Ashni Short Story: Too long one week

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks dear of to read it

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh very serious situation and Nidhi is the most severely injured.

Mallika going to treat her ?? Now this is fearing. All along Ashu must be back, i just wish that he takes over and start his treatment to Nidhi !

Loved thr noble job making the docs so fearless and not even thinking of their own life -- were saving the lives of the injured in the mishap.

Nice start Rimjhim 👏👏 Would love to know more of the situation so tensed !!!

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anjani

@snehatanu

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Posted: 9 years ago

Both the stories are mindblowing. Thank you so much.

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome narration to yet another story Rims... ⭐️👏

Thank you very very much for these applauding efforts by you... ! 😊

Nice story... outstanding plot... n Nidhi is the worst injured among the three docs ,,,when they were saving the many patients ...!

Ashu has also saved many patients with his grand skills but he has to deal with a most difficult case now... Nidhi in a dangerous condition... n he will be going to know this...

A much shattering news may be for him... n i wud like to see how he will compose himself n take care of the three junior docs.. !

Mallu to take care of them in his absence... God forbid... Save them all.. !

Liked the plot... new n fresh... thanks for this one as well... !

God bless you Rims,,, ,😃

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Are you posting your stories from your phone?

I mean there are many spelling mistakes 😛

Sorry haan don't mind just asking...

And you are giving Nidhi in Mallu hand? 😆

Interesting...Will wait for the next part 😊

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am confused with this

"The story started during the period when Ashutosh and Nidhi just resolved their fight regarding Mallika issue but after nearly 1 year of marriage. Both of them understood their fault and Nidhi came back to Mathur Nivas just few days ago after long 1 month."

I mean 1 year or 1 month? Exactly what is the time frame? 😕

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 9 years ago

I just change the timing of incident. imagine Mallika's pregnancy problem happen not after few months but nearly 1 year after. Nidhi came back Mathur House after 1 month separation as they fought and she stayed at her father's house for 1 month.

Don't worry guys Dr. Mallika will not treat Nidhi. Her husband will have to do that.

Sorry for Spelling mistake.

Edited by rimjhim_rims - 9 years ago

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
I just change the timing of incident. imagine Mallika's pregnancy problem happen not after few months but nearly 1 year after. Nidhi came back Mathur House after 1 month separation as they fought and she stayed at her father's house for 1 month.
Don't worry guys Dr. Mallika will not treat Nidhi. Her husband will have to do that.
Sorry for Spelling mistake.

Oh! thats cool 😊

Chalo good will wait for the next part..

And yaar suspense khatam kar diya itna jaldi ki Mallika will not treat her 😛😆 You are so sweet for telling it before hand 😆... Chalo jaldi write the next part... 😊

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 9 years ago

A good start to the new story dear 👏

The time you have chosen is quite considerable, as we all know how AshNi relation had been through before.

Lovely atmosphere changed into dull with a complex collapse. Now the three docs including Nidhi are serious and Nidhi the most. I cud sense what Ashu will feel once he see her in that condition. For him, all his staff and patients are same, but watching his wife in that condition can be a jolt!

I wish she comes out safer, who is fighting between life and death while saving many a patients.

Mallika is there, which is every reader's fear 😳 That's why i just wish that Ashu reach the KGH in time and save Nidhi cos no one can tell what Mallika can be up to.

Nice one, loved it and will wait for the next one. Luv ya ❤️🤗

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Yes I told it because Mallika is insignificant here. She don't have any importance in this story.

With the thought I start this story was what if famous neurosurgeon Dr. Ashutosh, who saved lots of patients' life has to face a critical situation where his darling wife has a negligible chance to survive. what he will do? which option he will chose if given with only two option

either let her die slowly but keep her alive for longer time?

or take the risk where she may die immediately but a very rare chance of recovery also?

it is about his emotional state and dealing things

emotional journey of a new intern also who fell for him unknowingly that he is married but come to know and witness his unconditional love and yearning for his wife's safety.

Edited by rimjhim_rims - 9 years ago

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