FF: Jeevan Saathi #2: Pg 24 (End) - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
That was reli sweet make them fall in luv soon and plz continue!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Part 4

She finds a job to

It's a small place where they make you sow things!!!!!!

Ranbir comes home..

He doesn't see Kanya home

She comes in

Ranbir: Where were you?

Kanya: I got a job!!!!

Ranbir: U what?

Kanya; Yeah!!!….. well I have to make something too!!!!…

She goes in the kitchen!!!!!

Cooks

She is tired from today!!!

She puts it on the table!!

Goes in her room

Ranbir comes out……..

(remember they aint living fancy)

He calls Kanya!!!

She isnt coming

He goes to her room

Knocks and opens it

Finds her sleeping!!!!

Ranbir looks at her!!

He looks and looks

He snaps out of it

He's like why was I looking at her?

He's like omg!

He goes to her

And wakes her up

Cuz she has to eat something!!!!

Ranbir: Kanya??? Wake up!!! U have to eat… u cant go to sleep like this!!!

But she is fast asleep!!!

Ranbir leaves the room

He eats!!!

Afterwards

He's on the couch!!

He's like how do I get everything back!!!

He's working in this small place!!

Next Morning

Kanya wakes up

So does Ranbir!

They see each other

She gets ready and she leaves!!!

Ranbir leaves too

They walk together!!

Neither of them are saying anything

Then they split!!!

After the day………

Kanya is walking home

S follows her

When she comes

RANBIR isnt home!!

S calls her

Kanya is shocked to see him!

S: So u are staying here??

Kanya's mad

Kanya; Yes!! I am!!!!! Do u have a problem!!!!

S: I don't!!!

Kanya: Look just leave okay!!!

S: Why now all the attitude!!!

Kanya: Will you please just leave!!!!!!

Ranbir is coming home

He sees

He hides

And he listens!!

S: Look.. I know you wont come back w/ me!!! So here!!

Gives her cash!!!!

Kanya: I don't need ur money!!!

S: Better think twice!!!!

Kanya; I don't want it!!!

S: Look I am being a friend and helping you out!!

Kanya: Some friend you are!!!!!!

S: Wats wrong w/ you?? Ever since…. What I did…this is how u have been acting!!

Kanya: So!!!

S: For a second I was thinking that you started liking him!! But then how could you… he has nothing!! He's like you!!!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!

He closes his eyes!!

Kanya: Go away!!!!!!!!!!!

She's getting mad!!!!

S: Omg!!! You have started liking him!!!!

Kanya: Look.. I don't have time for ur nonsense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S; U like him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ………….

Kanya is quiet!!

S: How could u like a man like him???? He's nothing!! Look at me and look at him!!! There's a difference!!!

Kanya: He has a heart!!

S: I do too!!! And this heart is crazy about you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

So is Ranbir!!!!

Kanya: What??

S: Yes!! I have always liked you!

Kanya; But I never looked at you like that!!!!

S: That was ur mistake!! Or else you wouldn't be seeing this day!!!!!!

Kanya is mad!!

S: U like Ranbir now!! But later you will regret it and crawl back to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He laughs

And he leaves!!

Kanya closes her eyes

She is crying

S leaves

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He goes in

Closes the door!!

Kanya hears

She wipes her tears

Ranbir knows what she's doing!!!

She puts a happy face!!

Kanya; Ur back??? I will make dinner!!!

Ranbir: Stop!!!!!

Kanya stops!!!!!

Ranbir: Why were you crying???

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya; I wasn't!!

Ranbir: why are you lying???

Kanya is like how does he know!!!

Ranbir: U are thinking how do I know right??

Kanya is shocked!

Ranbir: I just heard everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He is looking at her!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He comes closer to her!!!

Kanya is looking down!!!!!

Ranbir: What was he saying true????????

Kanya is quiet!!!

Ranbir: What he did w/ me.. u felt more worst than me!!!! Why???

Kanya looks at him!!!!!

Kanya doesn't say anything!

Kanya: I have to cook…..

She leaves

But he grabs her hand!!!

Kanya is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Why aren't you saying anything??????

Kanya closes her eyes!!!…..

Kanya: Ranbir…..

Ranbir: He offered you cash too…. Why didn't you take it?? U should've!!……

Kanya is looking at him!!!

