FF: Jeevan Saathi #2: Pg 24 (End) - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
i loved the update...
pls continue soon
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aw that was an awesome update
continue soon!
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Part 6

preview part was on pg 5!

Kanya is standing there!!

She is smiling

Ranbir comes in

She stops smiling

And turns around!!!!!!!!

S is going crazy!!!

He's saying no!!!

Kanya is only his and etc.....

he's throwing tantrums over here!!!!!!!!

S: I wanted Kanya!!! Kanya is mine! No one can have her!!!!

He's got nuts!!!!!

Ranbir and Kanya are staring at each other!!!

Ranbir comes to her

Ranbir: I would never of thought that you think of something like this!!!!

Kanya: I couldnt take it anymore!!! I had to do something!!!!!!

Ranbir: Yeah but..

Kanya: Look.. now everyone else wont think otherwise!!!

Ranbir: But is this a lie???

Kanya looks at him!!

Kanya: I dont know!!

Ranbir: Everyone thinks we are married...???? But what do u say??

Kanya: What about you?

Ranbir: I asked you 1st!!!

Kanya doesnt know wat to say!!!!!!

She is quiet!!!!

Its quiet for a chunk of time!!

Ranbir: Kanya if you dont say something... i will decide something now!!!!!

Kanya: What??

Ranbir hesistates!!

Kanya is like what does he want to say!!!!

Ranbir: Why dont....we make...

Ranbir cant say it!!

he's having a hard time

Kanya; What???

Ranbir: Um.. why dont we..... to everyone...

Kanya: Get married???????

Ranbir looks at her!!!!!

They stare @ each other!!!!!!!

They are staring at each other!!!!!!!

Ranbir meant to say that

But Kanya said it!!!!!

Kanya doesn't know what to say

Neither does Kanya!!!

Kanya: Well…..

Ranbir is looking!!!

Kanya is waiting for him to say something!!!!!!

Ranbir: The idea of ever getting married… never came in my head!!!!!!!! I lost my parents at a very early age!!!! And til then I have been by myself!!!!!!!!

Kanya: You at least know who ur parents are!!! I have never seen them!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!

Kanya: Til today.. I have had no body!!! Til S saw me… and he took care of me… I was grateful to have a friend like him….. but now….. who do I have???? No one!!!… This is my fate!!! Being lonely in life!!! You had people!!!! I never had anyone!!!!!! I know ur parents had probably loved you a lot!!! But I had no one telling me that they love me!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is looking at her!!!

Ranbir: Then how about I change that for you?????

Kanya looks at him

Ranbir: what do you say????

Kanya is looking at him!!!!

She is happy!!!!!!

Ranbir puts his hand out!!!!!!!

He is waiting for Kanya to put her hand on top of his!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is shaking….

She slowly

Takes her hand

And puts it on his!!!!!!!!!

They are looking at each other!!

Ranbir: Together… we will do everything together and fight together!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Next scene

They are at a temple getting married!!!!!!!!!!!

They are taking their pheras!!!!!!

He fills her maang!!!

And puts a mangalsutra on her!!!

She looks at him!!!!!!!

They are married!!!!!!!!!!

They both come home!!!

Kanya is like omg!!!!

She cant believe it!!!!

Ranbir is shocked too

He cant believe it!!!!!!!!!!!

He looks at her!!!!!!!

She is looking at him!!!!

Kanya: Promise me one thing….

Ranbir: What???

Kanya: Just please!! Don't ever leave me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is shocked to hear that!

Ranbir: Then you promise me something??

Kanya; what??

Ranbir: Whatever happens…..just stay by my side!!!!!!! And be there til the end!!!!!

Kanya nods her head yes!!!!!!!!!!

And baamm..

For the 1st time their 1st official hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She is happy!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is happy!!!

Kanya moves into his room!!!!

She takes all her things in there!!!!!!!

Ranbir comes in the room

Sees her

Kanya looks at him…….

Ranbir comes closer to her

She smiles at him

Ranbir smiles back!!!!!!

They hug again

And the scene fades away slowly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S is thinking that there is no way Ranbir and Kanya can get married!!

Becuz she only belongs to him!!!!!!!!!

He's the only one that has loved her

And is will always love her!!!!!!!!!!

He's getting pissed!!!!!

Next Morning

Both are sleeping

Ranbir wakes up

He cant believe what he is seeing!!!!!!

He's married

And that to w/ Kanya!!!!

He is looking at her!!!!

Then he gets up slowly w/o waking her up

And gets ready!!!

Kanya wakes up

Doesn't see Ranbir!!!

She sits up

She gets out of bed

Ranbir is sitting on the couch!!

Kanya comes out!!!

Kanya: Ur up?? Why didn't you wake me up?

RANBIR: what was the need for that?

Diisha: Becuz I have to get up too!!!!!

Ranbir: Ur sleeping so peacefully!!!! So I just let you sleep!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya: I will make something for you!!!

Ranbir: Its okay!! No need!!!!!!

Ranbir leaves for work!

Kanya gets ready

And she also leaves!!!!!

Both of them work!!

Ranbir is working in a company

But his position isnt high!!!!!

He doesn make that much!!!!

But they know that he's Ranbir Nanda!!

