FF: Jeevan Saathi #2: Pg 24 (End)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey you guys!!! I am back again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........ Cuz you guys wanted another FF!! but if boredom occurs... do let me know i will stop!!!!!



This is not a continuation of the other one..... its another story all together!!!.... Characters are less!!!!....... the family isnt there!!..... no point in them!! Aayan and Shanaya will come later in the story!!!

Chunnu is in here..... but i am going to have his name be Samar..... Becuz i dont like Chunnu!!! So wherever you see Samar or S... its him!!!!


Ranbir and Chunnu are buisness Rivals.......


And just go with the flow.... that Ranbir and Kanya know each other!!!!!.......... Chunnu is in love with Kanya... not the other way around!


Part 1

Scene opens in NGI'.

Ranbir is in his office

He is trying to get contracts'.

Samar is busy in his office doing the same thing!!

When he hears that Ranbir got it before him

He gets pissed

Kanya visits him in the office'.

S is really happy!!

He smiles!!!!

She always comes once in a while'

S: I am so mad!!

Kanya: Why??

S: That Ranbir!!!

Kanya: What did he do now?

S: I had an eye on this contract and he took it!!!!

He is getting mad

Kanya tries to calm him down!!!!

Ranbir is happy!!!

Later on in the after noon

He's off

He goes home

He gets out of his car'

Kanya is walking by'.

Ranbir sees her

Kanya sees him..

She just keeps walking''

Ranbir goes in the house

He comes home to an empty mansion!!!

He's relaxing

He has nothing to worry about!!!!

But S is in his office thinking how to destroy Ranbir Nanda

S: I will ruin you!!! You watch!!!!! I will not give up so easily!!

In the past'.

Ranbir has beaten S at everything!!!!

Ranbir hates him too!!!!!

Biggest rivals in the world!!!!

(Kanya stays at a small place'' and its being paid for by Samar')

S is getting mad

He's blaming Ranbir for all his problems

He's just jealous

Cuz Ranbir is better business man than him!

He's getting annoyed!!!!

Ranbir is relaxing!!!!

He has no problems

Next day

S comes to NGI

And starts getting angry at him

Ranbir is like who the hell are you to come in my cabin and yell!!

Ranbir: Get out of my cabin!!

S: Hey!!!! I don't care what u tell me!!!!!

They just exchange words back and fourth

And then S tells him that one day he'll be on the streets!!!!!

Ranbir looks at him

And he leaves!!!!

S comes back to his office

Kanya comes

She tells him whats wrong?

S: RANBIR NANDA!!!

Kanya: What did he do now???

S: Its what I am going to do!!!!!

Kanya: Will u just leave it?

S: NO!!!!

He gets all mad

She just listens!!!

She leaves from there

She walks

Ranbir is coming her way

She doesn't see him

They bump to each other!!!

She thinks its his fault

And w/o seeing his face

Kanya; Watch where u are going!!!!!

Then she see him..

Its Ranbir!!!!

Ranbir looks at her!!

Kanya is like uh oh!!

She starts yelling at him for no reason

He just listens

Then he gets fed up

And he's like I didn't mean to do it!!

And they both yell!!

Ranbir: Its useless talking to people like you!!!!

He leaves

Kanya is like oh no he just didn't say that!!

Kanya walks

And he walks the oppisite

He comes home

Such a big house

No one stays there!!!!

This is his life!!!!!

Kanya comes to her house!!

S comes over!!

He's always there!!!

Next day

S is thinking' this time nothing will fail

He hires a man

He wants him to work at NGI

And make Ranbir signs power of attorney papers!!!!

SO that everything will belong to S!!!!!!

The guy goes to NGI!

He goes for the job''

Ranbir says he doesn't need anyone right now

The guy acts and he puts up an act

Ranbir is like okay!

He has the job!!!!!!!

He informs S!!!

S smiles!!!!!

S tells him what he has to do

The guy understands

As he knows what to do!!!!!

S is happy!!!!!!!

After work again

Ranbir's in the car

He's just thinking about the day''.

And what not!!

He's just tired!!!

He sees someone

He tells the driver to stop

He walks to his friend

Kanya is walking by

They bump into each other again!!!!!

Kanya yells at him again!!!!

Ranbir doesn't care

He listens to her crap!

He just walks away!!!!!

Kanya leaves!!!!

Kanya: How rude!!!!!

Everytime she sees him

She starts going off on him!!!!!

She doesn't realize what she says to him

It just comes out!!

1 week later

The guy gives some files to RANBIR!!!!

He has to sign them!!!!

Ranbir usually reads everything

But his phone is ringing

So he's on the phone

Guy is like come on!!!!

Papers say that NGI and his house' will belong to Samar

W/ Ranbir's signature!!

And Ranbir ends up signing them!

He closes it

And gives it

Guy tells S

That the job is done

S is happy!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy leaves work

Gives the paper to him

Ranbir arrives home

He comes in

S is there!!

Ranbir is like what are you doing here?

Get out!!!!

S: No can do!!!! Becuz all of this is mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!

RANBIR is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S: Yes!!! Ur NGI and ur house now belongs to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir's getting pissed!!!

He goes to him and grabs his collar

S is just laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S shows RANBIR the papers!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He laughs and laughs!!!

Ranbir is thinking how could he sign this!

Then the guy shows up

He smiles!!

Ranbir looks at him

He's even more pissed!

Ranbir is like oh no!!!

He is doomed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

He closes his eyes!!!

S: I will give you 1 day'. To take ur things and leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By tomorrow'. U shouldn't be here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or else' I will kick u out myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He leaves

Ranbir is sad!!!!!!!!!

He cant believe this!!

