Ashni FF: Mann ki Lagan (2); Chapter 11, Page 88

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Friends, thank you all for your love, support and encouragement towards me and my attempts at writing this FF. This second thread would not be possible otherwise... THANKS! 😃 👏 🤗

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In the month of December a Christmas thread was opened where each member could make another member his/ her Santa and wish forsomething from them. As it turned out I became the Santa for Deepali(deepa17). She wanted me to write a brand-new Ashni FF. So, finallyafter almost two months, I have taken up this quest! Deepali, this is for you... On the occasion of your Birthday!

Dear Forum members, this is my first attempt at writing somethingcompletely alien to me. The characters and back drop of a hospital areinspired from the show KTLK but any and all resemblance ends there. As for the setting, this FF is for the most part set in Chennai with parts of the story going back to Lucknow and Kanpur.

Thanks a lot Sujatha (Suvika) for all your encouragement and your valuable advice. Thank you for being my friend cum editor! ❤️ 🤗

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MANN KI LAGAN




List of Main Characters:

Dr. Ashutosh Mathur: Pediatrician and Pediatric surgeon

Dr. Alok Mathur: Father of Ashutosh and an ENT specialist

Sarla Mathur: Mother of Ashutosh, Vocalist and housewife

Anjali (Anji) Mathur: Sister of Ashutosh, MBA

Dr. Nidhi Verma: Gynecologist

Col. Yograj Verma (Retd.): Father of Nidhi, Civil Engineer

Nandini Verma: Mother of Nidhi, retired school teacher

Armaan Verma: Brother of Nidhi, Architect

Dr. Ranganath Kumar: Chief Pathologist and Chief Administrator

Dr. Priya Shastri (nee Mathur): Ex-wife of Ashutosh Mathur


List of Songs:

1. Mera mann bhi kitna paagal hai ---- Saajan

2. Sawar loon ---- Lootera

3. Tanhaayee ---- Dil Chaahta Hai

4. Soona mann ka aangan ---- Parineeta

https://www.saavn.com/search/hindi/soona_man_ka_aangan
5. Aaye ho meri zindagi mein ---- Raja Hindustani

6. Tum Hi Ho ---- Aashiqui 2

7. Lagan lagi tumse mann ki lagan ---- Paap

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Index of Chapters:

Chapters in Thread 1 - Please follow this link -

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

Chapters in Thread 2






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Congratulations and thank you for this gift that continues past my birthday
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GN and SD tired I am off now
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Originally posted by: deepa17

Congratulations and thank you for this gift that continues past my birthday

Thank you very much. This is for you...


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Originally posted by: deepa17

GN and SD tired I am off now

GN and SD to you too.
I will be off in a bit as well 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Good hold of the emotions in the story ! Loved how you have taken us to the ride of aerial view of the Chennai ! The brief but a loving flight with surprising the child like Nidhi 😃

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the surprise as much as Nidhi! Its just a different perspective to what a date can be... Actually its inspired from someone I know who has a pilot licence. 😃

Love makes us smile even for the little that we do for others.. ! Most liked the feelings of blush coming on the faces of Ashu n Nidhi in the A/c cabin yet giving hot cheeks 😉
Yes, for a few minutes she was overwhelmed. At that moment she almost felt his love for her.

Both wants to tell n confess their feelings.. both are mostly in love !
Yes, they are but more important is his end. At this point he makes up his mind to confess before she leaves.

Liked the way everything went.. Liked the way Ashu took every minute care of the things.,, making Nidhi's day even more playful. Liked to see the saree shopping n the selection !
Yes, her return gesture. After all he has done so much! 😉 And this was the only thing she had promised. Anyway, she would have gone home and stayed there alone...

All was fine n so loving.. But Nidhi's innocent words so similar to Priya's ... How sum things that just happen in our life that all things take turns and we are at the bottom of the top.
Right, everything turned upside down! Her innocent words, probabl very common words too, but then there are some things one never forget and declaration of love is one of them. So it threw Ashutosh back to that time with Priya!

Love takes tests.. n so is here ! Ashu has gone back with his days with Priya n their parting has taken over him and his feelings has take a turn from Nidhi... Is he really thinking that Nidhi is also like Priya ? or she will be like her later ??
Well, as he remembers he is thinking what if Nidhi could also change just like Priya since she used the same words,... and that fear grips him. So he backs off, cannot take another risk with falling in love. Basically his confidence is lost and he wonders if he is making another mistake.

So our masochist Ashu comes to drop Nidhi to airport ! Loved his gesture.. but cud not resist how they both are " chatting for the sake of chatting "
Yes, it is bound to be awkward, yet they want to see each other as well

I cud sense Nidhi telling Ashu the things related to her absence from KGH.. its all deliberate ..
I cud feel she was actually informing Ashu that there is Nothing left for her to hold on.. n she may not come back or may take months to even think abt returning ! She is not feeling good over his behavior the previous day... n Ashu knows this very well.. !
Well, more than anything she is genuinely thinking if it was worth coming back, causing more stress to her mother and herself or is it better to stay back. Its a very practical consideration. and like she said there was nothing in Chennai other than the work. Since he had not confessed or expressed anything close to love, she essentially was free to just stay with her parents.

The gift of Sam's colorful pic is cute.. But has she given him the only bridge that has made them so close ? I wish Sam once again take them more closer for sure ! 😳
Yes, both are attached to Sam

So.. are we going to see them meeting in Lucknow now ?
In some time...😃

Ashni and their love is related to Lucknow only !!! The love that they cud not express in Chennai.. i hope that wud happen in Lucknow now ! I wish to see them again together... Their love may take time to confess., but they shud meet there.. sooner the better for them n for us ! 😃
Hmmm, though this story happens in Chennai for the most part... but they will meet in Lucknow.

Oh God! What have I done! I have to stop her and tell her about my feelings. I have to give her a reason to come back... I have to!"

he must have stopped her in time... But its too late now !
Yes, she has left already! Very unexpected for him!

Hope to see the Mann ki lagan take Ashu to Lucknow to meet his Love... Nidhi !
Thanks for this chapter Aarti... nice one with a twist of parting to meet once again and forever !!!
😃
Yes, they are separated now... let's see how and when they will meet again! 😳

Bawa, I have quoted this from Thread 1...
Thank you so much for your in depth review. I enjoyed responding to it 😃
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Originally posted by: vidyasabde

wow this Ashu is one versatile man...

Well, he can sing and he can fly... I promise there is nothing else! 😆
And she can draw and paint. Both like to jog!
As far as talent and hobbies go, this is it!

he should have proposed her in air 😛 ...
He made up his mind... maybe it was nervousness that he could not blurt it out! 😉

liked the hutke progress...but Nidhi leaving him and shifting to Lknw...some twist of destiny has to bring them together again and soon !!!
Hmmm, something has to bring them together, otherwise we won't have this story... so keep watching

nice update and very sorry to that i could not read it earlier 😭
That's ok... guess you are busy with kids' exams... lad you could make it though 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonyjknum

AArti I want to apologise for MIA,actually my in laws are here,read all the updates,will try to give my reviews asap,loving the story

Hi Sony, so glad to hear from you. I am very happy that your husband is recovering very well... it must be such a relief to all, especially your in-laws.

Thanks a lot for reading so far. and liking it... I will wait for your updates now 😃
Welcome back! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sss97

Aarthi ji ab naya thread open karne ka time has come. Congratulations, Waiting for the new thread to open...😊

Waiting for Sunday morning to arrive...

Thank you Swathi. Opened new thread now! 😃 How are your exams going?

But you still have not given any comments for Chapter 7?

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