FF: Jeevan Saathi #2: Pg 24 (End) - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
Quite interesting.Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
gr8 update
i feel so sad for ranbir!
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Its Awsome aww poor rannu 😭 eagerly waiting for the enxt part plz continue!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
i think i hate samar
i am not sure because i like chunu actually
he's cute
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Part 3

She comes to see Ranbir again

Ranbir is like what are you here!!!

Kanya is still feeling ashamed

He's saying he doesn't want any sympathy!

She tries to start talking to him

Ranbir is thinking

That S mustve sent her

Ranbir has no reaction

She starts talking to him

Ranbir tells her what he feels

And that is that S must have sent her

Kanya says he doesn't know I am here!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya; He is my friend!!! And becuz of him I have a roof over my head!!!!!!!

(Yeah @ his house)

Kanya says that she doesn't have anything!!!

Becuz of S

She has something!!!!

Cuz he pays for everything for her!!!!!!

Ranbir just looks at her!!

No feelings

Surprising thing

That Kanya comes to him everyday!!!

Ranbir thinks why does she always come here!!

If she is sorry

He doesn't care anymore!

Later on She leaves!!!

Ranbir is really fed up where's he staying

He has somewhere to stay

But he has nothing

He's tried everything!!!!

He goes job-hunting again

He finds a small job!!!!

He's desperate he'll take anything

He doesn't make that much

But something is better than nothing!

He works there!!!

S is enjoying himself!!!

He decides to throw a party!!!

He has a party

Lots of people come

Kanya isnt too happy about it

She isnt in the mood

S is having a good time

He looks for Kanya!!

She's in the room

S: Come on lets go!!

Kanya: I don't want to!!

S: Come on!!

Kanya says no!!

She doesn't want to!!

S: I don't know why u have forgotten… its been one week!!!!

Kanya is like that's so mean!!

Kanya: U could do something like this I would never imagine!!!

S is giving attitude!

Kanya is sad!!

Kanya: Ur never gonna listen!!!! And I don't know why I am talking to you now about this!!!!

S: Now you realize!

Kanya: I thought u were a nice person!!….. but…

S gets mad at her

He throws a fit on her!!

Kanya gets scared!!!!

He's so much into this

And he forgot that he likes her!!!!

Now he doesn't care about her

Its only about his wealth!!

Kanya: Fine!!!! U enjoy all of this!!!!! I am leaving

S: Where are you going???

Kanya: I don't know but I will not stay here!!!!

S: Where will u go??

Kanya: Anywhere!

S: Don't forget becuz of me…. U are here!!!!!!! And where will you go???? U have no one!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!

As of now…. He doesn't realize whats he telling her!!!

Kanya is crying!!!!

He has a mean look on his face!!!!!

She gets mad

And she packs

S: Fine!! Ur choice!!! See if I care!!!!!! You and Ranbir both deserve it!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!

She closes her eyes and tears flow!!!!

S is enjoying his party!!

Kanya leaves!

She thinks where could she go!!

She sits on a bench!!

And she stays there!!!!

She stays for two days!!!

She hasn't moved or anything!!!

Ranbir is walking by…….

He doesn't see her!!

Some guys who have a little cart are talking about her!!!!

Guy: Poor gal!! She's been sitting there for two days!!! I feel sorry for her!!!!

Ranbir sees

He's shocked to see Kanya!!!!!!!!

He comes to her

Ranbir; Kanya??

Kanya is shocked to see him!!!!

She turns away!!

Ranbir: Wats wrong?? Why are you here?

Kanya doesn't talk to him!!

Ranbir: Please say something!!!!

Kanya: I left!!

Ranbir: Why?

Kanya; Becuz!!!

Ranbir: Did he do something to you?

Kanya: No!!!

Ranbir: Then?

Kanya is quiet!!

Ranbir: How long have u been sitting here?

Kanya: Not that long!!

Ranbir: Not that long…..???? Look at you!!!

Kanya; I will be fine!! You worry about urself!!!!! I can take care of myself!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya!!!

Kanya; No please!!!!!……

Ranbir forces her to come w/ him!!!

Kanya is like I am fine!!!

She says no……

Ranbir keeps trying

But no use

He ends up leaving

Kanya stays there

Later on

It begins to rain

Kanya is shocked!!!!!

She tries to go under somewhere!!!

