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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 8

Manager thinks about it

And he gives it to them!

Ranbir is happy!!!!!!

A little more money

They need to save their money!!

Cuz they don't have lots of it!!!!!

Ranbir gets paid today!!

He brings it home

But like it goes away cuz some of the expenses they have!!!!

Meanwhile…

Introducing Aayan and Shanaya!

They are married!!

but they don't like each other!!!!

They hate each other to bits!

Shanaya and Kanya are sisters..

But they don't know it

Aayan and Ranbir are brothers

They know..

Aayan doesn't know what happened to Ranbir!

Cuz he doesn't live w/ them!!!!

Ranbir and Kanya are just sitting on the bed!!!!!!!

They are just tired!!!!!

Ranbir has to go to work and what not!!!

Kanya is used to not having so much money!!

So where ever she stays it doesn't matter!!!!

Ranbir knows that!!

But for him

He's not so use to it!!!!

Next Morning

Ranbir goes to work

He works all day!!!!!

Kanya is at home

She wants to go back to work

But RANBIR doesn't let her!!

She cleans around the house and what not

Typical house wife

But she wants to make money too!!!!!

They are a team!!

But Ranbir doesn't want her to work!!!!

Afterwards

He comes home

He is so tired

Poor guy

Kanya gives him food!!!!!!

He eats!!!!!

Ranbir is falling a little sick!!

He doesn't want to tell Kanya

Its nothing really

Well to him… its nothing!!

He goes to sleep early!!

Kanya sees him sleeping

And she smiles!!!

Next Morning

Ranbir is still sleeping

Kanya checks the clock

Its 730!!

She wakes up Ranbir!!!

Cuz he has to leave!!

He isnt waking up!

She sits up

Kanya; Ranbir???

She wakes him

He wont wake up!!

She checks…

He's hot!!!

She's like omg!!!!!

She puts cold cloths on him….

She tries to get medicines for him

But they are too much!!

She's like now what do I do!!

She gets worried!!

She tries to think of something!!!!

She goes to his office

Tells them that he sick and he cant work

They are like okay!!

She asks them for an advance…….for Ranbir!!!

The guy says that no can do!!!

He has to work!!

Kanya needs cash now!!!

She says that how about she takes his place

Guys are like are you crazy???

Kanya is begging!!

They think about it

And they agree!!!!

She works there

If Ranbir found out

He would be mad at her!!!!!!!!!!

She works there

They give her cash

She brings medicine for him!!!!!!!

Makes him take it!!!

Ranbir is like I cant be here

I need to go to work

Kanya: No!!! You cant!! You stay!

Ranbir: Kanya!

Kanya: No!! And besides I told them!!!!

Ranbir stays!!!!!!

Kanya told the people not to tell RANBIR that she was here!!

And she was working… and asked for the advance!!!!!!!!!!!

They agreed!!!!

Kanya takes care of Ranbir!!

He gets better!!!!!

Goes to work after a few days!!

He starts working again!!!

He is looking over some things!!!!

He finds a paper… which it reads that there was an advance taken out….. from Ranbir!

Ranbir doesn't remember this

Goes to the main chick up front…

She doesn't know

And she squeals

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To know that Kanya was here!!!

And took it

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

He's like why did Kanya come here

HE asks the people

No one says anything

RANBIR asks for a reason

He comes to know that she worked there

Cuz he was sick

And she needed the cash!!!

Ranbir is like oh no!!!!!!

He comes home

Kanya sees him

Ranbir is mad!!!!!

Kanya notices his mood is off

Kanya asks whats wrong?

Ranbir: Why???

Kanya is confused!

Ranbir: Why did you take an advance???

Kanya is shocked!!!

Ranbir can tell by her face

RANBIR: Why??? Why did you do this???? And u worked? I told you not to!!!

Kanya: Yeah but..

Ranbir; I don't want to hear it!!!!!!!!! I will work back for that money! And I will pay them off!!!!!

He is mad

Kanya is sad!

Kanya: But Ranbir……

Ranbir: No!!!!!!! I don't understand why you went there!!!!!!! Why???

Kanya closes her eyes!!!!

Ranbir: If I was sick… u shouldve just let me be!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is nodding her head no!!

Ranbir: But I will work for each penny!!!!!! …….

Kanya is sad!!!!!!!!

For the next couple of days

RANBIR works day and night at the office

So he can repay them back!!!!!

He doesn't come home til late….

Kanya waits for him

When he comes home…..

Kanya sees

She gives him food

Ranbir doesn't eat anything

And goes

Kanya is sad!!!

She's like what have I done??

She is sad!!

She goes in the room

She sees that he is already sleeping!!!!!!!!!!!

She just goes to sleep!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile…

Back in another place

Shanaya and Aayan are fighting again!!

