Ashni Short Story: Too long one week

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Happy to see you fit and back Babita.

Take your time dear.

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Beautiful ending Rims 👏👏

Though i felt bad for Aditi, but good that she finds a way out from there and getting away from feel crying like everytime she would be forced to see Ashni in their happiness.

Liked the way Ashu took Nidhi's care and took her back home in his protective arms ⭐️⭐️

Ashni and their love is inseparable, and U have perfectly woven the story line to make us glued to it !!! Hats Off !

Lovely story, awesome narration and stunning plot dear 👏👏 Loved it so much and to the core !

Thanks and loves ❤️

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

all the best for your exams dear .I will eagerly wait for the second story .the story line is soo interesting

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Thank you guys.
I think after my exam I will either one or both stories I mentioned .

I have selected names

Love and light of their life
Game of Fate

How it sounds???

It sounds good... !!! ⭐️

and will wait for the story... thanks dear... !!!! All the best for your exam ,, !

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

last update was awesome dear. loved to see ashu and nidhi together happy sorry for the delay in commenting .pls do write more

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: bawaswift

It sounds good... !!! ⭐️

and will wait for the story... thanks dear... !!!! All the best for your exam ,, !

Too good 👏👏

How were your exams ?? And will you start the new story along with the one going on or after completing that one ??