So she doesn't get wet

Ranbir realizes its raining

He thinks about Kanya

He goes out to get her

She's not by the bench

He turns and sees her

He tells her to come

Ranbir tells her not to be stubborn

So she ends up coming

They both arrive there

Kanya feels now awkward… then before

Ranbir gives her a room

Kanya stands there

Ranbir tells her to come…

Ranbir asks her again wat happened that she left?

She refuses to answer!!!!1

Ranbir is like okay whatever!!!!!

Next day…..

S is thinking what happened w/ Kanya

He feels guilty

He's thinking where could she go!!!

He looks for her

But he cant find her!!!!!

He's mad now!!!!!!!!

He has that!!

But yet the thing that cheers him up is all the money he has now!!!!!

His plus Ranbir's…..

Its like wow!!

Kanya is walking on the roads

S's in the car

He stops!!1

Kanya is shocked to see him

S is begging for her to come back!!!

Kanya is mad

And she is saying no

S begs

But she is saying no!!

She leaves!!

He follows her

Kanya is like leave me alone!!!1

S: I don't know what ur problem is!!!!

Kanya: U are my problem!!!!

S is shocked!!

S: After everything I have done…… this is how u repay me!!!!!

Kanya: What u did wasn't right!

She walks away!

S is mad!!

Kanya comes home…

She is sad!!!!!

Ranbir is walking

S sees him!!!

RANBIR is angry seeing him

S is happy seeing his state!!!!

S: I always wanted to see this day!!!!….. I am enjoying it so much!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is looking at him

He isnt saying anything!

Ranbir is like whatever….

He starts walking off..

S's phone rings…..

He picks it up

He's talking about Kanya!!

Ranbir stops

And he listens

S: Kanya!!… who cares!!!!!! I don't care anymore!!! After everything I did for her…. This is how she repays me!! Only becuz what I did to Ranbir!!! She left on her own!!!!…….i don't care where she is!!!!!!!! I mean where could she go!!!! And plus I know she will come crawling back to me!!! And she will ask for my forgiveness!!!!!!

He laughs!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is cooking

She cooks and sets it on the table!!

And she goes in her room

RANBIR arrives home

He sees food

He looks around

He calls her out

He's like did you eat??

Kanya: No u eat!

Ranbir; Why didn't u eat?

Kanya: Becuz its ur money so ur food!!!

Ranbir is like whoa!!

Ranbir tells her to eat

Kanya says no!!!

Ranbir: Kanya!!

She stops!!

Ranbir: Why did you leave for me??

Kanya is confused!!!!!!!

Ranbir: I heard S talking to someone today!!! And he said that….

Kanya: No its not that!!

Ranbir: Kanya??

Kanya is quiet!!!!!!

Kanya; Becuz he's not the same person who I thought he was!!!!!!! And I didn't like what he did to you!!!!

Ranbir: But why did you leave that??? Its my life!! It happened to me!! Why are you so concerned about it?

Kanya looks at him!!!

Ranbir: This happened to me!!! You had a place to stay!!!!

Kanya: Yeah I was living in ur house!!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!

Kanya: But I didn't want to live in someone elses house!!!! W/o their permission!!!

Ranbir: But its too late now!!!! I will get everything back! I will be the same Ranbir Nanda again!! But you had a roof over ur head and he was taking care of u!!!

Kanya: Oh yeah!! I stay w/ all of that and you are here!!!!

Ranbir: Why are you caring about me?? Care about urself!!!!!

Kanya looks at him!!!…

Kanya: I just regret everything I ever said to you!!!!

Ranbir: I don't care about that anymore!!

Kanya: But I do!! I hurt you a lot! I know I did!!!!!

Ranbir:… Look… lets just stop talking about this!! … Come on and eat!!!

Kanya: U go ahead!

Ranbir: If u don't eat then neither will I!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!

Kanya: Okay I will… but u eat 1st!!!! Then I will!!!

Ranbir: Oh no!! I am falling for that!!!!!

They both end up eating!!

He's eating

Kanya looks at him!!!!!

While he is eating

Then she snaps out of it

She's thinking why was I looking at him!!!

She's like omg!!!!!

Next day

Ranbir goes to his little work!!!

Not that much!

Kanya starts to look for something!!!!


plz comment!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
Loved it.Make RanKan fall in love soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
it wqas one of the best 👏
they are so cute😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
oo weldone excellent part!
love the plot!
continue soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
sooo sweet. gret job thank u
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
that was a great update... pls continue soon
i like the way this story is going keep it up

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