They cant stand each other

But they have no choice

They have to stay together!!!

Ranbir warned Aayan not to get married so soon

But he didn't listen

And he did!!!!!

And now look!!!

All they do is fight day and night!!!

One blames the other one

The other blames them back!!!

Its bad!!!!!!!!!

Aayan doesn't want to go back cuz he knew Ranbir was right!!!!

When they did come down last year…..

They both came together

And put on an act that they were happy!!

But they cant stand it!!!


plz comment!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
that was an amazing update...
want to know more fo Ayan and shanaya's story
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
hey great part please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Why was Ranbir so angry at Kanya working. She did it to help him. Is there any other reason. I was expecting cute love and romance scenes between them. Continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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greta part guli update soooooooon!
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Part 9


Next Morning

Both are in still in bed!!

Ranbir is looking at Kanya!!!! He is awake!

He is thinking that he was a little harsh w/ her!!!!

He shouldn't of yelled like that!!!!

Kanya is sleeping but her back is faced to him!!!!

Then she turns

Opens her eyes

And sees Ranbir

She is shocked!!

Ranbir is looking at her!!!

She's like oh no what do I do now!!!!

She keeps looking at him!!!

He is looking at her

Ranbir: Kanya…

She's like omg!!

Ranbir; I am really sorry!!!!!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!

Ranbir: I know I shouldn't have said that to you!!!!

He puts his hand on her face

And apologizes to her!!!!!!

Her eyes get all watery…….

And she hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir gets ready for work

And he leaves!!!!

The phone rings

And Kanya picks it up!!

Its from the same place where she worked

They tell her that if she wants the job again…. she can get it

Kanya is happy!!!

And w/o thinking about she accepts it!!!

She goes over there

And she works again!!!

Later that day

She comes home

Ranbir is home early today

And asks her where was she?

Kanya tells him

RANBIR is shocked!!!!!!!

Ranbir tells her not to work!!!!!

Kanya; But Ranbir….

Ranbir: No!! I told you this before… I don't want you to work!!

Kanya: But Ranbir… I have no problem in working!!

Ranbir says no!!

He tells her to quit!!!!!

Kanya is sad!!!!!

Kanya is thinking

That she is only doing this to help him out!!!

They don't have much!

And if she gets paid and he gets paid

They can manage their small place that they have!!

She ends up telling Ranbir that she will quit

But she will stick to it!!!

She talks to her manager

And tells her that she will only work form 9-3!!!

Becuz Ranbir leaves in the morning at 8

And he comes back around 4!!!

So she has 1 hour!!!!!

Her boss tells her its okay!

She is happy

Ranbir doesn't know that she stil has the job

And boy o boy when he finds out

He will be upset!

But Kanya wont tell him at all!!

Kanya comes home at 3: 30!

She starts to cook food….

She is tired from work today!

She is cooking Ranbir comes home!!!

She is happy!!!

Meanwhile

Somewhere or another Aayan comes to know about Ranbir!!!

And he is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He cant believe it!!!

He has nothing today!!

Aayan is like a man who was living like a king has nothing today!!!

He wants to go to him

But he knows Ranbir's ego!!!!

He feels bad!!!!!

He tries to send him money

But the problem is that he doesn't know where he is

And knowing Ranbir

He will send it back!!!

Aayan: I wonder how is he??

He is sad!!!

For the next couple of weeks…..

This is the same routine everyday!!!!!!!!!!

Work and Home!!

When Kanya gets paid she puts in a drawer and puts it w/ Ranbir's!!!!

But she only puts a little at a time

Or else Ranbir might question how come there is so much money!!!!!!!!!!1

Becuz only he knows how much he gets!!!

Expenses, Expenses, expenses!

So much they have to pay for

Ranbir is stressing out over it

Kanya tries to convince him

That maybe she could get that job!!!

But Ranbir says no!

Kanya is like damn!!

Ranbir tells Kanya that tomorrow he has the day off

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

She's like how will she go if Ranbir is @ home!!!

She quietly calls her boss…

And says that she wont be making it for work tomorrow!!!!!!

Boss asks her why!!

And knowing Kanya

She tells her the truth!!

Boss is a nice lady

So she says okay!!!!!

Kanya promises that it wont always be like this!!!!!!!

She puts down the phone

Ranbir comes out

Ranbir: Who were you talking to?

Kanya gets scared

Kanya: Oh wrong number!!

Ranbir: okay!!!!!

She's like phew that was close!!!!!

Next day

Since Kanya is home…

She does a little cleaning around the house!!!!!

Ranbir tells her to stop and tells her lets go out!!

So she stops and both go!!

They are out

Enjoying these small happy moments w/ these bad times!!!!