Kanya; No I didn't want to!!!

Ranbir: Why?

Kanya: Becuz I want to make something for myself!!!!! I cant depend on other people!!!!!! I have to make something for myself to you know!!

Ranbir: But he's ur friend! He was trying to help you!!!

Kanya; well I don't want his help!!!

Ranbir: Then what do u want??

Kanya (herself): I want you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
Beautiful. 👏 Nice job. I am really impressed with your second ff. Keep up the good work and continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
GREAT that was awsome!!! plz continue!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
that was just awesome plzzzz continue fast
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
wow kya cliffhanger megh rak diya hain bai covntinue sooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
why.. 😭
why a short part 😭
this part was so good 👏
why did you make it short 😭
WHY!!!!!!!! 😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
that was a brill update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

Part 5


She closes her eyes!!!!!

Kanya: I don't want anything!!

Ranbir: yes you do u want something!!!!! What is it???

Ranbir: (Himself) I know what u want! But you wont tell me!…..

Kanya makes him let go

And she runs into the kitchen

RANBIR goes in his room…….

Kanya's in the kitchen!

She is thinking about RANBIR!!

She is smiling!!!

Ranbir's in the room!!!

He's thinking about her

He is having flashbacks…. Of her!!!

She is too!

Both smile!!

Next day……..

Ranbir goes to work

He gets fired…..

Ranbir is shocked!

He's like why!!!

The guy said that he has to many workers….

So he has to leave!1

Ranbir is like oh no!!!

Ranbir leaves from there!!!

S comes there and gives the guy cash!!!!!

He smiles!

Ranbir comes home

He's like now wat do I do!!!!!

Poor guy lost his small job!!!

Then he goes and tries more places

But they wont give it to him!!

He gets mad!!

Kanya comes home

Ranbir comes in

He's all sad!!!

Kanya sees

He's like whats wrong???

Ranbir doesn't say anything

Kanya comes to him!!!!

Kanya: Whats wrong???

Ranbir: I lost my job!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya: What?? How????

Ranbir explains to her!!

Kanya gets all sad

Kanya: Now what?

Ranbir: Now I don't know!!!! I tried everywhere!!! But nothing!!!

Ranbir is sad!!!!

Kanya tries to console him!!

He goes in his room!!

Kanya is sad!!!!

She wishes she can do something

Next Morning….

Kanya is awake!!!…..

Ranbir is awake

He sits on the couch!!!!

He's sad!!!!

Kanya tells him to try again!!

Ranbir doesn't have cash on him at all!!

Kanya gives him some!!

Ranbir: No I cant take it! You earned it…. Its yours!!

Kanya: But!!!

Ranbir: No!!!!

Kanya: Why not??

Ranbir: Kanya!???? No!!!! I am will try myself!!!!

He gets up

Kanya is sad!!!!

Kanya stops him

Takes his hand..

And gives it to him!!

Kanya: If u don't take it I will feel bad!!!!!

Ranbir is touched!!!

She leaves

Cuz she has to work

Ranbir looks at her!

Ranbir tries again!!!!

But there's nothing out there!!!!!

Poor guy…

All day

He goes place to place!!!!

He doesn't spend none of Kanya's money!

He comes back home

He gives it to her!!!

She's sad!!!

He couldn't find anything!!!!!!

All his cash has been gone to food…

So he doesn't have anything

Kanya sits next to him!!!!

She's all sad!

She cant do anything for him!!

Kanya tells him that maybe she can help him get a job!!!

Ranbir: Kanya its okay!!! I will try something!! But please… don't worry about me!!

Kanya; How can I not??? I cant see you like this!!

Ranbir is shocked!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir: I guess I am paying for my bad deeds I did!!!!

Kanya: Don't say that!! These bad times will go!! I know!!!!!

Ranbir: you say that w/ so much confidence!!!

Kanya: Well I am not giving up!!! And I know that u will get something!

Next day

Ranbir thinks of a place

He goes there

Tries to look decent and goes

They interview him

They don't know who he is!!!

Looks at his qualifications……

They think it over

And give him the job

He's like thank god!!!!

He starts on the job the same day!!!!!

They are impressed w/ his work!!!!!!!

But he gets very little pay!!!!!!

But something is better than nothing for him!!

