Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan (2); Chapter 11, Page 88 - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

47.3k

Users

31

Likes

1.8k

Frequent Posters

aardhan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Congratulations

After updating the other thread, I am off to sleep now 😳 Good night! 😃
mudraswathi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
First of all Aarti,

I had my gym booking, but still left it to hawa and sat and finished this. I dont remember doing this even for my exams when I was studying!😆😆😆

I liked.. no loved the first part so much.. so much palpable... and parting with Sam is a peak!!! Oh God! Oh my God! what a tragedy! and it really got me numb for a while!

and then, the Anji's engagement!... why I guessed it is Armaan... though you were denying Anjani all the time!!!

I thnk there was an unnecessary and unwanted cmparison between Anji and Nidhi... If you said, Anji is a beautiful girl, 5'2" height, etc,etc... that was ok... but you said she is shorter than Nidhi... it got me thinking.. otherwise there is no connection to compare these two girls .

finally, frankly aarti,

I wish and hope Ashutosh would choose Nidhi and make his own efforts to reach her, (*) rather than agreeing to his mom's choice (even though it turned out to be Nidhi!)... Waiting for this kind of a thing to happen in your next updates..

(*) :I wanted to put this icon ..
Edited by mudraswathi - 11 years ago
swati62 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Oh how I wish u had continued a bit longer. Can't wait for the next chapter really excited to see what Ashutosh says when he hears the name is Nidhi. Thanks for the update and waiting for next weekend.
Anjani9 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
I want to be in first 5 ranks...😃
ssss97 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME CHAPTER. Will give a review later... I will miss SAM. He's my favorite.
Veni-Vidi-Vici thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
loved the ending..Ashu agreed to the marriage alliance...what if they tell about the alliance without telling about the groom..and she says no to the alliance...or will she feel bad that Ashu said yes to marry any random girl..without confirming it was her... a week never seemed longer..waiting for next sunday
vidyasabde thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
excellent chapter Aarti. Ashu's pain came out superbly...it was very touching...you built it up in a very excellent manner,his pent up feelings for Nidhi and loss of Sam made him realise his need for a partener.
it was a great chapter...you penned it very nicely.


Why did he have to agree for alliance with unknown girl when he loved Nidhi...he could have got in touch and done the things properly...was it once bitten twice shy ?
he is bound to get a surprise...waiting for that moment dear.


Anji and Arman getting engaged...that is nice..

👏 ,waiting for the next chap.
aardhan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
Good night sleep well..[/QUOTE
Yesterday's wishes and I am thanking today! 😆
Good morning to you 😛
aardhan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Congratulations

Tupu! 😃 How are you?
How many days to go before you complete your course?
Edited by aardhan - 11 years ago
aardhan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

First of all Aarti,

I had my gym booking, but still left it to hawa and sat and finished this. I dont remember doing this even for my exams when I was studying!😆😆😆

OMG! This is priceless. Shall I take it as a compliment then? 😳 But hope you don't miss your gym in the future. 😆😆

I liked.. no loved the first part so much.. so much palpable... and parting with Sam is a peak!!! Oh God! Oh my God! what a tragedy! and it really got me numb for a while!,
Thank you. After I wrote that for two days I could not write anything else. I had to prepare since the start of the FF for this scene... it was tough, but am glad it read the way it was meant to.

and then, the Anji's engagement!... why I guessed it is Armaan... though you were denying Anjani all the time!!!
No... no... not denying. Just a tactical silence! 😆 Had to keep quiet about it or the story would not have worked... you know one side there is Sam and another side there is an engagement. And I had to be very careful from the start not to mention Nidhi's hometown anywhere, until now. But yes, some of you definitely had your doubts. 😆

I thnk there was an unnecessary and unwanted cmparison between Anji and Nidhi... If you said, Anji is a beautiful girl, 5'2" height, etc,etc... that was ok... but you said she is shorter than Nidhi... it got me thinking.. otherwise there is no connection to compare these two girls .
Oh, it was just stating the obvious. Did not mean it any other way.

finally, frankly aarti,

I wish and hope Ashutosh would choose Nidhi and make his own efforts to reach her, (*) rather than agreeing to his mom's choice (even though it turned out to be Nidhi!)...
Well, that would be too easy, right? Then why did he not do anything about it for the last one month? Nidhi has been gone for about a month already. At this point he thinks she will not come back, he knows she has no obligations in Chennai, he also knows the only thing that could change her mind is if he confessed. And he is not ready to take that step.

Now he feels the need for a wife, but feels an arranged marriage is a safer option... remember the promise he makes in the prologue. He simply reasserts that here. And he has in principle agreed to an arranged marriage, that does not mean he will blindly marry any girl. He will definitely have his say, only he does not want to fall in love before marriage. But of course when he knows its Nidhi, do you think he can resist knowing he silently loved her? So it's not really a 'safe' option that he was looking for! 😳

Waiting for this kind of a thing to happen in your next updates..

(*) :I wanted to put this icon ..
Well, they will definitely confess, they have to, but it will happen gradually. 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".