Former owner of NGI

They done lots of Buisness w/ NGI!!

Ranbir knows very well who they are

He is thinking by using them

He will get everything back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir comes home from work

He comes home

Kanya isnt home yet

She comes home after him

They see each other

She smiles!!!!

She comes to him and hugs him!!

While hugging her

Ranbir is feeling so bad that she is working

But he thinks after he gets everything back she wont work at all!!!!!!

She makes dinner

Poor thing is tired

She works all day and she has to cook

But she thinks that its worth it…. Anything for RANBIR!!!

She cooks dinner!!!

Both eat

After she cleans everything up!

They both sit on the couch!!!!!

Ranbir is thinking of a plan!!

He's quiet

She puts her head on his shoulders!!!!

Kanya; what are you thinking???

Ranbir: I am thinking of how to get everything back!!!!!! And I have a plan!!!!!!!!

Kanya: What??

Ranbir tells her the plan!!!!!!

Kanya: But will it work???

Ranbir: I know it will!!!

After a while..

She starts falling asleep!!

And she does

Ranbir looks at her

Ranbir: Kanya??? Kanya??

She doesn't respond!

Ranbir picks her up

And places her on the bed!!!!

He kisses her on the forehead!!!!

Next day at work

Ranbir is working

He is thinking of getting contracts for the company he works for

And beating Samar to it!!!!!

Basically is he is working against his own company!!!!

S is trying to get it

And he thinks that he should get it

Cuz he owns everything!!!

But luckily Ranbir beat him to it!!

The company is impressed

Ranbir is like thank god!!!!!

S is getting pissed!!!!

He's like damn!!!

S leaves

He is going

And he sees Kanya walking home

He pulls over and sees her

He is shocked to see sindoor and a mangalsutra around her neck!!!!!!

He is questioning her!!!

Kanya doesnt answer

S gets out of the car and he asks her.....

Kanya; yes!! We have married!!

S cant believe it!!!

He's like no way!!!!

Kanya keeps walking

S is screaming at Kanya that you cant do this etc......

Kanya: I have already done it!!!!!!

She walks!!!!!

S is pissed!!

He goes home and he is going out of control!!!

Kanya comes home

Ranbir isnt home yet….

She cooks

She finishes and he's still isnt home

She sits on the sofa

And closes her eyes

After a while Ranbir comes home

He sees her

He takes off his coat/ jacket...

Whatever you want to call it

He comes and sits next to her

She opens her eyes

And sees him

She quickly gets up!!!!

Kanya; Ur back!! I'll get food!!!!

She gets up quickly

He grabs her

Ranbir: Why do you always do things in a hurry????

Kanya; Why???

Ranbir: Becuz!!!! Who says i am hungry??

Kanya; Ur not hungry???

Ranbir: I am!!

Kanya: See....!!

Ranbir: But did i say i want food???

Kanya smiles!!!!

S is getting annoyed!!!!!!

He keeps seeing Kanya in his head

He sees Kanya smiling and everything

And then he sees her w/ Ranbir!!!

He's going crazy!!!

S: No you cannot be anyone else's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He goes crazy!!!!!

Ranbir and Kanya are done w/ dinner!!!!!

Ranbir is saying that i will do anything to get back everything i have lost, and etc..........

Kanya is just listening!!!!!!!

Later on

She goes in her room

Then S comes

Ranbir is shocked to see him.......

He gets up....

And goes to him thinking why has he come here!!!

S tells him that he has something important to discuss w/ him....

S: I Know that you want everything back!!!!

Ranbir is looking at him!!

Kanya hears

She is looking out the door and is shocked to see S!!!

She listens to their convo!!

S: And i know u will do anything to get it back!!!!!!..... Now... i am willing to give everything back to!! No joke!!! But you have to give me something in return!!!!!!

Ranbir: Wat???

S: Now think about it!! What i have u want!!!!!.........

Ranbir: What do you want??????????

S: I will give you everything back..... if you give me Kanya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!

And Kanya knows that NGI means everything to Ranbir!!!!

And she remembers him telling her that he will do anything to get it back!!!!!

Kanya is omg no!!!!

Ranbir is like what do i want??

He's thinking about it!!!!

Kanya comes out

S sees her

Kanya is looking at Ranbir

Ranbir is looking at Kanya

Ranbir looks at S who has the papers ready in his hands!!!!!!

Ranbir is looking both ways!!!

Kanya is like omg!!!!!!

Ranbir also remembers him telling her that he will do anything to get his property back!!!!

He is thinking!!!

Whats more important??? Kanya or NGI!!!

Kanya is looking at him

S is looking at Kanya!!!!!!

Kanya is sad!



plz comment


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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Beautiful update. Actually it has become a habit for me to check the Kuch is tarah forum just so I can read your update. I am really liking this story and now I cannot wait till tomorrow to read the next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
brilliant... i loved it... i hope ranbir throws the paper on S's face....
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
hey guli
gr8 part..
hope ranbir tears the papers n throws it in his face..
cont.sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hey great part please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
That was gr8
I wish ranbir rips the papers and throws them at S
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Yeah,i too hope Ranbir prefers kanya to his property.Can't wait for the next update.

Edited by GGG3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Really LOVE the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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