Ashni Short Story: Too long one week

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

This emotional flow is very difficult to express... will wait for your version dear... 😊

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

such a emotional update dear .really made me cry .thanks for such a awesome update

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very emotional chapter dear 👏

When every one lost the hope to save Nidhi, Ashu with full hope is there to tell her that she is not to leave but to help him in saving her. Loved his words in this hard situation, and when everyone was avoiding him he sensed something but never thought it's for his life and death.

Aditi, who still is unknown of their relationship, makes him realize how a junior doc can be given noble award after her death. I just felt his anger and him throwing her out of the cabin.
Very piteous and sensitive times for Ashu. Wud be waiting for other chapter when he will show his faith and determination to save his wife!

Luv ya dear, for this emotional flow ❤️🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

"Sorry to inform you Dr. Nidhi that you didn't get full information, still one fellow neurosurgeon hasn't left hope and fighting for your life. Please cooperate. I am going to win this battle, I have to."

O Ashu... 🤗

Can feel what he is feeling... can see what he is going thru... n can imagine what he yet has to go thru... !!!

Equally shocked with how every one was ignoring him... Much shock to the way Aditi was handling him... n got emotional over his tears down his knee...

Fine update... More yet to see how he will deal with his wife's reports n health n how much he will have to prepare himself to operate her...

Tensed times... but nothing is impossible when with full determination Ashu is there for Nidhi n willing to save her... !!!

Thanks n God bless... !!!

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Oh, too emotional part

Nidhi is at the forced last stage and Ashu is all set to take her back. Very pathetic situation for both. Much for Ashu bcos he is suffering every detail of reports and his wish to save her. His unwavering decision is so welcome but he has to be mentally prepared for anything can happen.

Mallika lost the hope, so does all the docs. How technical.

I wish to see Ashu preparing himself and with Baba's help saves Nidhi and take her back from the doors of death.

Thanks dear, loves ❤️

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Beautiful picturization of how a hubby doc can't afford mistakes and has to give in his best. 👏👏

Ashu, the best Neuro is The best for his every patient, but today he has taken back his wife from death. All credits to him and prays for Nidhi.

I myself felt Ashu's fears and worries and Nidhi understanding him so well in that situation. Lovely and cute convo.

Just can't stand Aditi more 😉 She must get the reality soon !

You awesomely writes Rimjhim, thanks and loves ❤️

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Where Nidhi is coming to the final decision of her life, Ashu is firm to not let her go away!

Lively concern and lovely way of expressing Ashu's dilemma and plea to the other docs. His revealing his relation to them was difficult for him as he is going through a fight within himself.

Beautiful couple coming closer and Aditi is still unknown to the real fact. I too want her to know them as couple so that not much confusions are left for her to accept him why he is behaving so deeply in this matter specially!

Luv ya dear for this crucial efforts, it has come out really so nice👏

❤️🤗

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome flow of emotions ... loved it Rims... ⭐️👏

I can't bear that my love, my life is leaving me slowly and am standing helpless. I will fight for her life.

His own energy is telling him how much efforts he has to put in... rightly expressed... 👏

"Nidhi this is an operation where I can't afford a single mistake. I have to be successful I don't care how complicated it is. I will bring you back to my arms" She knows no doctor will take risk to operate her in this condition and tomorrow not Dr. Ashutosh Mathur, the famous neurosurgeon but her husband is going to do best operation of his life.

Does she need anything or any one else now... ??/ She has the super hero of her life with her... nothing to worry.. as she is safe in his arms n hands... !!!

She was shifted to ICU and kept under observation for 48 hours. Ashutosh never left her hospital room for a minute during this period.

I bow to Ashu n his determination... he managed to convince all the other panel of docs n did what he cud... Brilliant doc n a caring hubby... Life is back to normal... but he wont be able to forget these messy days ever... !

God bless you dear for such great effort of emotional flow... !!!