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Originally posted by: Crazy.rock

Dear Shirley

hi Meera😃

Have been following ur story fom day1. Have read all thots n views about the plot. I need to really applaud u for taking up this story. Let aside the plot or the ongoing discussion must say hvnt ever read anything so finely crafted n beautiful. Ur command ovr the language , the use of ryt words at the ryt place makes reading much more pleasureable . Ur skills as a writer are commendable. The magic u weave thru ur vision is worth an applaud.

Yes, frankly I was in two minds whether to put it on forum or not.. it was a unique concept for sure.. n Deepali n I both felt apprehensive abt putting it.. we din't know how many people would actually even understand the concept.. but I m glad I put it here.. this gave me a creative satisfaction like no other ff of mine.. n I thoroughly enjoyed the writing, and really happy to see the meaningful discussions on this thread.

@Bold - oh really? Thank you so much dear.

@Blue - 😳😳 now I m really feeling embarrassed yaar.. what do I say to such compliments... I just take a deep bow.. thank you so so much.

Coming to the plot of the story initially I too was a little skeptical. Considering the fact that v hv Indian values probably I culdn't accept it too. But I must say Deepali's POV completely changed my outlook towards the story. She is indeed ryt that at times owing to our pain we lose the capacity to see the ryt n wrong or even to value the precious belongings we r blessed with. Despite our efforts our patience just slips out of our hands. I really have to thank her for letting me see the pain of ur leads so deeply...it was like Nidhi was standing ryt there in front of me n cud feel every emotion of hers...I cried wd her , felt her anger of rejection , then when her wounds were actually treated by Ashu's words ,I cud see the exploding stormy tempers of the vicious sea turn calm n serene , opening its arms to embrace n accept the twisted fate. Have always been a fan of her reviews that I read on the other threads...not only did I eagerly wait for updates but for her reviews too. But what she writes here is truly superlative.

Yes I guess it was only after Deeps' reviews n explanations that people started understanding the concept the way we were trying to portray.

Speaks volumes about my writing, doesn't it? 😆😆😆

But yes you are absolutely right.. I am lucky to have her with me. her superlative power of explanation, her language, n the way she put forward the philosophy of our concept is definitely worth a standing ovation..

I am glad you could feel every emotion and could relate to the phases of nidhi's internal healing.. that was the biggest challenge for me, actually not me, but us..

It was a sensitive concept and had to be dealt v. sensitively.. I am glad we could get it right for the most part.

Can't refrain myself from praising Dr. Babs too. Her stand on the story was indeed magnificent.

Absolutely agree.. I was amazed to see Dr. Babs' depth of understanding and the beautiful way she wrote her POV here... I had the time of my life, reading the very interesting discussions by Dr. Babs, Mudra and the others.

I think the entire story is about " if luv hurts it has the power to heal too" out an out a story of pure love...Ashu's love for Nidhi ...We go down the wrong road, we get lost, but wat is important is that we turn back. That's exactly wat Ashu did for Nidhi

Bingo!! that WAS the crux of the OS, the basic concept.

As for Nidhi...wat do I say...her characterisation I presume wud have been the most challenging. A girl whose dreams were shattered even before they cud bloom...her life shattered to pieces like glass...she picked up the broken pieces to rebuild the foundation bit by bit ...with just one little chunk missing ...that was ryt there in front of her...but blindfolded by hurt she cud not see. Once her ice cold piercing torment had thawed away she cud put back all fragments together n build a beautiful life.

Oh yes, it was the most challenging character I have every written, it had to bother on mental imbalance at times, it had to be a normal strong woman at other times, n a hurt wounded heart at yet others.. during the outing, I had to kind of slowly peal away her layers n show her healing.. but not all at once..

But pardon my immodesty when I say that what ultimately came out in the form of this Nidhi is precisely what we had envisioned. So, I m really happy with the way the OS and Nidhi's character came out..

Wat a fabulous team work ...Deepali was of course one of my favourite reviewers n to b honest I started reading this story when I read that she was going to b ur soundboard...n I must acknowledge the fact that she has supported one of the finest writers

Originally posted by: bc123456

Shirley that was truly magnificent , loved every bit your story, loved the way Ashu shows her , without saying a word how unsuited they are , and how much she loves and misses Rohan , she had being so caught u in her first infuation , that she took it as true love , not realising that she had moved on long back , but her mind was still thinking of an unrequited love , and the what could have been , how many of us wonder how life would have been with your first crush , and forget to value what we have , a beautiful , beautiful story , very real , and very we'll written , thank u for spending your precious holidays , writing this story ,

Thank u for letting us read it , can really imagine MB in this role , suited him more than the confession , somehow in serial didn't gel , but this suited him brilliantly

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hayeee...this is a very different concept...a brave and nice try, but a bit hard to digest fort sure😉😆

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Awww! thank you. ...🤗

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Deepali ji, Leena ji, Aazuu, Shirley ji, Poonam, Diksha, Suku, Bro, Teacher ji, Tupu di, Aarti ji, and everyone jinhone mujhe jhela... 🤣 Thankooo. 🤗