They are walking

And they see a couple w/ a 1 year old boy….. on a bench

They have their things next to them!!!!!!

Kanya looks at them

She is all sad!!!!

She keeps looking at them!!

Ranbir is like what are you looking at

Kanya: Ranbir.. look at them!!!

Ranbir sees!!

Kanya feels sorry for them

She asks Ranbir what if they stay w/ them!!

Ranbir is like no way!!!

Ranbir: I am sorry Kanya!!!! I would!! But not at a time like this!!

Kanya: Look at them!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya??? We don't have that much right now and you want to add….. I cant!!

Kanya: Why don't I just work???

Ranbir: Kanya!! How many times will we argue about this over and over again????

Kanya; Please Ranbir!!

Ranbir: No!!!!

Kanya; Okay fine!! Forget about the work… but what about them??

Ranbir: Kanya!!!! I know you a big heart… but its…

Kanya: Please Ranbir!!! Look they even have a little boy!!!!!!!!!

RANBIR doesn't say anything!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is like please!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya I am going to leave this up to you!! I have nothing to do w/ this!!!!!!!!!

Kanya: Ranbir?

Ranbir: No!!! You do whatever you want!!!

Kanya goes to them

They see her!!!

Kanya asks them what are they doing here

They didn't pay their rent so they were kicked out!!

Kanya is sad!!!!

Kanya asks them to come w/ her!

But they say no!!!

Kanya insists and insists!!!

And the little boy is crying too!!!!!

The couple looks at each other

Kanya tells them please don't say no!!!!!!!!!!

They agree to it!!

Kanya smiles!!!!!

They arrive at the home!!!

They give them a small room that's there!!!!

Its not that big but it will do!!!

Ranbir is like whatever!!

Ranbir is sitting on the bed…..

Kanya comes in!!!!

She sits next to him

Kanya is happy

She is did something food for someone!!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya…. U know they will have to leave sometime!!!

Kanya: yeah I know!! But let them at least stay for a couple of days!!!

Ranbir: It was ur decision!!!!!!

Next day……

Kanya is up

She cooks breakfast…..

Ranbir eats and he leaves!!

The wife comes out

Kanya is like I have to leave in 30 mins!!

The wife is thankful for everything she did!!

Kanya is like don't worry about it!!!

Kanya tells her what her situation is at the moment!!!!!!!

Wife understands…

She tells her not to worry!!

Kanya goes to work!!!!!

Wife and her son is there

Husband goes and looks for a job

These nice people let them stay at their house!!!!!!

And he doesn't want to live for free!!!!!!!

He goes out

And finds some job!!!!

Kanya comes home at 330

Wife has already cooked everything

Kanya is like u shouldn't have!!

Wife; Its okay!!!! U let us stay here… I have to do something to!!!!

Kanya smiles!!!!

Ranbir comes home

And so does the guy

Guy has some cash

And he gives it to Ranbir!!!

Ranbir is like whats this for

The guy is like you are letting us stay here…..

So this is the least we can do!!!

Ranbir looks at Kanya!!!

Kanya smiles!!!

Ranbir is like its okay!!!

Guy is like this isnt right!!!!!!

He gives it to Ranbir

But Ranbir doesn't want it!!!!!!!

And he tells him to keep it!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is like what a guy!!!!

They all eat!!!

Later in the night

Ranbir is on the bed thinking

Kanya: Wat are you thinking?

Ranbir: About him!!!

Kanya smiles!!!

Ranbir: He was willing to give us money!!

Kanya: There are lots of people that take advantages of certain situations!! But these people don't!!!!!!!

Ranbir is like ur right!!!!!!!!

For the next couple of weeks…

They are still there!!!!!

Money is getting tight over here!!!!!

Guy tries to pay

But Ranbir wont accept it!!!!

He talks to Kanya…

Kanya says that here is some cash!!!!

Ranbir: Where did you get this?

Kanya: I had saAayan some!!

Of course she lied to him about it!!!!!!

Kanya: Here take it!!!

Ranbir: But..

Kanya; Trust me and don't ask questions!!!!!

Ranbir is like w/ them staying here and the expenses!!!!!!!

He's in the need of cash!!!!!!

His plan of getting his property back is there

But he cant do anything as of now!!!!

He needs to get a higher position where he works!!

Or else everything might go hay wire!!!

Kanya tells him to not to worry about it!!!!

Kanya: We are happy aren't we!!!! And we have each other!!…

She puts her head on his shoulders!!!!!!!

Ranbir holds her hands!!!!


plz comment!!

No update tomorrow... wedding to attend!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hope he gets everything back soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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brill part guli... av fun tomorow!!!
and continue sooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update! really like this story!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great part please continue soon

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