Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan (2); Chapter 11, Page 88 - Page 17

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

As usual sorry for the late reply Madam ji

No Ariya. I understand we are all busy. I am glad you could find time to write 😃 Thank you very much! 🤗

So finally Ashu realizing more and more about his love towards nidhi . I like the way you portrayed it into words.

"What should I do now? I miss her already!"He felt as if a heavy weight had settled in his chest - The pain Ashu feels when nidhi is not there with him . ------- as he slowly turned around and walked back to the parking lot dragging his feet along the foot path

Yes., her declaration was unexpected. he thought she will be back and he can then continue where he has stopped and eventually confess. But now he realizes that she may not come back here. So he is at a loss.

Pain of a True lover convert in to words. What a writing style ---------👏👏👏

He was tired of running from his feelings and his love for Nidhi. "I want Nidhi to come back just once! I want to see that beautiful smile light up those angelic eyes one more time. I want to hold her close again and not let her go till she promises to come back here! Please God, at least help me now!"

Yes, by hook or crook he wants her back, he wants her company once more. But you see no where does he think of a confession. For that he is not ready yet

No Ashu Ashu no you can't say like this to my Sweet heart Sam

"Great! Now even Sam seems unhappy with me! Is there no one I can please?" ( I really misses Ashu - sam - Nidhi Scenes ji )

Very cute doggy emoticon Ariya. Its nice to see everyone finding all these different emoticons. 😃 ❤️

Nidhi too missing Ashutosh a lot . What a pain suffering by both the sides. It's really nice how you portrayed both Ashu and Nidhi's love to each other. I just love to see it on screen. (the pain of Ashni)

Added to it hugging her father had made her suddenly realize that Ashutosh had hugged her that day on the beach and how secure and loved she had felt in that embrace. She missed him all over again. "How are you Ashutosh? Will you miss me too? Hope you will not forget me!"

Yes, she does recall her times with him. She still loves him. And everytime something happens it reminds her of an incident with Ashutosh. 😒

Nidhi's feeling towards Ashu. Oh god she gets heart shock when she sees Ashu's name in the mobile screen.

Seeing his name light up on the screen brightened her day too! She closed her eyes and touched the screen all the while assuming that she was touching him in person.

Yes, but then that's all they have. There is nothign else to talk or they cannot think of anything more to say now.

Will Armaan & Nidhi's mother could find the change in Nidhi's mind. Will it happen so soon. So many question coming there to my mind madam ji.

But Nidhi's pre-occupation with her thoughts did not go un-noticed and a couple of times her mother and even Armaan quizzed her about it but all they got was a neutral smile and a nod in the negative.

Wait for chapter 9... lots to happen in it

Oh will this too be like the chief minister's case in KTLK madam ji😉😆

Bringing credits to both Ashu & Nidhi 😳😳

Oh no! Ashutosh is not able to go as planned . He has to cure those kids. But at this time Nidhi has been gone for a month already 😳

Lovely chapter .. Aarti ..Love it so much Dear ..

Thank you very much Ariya. It was a pleasure to read your comments 😃🤗

So many questions .. Cannot wait until next update

Well, hope from chapter 9 you will start getting answers 😛

When Ashu saying this to Nidhi Aarti

So sweet! Let's see, shall we. First they will have to meet again... and I am working towards that now 😳

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

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Originally posted by: Suvika.

Review of Chapter 8:

"I want Nidhi to come back just once! I want to see that beautiful smile light up those angelic eyes one more time. I want to hold her close again and not let her go till she promises to come back here! Please God, at least help me now!"

and he is crying now!! Debating on him and along with him.

Oh no, please Sujatha, don't be sad... not so soon He is sad but yet do you realize he does not think of confessing. He just thinks that he wants her back.

Lovely song...suits the mood and the scene perfectly. and Sam is angry too One of these days he is sure going to Ashu for letting Nidhi go. 😆

Thank you. I am actually very glad that I thought of this song, glad you feel the same😃... on one of those boring drives in traffic to and from work! Yes, even Sam has an attitude! 😆

Baba hugged her! Baba fed her! In all of her almost 27 years Nidhi could never recall a time when her Baba had ever done this! She felt too raw, too strung up then.

So Nidhi has a past connected to her father..Hmmm..thought so. Now which is going to come out first? Ashu's hangups or Nidhi's??

You will find out in chapter 10... but take a guess! 😉

My stories usually have one of the two having an issue. Lekin yaha toh both of them have something. He was partial towards Armaan?? Why?? Don't tell me it was a girl child issue. I won't believe it.

No, not girl child. And yes, both have some issue, makes it more interesting, isn't it? No one is perfect, but the feeling of love is common to all. 😃

He is loving towards her now na. So somewhere along the way he has changed his mind. That much is obvious. He is also proud of her painting and the fact that she takes after him. Well..whatever he did before, right now he is desperately trying to make amends.

Chalo thank God!! Nandini is conscious and fine.

Yes, true that. Things are on the mend and will become good when they address that past... But even without that they have managed to come closer in these years and more now, both drawn by the love they have for Nandini.

Ashutosh: "You want to play fetch? Why? Oh... Sam, you want to go in the car and play fetch... Uh.., With Nidhi?"

Sam: As he heard that name he got up happily, "Woof, woof, woof!"

Aha..I told you so!! Sam will defo Ashu... 😆

Yes! But Ashutosh is no push-over! 😆 He is determined not to go back to that beach.

I can greet her for Diwali and then ask to meet her! I wish I had her phone number? Wonder why it never occurred to me to ask for it!"

Dr Dumbo!! Thats all I can say!! Took her on a date, shopping..dropped her at the airport...but didn't take her number!!

They both are in that sense. But then they always me face to face or emailed each other. So this oversight never struck them. And now, they wonder if asking a phone number would make them appear over-eager or send out wrong signal in Ashutosh's case.

And his trip is cancelled now!!

Yes, man proposes, God disposes! But it may be for the best, you never know. 🤔

Well, since they are Ashutosh and Nidhi, they are bound to meet again..sometime.. somewhere..waiting to see how you bring that about.

Exactly... and this mission starts in chapter 9 😃

You have brought out Ashu's conflict and sadness very well. Loved it. It was poignant and touching.

Thank you... I did enjoy writing that, more so because he was the lonely one while Nidhi was with her family.

More than Nidhi's...I like AShu's angle in this chapter.

Hmm, Nidhi's angle gets divergent here... her mother, father and then AShutosh. And as far as she knows he does not love her, so she does not want to hope too much. She thinks there is no future there.

There is also the fact that she knows she is still undecided but Ashutosh does not. From her last statement he has assumed she is gone forever. He know he loves her and so thinks he has lost her completely. While hope still exists for one its completely lost for the other...and so Ashutosh part is more touching.

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991

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Originally posted by: Anjani9

Hello Aarti...😊

Originally posted by: suku_07

Hehe you'll get them soon 😆

Originally posted by: suku_07

Hehe you are intelligent...aren't u...guess karo 😆

Originally posted by: suku_07

Madam ji...not 7... 8 also 😆 but only two naa... let 9th one come 😉😆

Originally posted by: suku_07