Ashni Short Story: Too long one week

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Oh Aditi... . 😳

She saw what she never thought of... she felt what was not in her reach... n she is hurt n no one knows why...

Lovely scene to be watched by one n all at the hospital bed... 😛n happiness spread to every face to see all three docs on good shape... Ashu called Jijaji n all answers came to Aditi solved in a second..

Did not like her getting hurt... n a statue there as if she is the only one clueless of their relationship... !!

Liked n loved Ashu caring Nidhi's every need n meds n each n every work almost spoiling Nidhi n asking for a good cover in return from her, leaving a blushing Nidhi there...

All witnessed by poor Aditi, whose drooling over the hardstone was not only a mistake but it was not in her hands...

The handsome hunk has taken away many hearts away once he fell for Nidhi... 😉

Nice to know how it came to Aditi... but wanna know her reactions towards Nidhi n specially towards The Ashutosh,,,

Thanks n God bless.,,,, !!!

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Sorry for my typing mistake. it is only Aditi. One drooling over is enough at one time.
Sory for the confusion

😆

Hi Rims 🤗

It's okay dear, happens !

I have come to say sorry for not being able to give reviews for past two updates at both the threads. Not feeling well even now. But reviews are coming in a while. Hope i would be able to catch all the points. 😃

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

The last two chapters are full of mixed feelings ! Loved them 👏👏

Nidhi gets a successful operation and all credit goes to the determination and love of Ashu ⭐️⭐️

Loved to see how every one was so happy and Aditi was surprised to see why so fuss over an intern's operation getting success !

Liked how Ashu cared for Nidhi and gave her company all over night with all her needs available by him only. No one else is able to do anything for the Dean's wife but Dean himself. Loved this care !!!!

Aditi's shock was predictable. All knew how she will react. A statue of no blood and no senses left !

Felt for her, but truth is ASHNI and their marriage and love !

The way Ashu took his wife's care and did not leave her side and all that has been seen by Aditi : i feel she is the most hurt here in the never told story of Ashni to the new interns.

Whatever it will be, the hurt feelings have to be soothed. Would like to see how.

Thanks dear and loves ❤️

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Hello Babita.

Its OK dear.

How are you doing now.? What happened with your health?

Get well soon.

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

How beautiful " it was too long one week " ❤️

Awesome ending dear 👏 Felt bad for Aditi, but good that she got the lesson of moving on as the best solution from this temptation!

Lovely way to welcome Nidhi back home and sweet gesture of Nidhi refusing to live even a day without her Ashutosh!

Ashu took in his arms all way to their room and spelling out that line is too romantic ❤️

Loved it and enjoyed the week of two stories - Aditi getting hurt and gone forever! And, AshNi coming more closer and the world saw a totally new and devoted hubby in Ashutosh!

Thanks dear for this purely an awesome story you have given us in between, it will always remain in our hearts ⭐️

Luv ya ❤️🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Felt very bad over Aditi's tears, but good that she understood the right thing at the right time ,,,, !!!

Liked the ending... ⭐️👏

Loved how Ashu in all took every care of his wife... n she too never left him for even a day... 😳

I liked the whole story moving around a couple n the accident n how an intern unknowingly loving the man coming to the disclosure of him being the hubby to her friend... ! Liked how things were bitter for Aditi but she never showed it n moved on... the only possible option for her.. !!!

Nice ending ,,, thanks n God bless... !!!!

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
This short story as i promised is finished. How is the ending guys?
I have two plots in mind for next but confused which should i start.

First.
Only son of a doting family got married forcefully while he was still a student and father a child accidentally but unable to love his wife so got divorced against his wife's will, his fetally ill daughter is his and whole family's life who is slipping to death in front of her doctor family,people think he cant love anybody except his crazy family, best friend and work. what will happen when this father-daughter duo will meet with a young girl who was kicked out of her house at a rainy night by her uncle after her father's death??

Second
I felt Nidhi suffered more than Dr. Ashutosh in show and he never needed to repent much. but what will happen if he has to do that. if Nidhi forgot everything. him, their love and marriage and remember him as her tough and strict boss only? what if Dr. Ashutish hads to win Nidhi's heart again? what if he has to get in a tough competition to get his Nidhi back?

Help me to chose one.

I liked both the concepts... !

But its like... putting a finger with eyes closed on one of them... 😆

Its your wish dear... cos if you ask me... i wud want both the stories... so whatever you are comfortable with... shoot... !

Your wish will be welcomed dear... 😃

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

The second option is what we all wanted to happen in the story with Ashu having a tough time winning Nidhi back.

And first one is totally a new version of a new story in making.

I also wud like to get both the stories. So whatever you give us first, we are here to take wit with pleasure.

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anjani

@snehatanu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Thank you so much , the ending was fabulous. waiting for another beautiful story.

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Hello Babita.
Its OK dear.
How are you doing now.? What happened with your health?
Get well soon.

Hi dear 🤗

Had fever and resulting reactions ! I am fine now and will join your both thread from tomorrow. Still have to read many chapters. Last one here and few there.

Pls gimme one day and i will review at both the threads. Thanks for the concern, loves ❤️

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