I#m honestly liking Akaash in this Fic.. I dunno why I keep mentioning him LOL! I like his smile hehe!😆

lol!😉😉

OOOH AALIYAH YOU ARE BUILDING YOUR OWN HOLE AND I'M LOVING IT... Abhi vs Aaliyah!!! Excited... I want to see what his reaction will actually be especially because he does love his sister but now he knows Pragya is innocent and she#s been suffering... Interesting!!! hehe 😳😛

yaaa Abhi vs Aaliyah coming soon!!!⭐️

Thank you for the scraps btw! They make me smile! You're awesome hehe! 😛

same goes to you too!!!❤️

Pleaaase update soon!! 😃

will update soon!

Originally posted by: -JollyJabeen-

Updated my lovely!!! (Can I say that?/not in a creepy way hehehe!)

Originally posted by: kubare

Diahhh...loved it loved it...LOVED IT!!!!!!!👏👏

Awww...loved drama queens reappearance and loved Purvi...she's cute...and ...sigh, his thoughts you got that baby bang on...

His tearing up the divorce papers, Aliyah obsession ..and then his saving the day...

Love Akash too...

And the bomb...great

So when's the next part up...like Now?... Humnm...me waiting...Impatiently...😆...