Afterwork

HE's going home

Kanya is already at home

S comes there

Puts her down again

She is sad!

Kanya tells him to leave!

But he wont!!

Kanya pushes him to go!!

That makes him angry!!!

He grabs her shoulder

She is scared!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir comes and sees……

He is shocked

He comes to him!!

And makes him let go

S is looking at Ranbir!!!

S comes to know that they live together!!

That pisses him off!!!!

S orders Kanya that she cant stay w/ him!!

Kanya: Who are you to tell me that?????

S grabs her hand

Ranbir makes him let go!!

He doesn't!!!

He takes her away!!

Kanya is yelling his name!!!

Ranbir grabs her other hand!!!

He pulls her……..

She lets of S….

And Ranbir pulls her into him!!!!

S is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya hugs him!!!!

S: What will people say when they find out…. That a man and woman are living together but they aren't married???????

RANBIR is shocked!

Kanya closes her eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ranbir is getting mad!!

S laughs at them!!!!

Ranbir un hugs her

And he comes to him

He's about to punch him

S: Try it!!!!!! Then u can see what I can do!!!

He stops!!!!

S leaves!!

Kanya runs in

Ranbir sees

He follows her

She cries on the sofa

Ranbir comes there!!!

Ranbir knows what she is crying about!!!!

He puts his hand on her shoulders…

Kanya wipes her tears…

And looks at him!!!

Ranbir is looking at her!!!

Ranbir: Why are you crying?…Forget what he said!!!!!!!! He thinks he knows it all!!!!!

Kanya: But its true wat he said!!!

Ranbir: He is just..

Kanya; Its true!!! You know it is! You wont admit it! But its true!!

This S just had to ruin the mood!!!

All of a sudden

People are outside!!!!

S tells some of the people whats going on!!

RANBIR is like what the hell!!!

People are like we cant have people like you staying here and what not

Ranbir is like what???

S created all of this

He just had to open his big mouth!!!!

Kanya comes out!!!

They make a big deal that they stay together

But they aren't married! And etc…..

RANBIR gets mad

Tells them to mind their own business

It gets all crazy!!

Kanya is shocked!!

She's a little scared!!!!!!!!!!

Then Ranbir yells at them!!!!!!!

Ranbir: Arre…. She's my wife!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His eyes pop out!!!

Ranbir: U want to know to who she is!! She's my wife!!!!!!!!!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone looks at her!!!!!!

Kanya looks at Ranbir!!!!!!

Kanya is like omg!!!

She is in shock!!!!!!!!

Some lady is like...

If you two are married thna where is her Mangalstura and her sindoor??

Ranbir is like oh no!!!

Stupid lady go away!!!!

Then everyone supports her

S is watching all of this

He's like poor poor poor Ranbir!!!!

Cant answer all these questions!!!!!

Kanya is like oh my god!!

Ranbir is stuck

Now what do we do!!!!

Kanya runs back inside!!!!!!

Ranbir is like great!

Now i am fighting this alone!!!!

Kanya comes back

Has sindoor in her hand

Shows it to Ranbir!

Ranbir's eyes pop out like they have never popped out before!!!!

Everyone is looking

S is shocked!!!!!!!!

He's like what is going on here!!!

This is not what he wanted!!!!!

Ranbir turns his face!!!

He looks

Kanya still has it!!

When Ranbir has his face turned...

He sees S!!!!!

S isnt doing a very good job @ hiding!!!!

Ranbir sees him

Ranbir looks at Kanya!!!!!

Ranbir takes the sindoor

Kanya is shocked!!!!!

Its what she wanted though

Ranbir takes it

Everyone is looking at them

And what does Ranbir do???

Yes he applies it on her!!!!!!!!!

Kanya closes her eyes!!!

S cant believe what he just saw!!!

Everyone is like omg!!!!!

And they leave!!!!!!!

S is standing there!!

Kanya looks at Ranbir

Ranbir is looking at her!!!!!

Kanya goes back inside!!!!

S is still there!!!

Ranbir goes to him

Ranbir; You did all of this!!!..... i just finished it!!!!!!!!

S leaves!!!!!

Ranbir watches him go!!!!!!

plz comment!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
oo guli wow wat a trak i love it and the excitement ! continue sooon!

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