He cant get anything now!!




plz comment!
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Sexy_Aditi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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what is this FF mean? 😕
KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loved the start...
i think i'll wait for the next few updates before i make up my mind as to whether i love it or not... but the start is good and knowing what a brill writer you are this one will be just as good...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i'm soo happy u started another, can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I just read the start
Its AWESOME, looks like this ff is goin to as gr8 as Jeevan Saathi #1
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooooon

Edited by Kiran_1 - 17 years ago
Sallu- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oo guli excellent satrt i luv it! continue sooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: KC294

i loved the start...
i think i'll wait for the next few updates before i make up my mind as to whether i love it or not... but the start is good and knowing what a brill writer you are this one will be just as good...
pls continue soon



Agreed! Good Job!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Cuz what he signed belongs to S!!!!

Before next morning

He tries everything

But nothing!!!

HE tries and tries

But nothing can be done

That makes him mad

Morning comes

S comes

And kicks him out!!!

Ranbir is sad

He looks at his house!!!!!!!

Closes his eyes!!

He's out

He takes his things!!!!

He does have money

But not that much!!!!!!!!!

He has to live on what he has!!!

Where does he go!!

He thinks!!

He has no where to go!!

Then he thinks

He takes a taxi……

He tries all his people

But none of them are home!!

His friends and everything

But nothing!!!!

He stops the taxi…..

Goes to someone else's house

But they aren't there

He's walking back to the taxi…..

And guess who he meets there

Kanya!!

Kanya doesn't know what S did!!!

She starts talking crap!

Ranbir is sad

And Kanya makes it worst!!!

Again she doesn't realize what she says!!!

Ranbir leaves

Then RANBIR gets an idea

There is only place he can go!!!!

Where does he go??

Then the only that he thought of was their old home!!!… wen they were barely trying to make a living wen he was little……

That's where he goes!!!

Ranbir goes there

Its old and everything!!

No one has been staying there

He opens the door!!!!

Its only 1 story…

And its small!!!!

Ranbir stays there

At least he has somewhere to go!

Now he thinks

What can he do now

He has to get it all back!

But how!!

S is enjoying himself!!

S takes Kanya somewhere

She's trying to think where's he taking me!!

She doesn't know that he's taking her to Nanda house

They arrive there

Kanya is like what are we doing here

S tells her to come

She goes inside

S tells her everything!!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!

S; This is all mine!! I told you that I would do something well I did!! Ranbir is on the streets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Kanya cant believe it!!

Kanya; U did what??? But why??

S: Becuz he deserved it!!! Now everything that belongs to him is now mine!!!!

She is speechless!!

Kanya: But that's so…. How could u do that?

S: easy!!!!!

Then Kanya is thinking how she yelled at him

She feels so bad!!!

She looks around the house!!!

She goes to each room

Which she does

S is like enjoy!!!

S: U will stay here!!

Kanya feels bad!!

She doesn't want to!!

She goes to Ranbir's room!!

Its empty!!!

She never knew S could do this harsh thing!!!

Kanya goes to him

She tries to explain to him that this wasn't right what she did

He's like I don't care!!!!!

Kanya explains to him still

He gets annoyed

And yells at her!!!!

He grabs her shoulders

Kanya: S ur scaring me!!!!!!

S: Look!! I don't care!!!! Why should u care? You have a place to stay right!!!!!

Kanya: I have never seen you like this!!!!!

She's never seen this side of him

S tells her again to move in!!!!

Kanya goes……

She is thinking of all the bad things she said to Ranbir!!!!

She is thinking where could he go!!!

She tries to look for him

But doesn't find him!!!!

She is sad!!

She moves in Nanda house

She doesn't want to!!

She's in this big house

That doesn't belong to her

Or to Samar!!!

She goes in Ranbir's room

She is looking around

She opens his drawers and what not

Nothing is there

She opens another one

And there's a book

It's a book where Ranbir just writes down his thoughts and everything

Its really sad

He talks about his mother and father!!!

Kanya reads it

She is shocked!!!!!

He's a nice guy

And she's been saying this crap to him!!

He talks about his success

How he had nothing

And now he's something!!!

But she realizes that he's back to where he's started from!!!

There's a piece of paper folded

Kanya opens it

Its an address

Kanya thinks what if he's gone there!!!

So she puts it back

And goes to that address

And yes its none other than his hosue!!!!

Kanya gets down slowly from the car

She goes to the house

Ranbir sees her

He is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is looking at him!!!!!!!

Before she says anything

Ranbir starts yelling at her!!!!

Ranbir: Look before you say anything….. I will say it for you!!

He starts yelling at her

Kanya is sad

She tries to talk

But Ranbir isnt listening

Kanya is sad!!

She doesn't argue w/ him

Cuz she deserves it!!!!!

Ranbir asks her to leave!!!!

Kanya doesn't leave!!!!!!

Ranbir yells at her

Saying leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya; Please listen to me!! I am sorry!!!!!

Ranbir: I don't want to hear anything

Kanya; I am sorry!! I didn't know that he did all of this

She says sorry

She means it!!!

Ranbir looks at her

And she leaves!!!

Ranbir is there thinking

Next day

Ranbir tries to find a job

He goes job hunting

He has to start supporting himself some how

He tries everywhere

But no luck at her!!!!

He comes back home

He's sad!!!!

S comes to Kanya

She is sad!!!!!

S tells her that he's so happy today

But Kanya isnt happy

She still complains to him about what he did

He says he doesn't care

And tells her to stop worrying

Kanya is sad!!


plz comment!😳
Sallu- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved that part aww poor rannu!
gerat ff so far guli
continue sooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
aw poor ranbir...
i can't wait for the next bit...
pls continue soon

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