If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 102

Originally posted by: suku_07

Here your detailed review mam...

Well I must say what a chapter it was... Take a bow 😳...AWESOME... 😆

Mrs Chapman was really needed in this story...thanks a ton Mudra ji for bringing her...But Shirley you brought out the character of Mrs Chapman very well... You touched the sensitive issue well...👏 👏 👏

Mrs. Chapman: (In a deep serious voice) Look, you all have been passing around the poor child as if it were a lifeless parcel, a property of yours.

Mrs. Chapman: I purposely gave you dried up clay. Because that's exactly what you are going to get, if and when you get the legal custody of Aryan...

Take a bow again just for these line...

The clay thing was awesome...The way Nidhi made a Rabbit, Rohan horse and Anji elephant...and the use of clay actually depicted the Aryan's state of mind really well 👏👏

Nidhi really trying hard to be strong, Ashutosh trying to give his 100% to his family and his profession...A good father but a doctor also... Rohan, a business man with no emotions for others... And Anji...does she exist...

I just loved this chapter and of course as I said earlier now I know the difference between writer and immmature writer...

Awesome shirley !!

So who's the next writer ??

Originally posted by: sshirley

Suja and Suku.. will reply to your reviews in a day or so.. sorry for this delay..

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

SUKU😳

Originally posted by: suku_07

Here your detailed review mam...

Thank you

Well I must say what a chapter it was... Take a bow 😳...AWESOME... 😆

Mrs Chapman was really needed in this story...thanks a ton Mudra ji for bringing her...But Shirley you brought out the character of Mrs Chapman very well... You touched the sensitive issue well...👏 👏 👏

Yes, actually while writing the review for Mudra, the idea struck me and I knew that I just HAD TO write this. So, the credit goes to Mudra who introduced the character which inspired me to write. I am glad I could do justice to the character, and handle the sensitive issue well.

Mrs. Chapman: (In a deep serious voice) Look, you all have been passing around the poor child as if it were a lifeless parcel, a property of yours.

Mrs. Chapman: I purposely gave you dried up clay. Because that's exactly what you are going to get, if and when you get the legal custody of Aryan...

Take a bow again just for these line...

Thank you. I take a deep bow!

The clay thing was awesome...The way Nidhi made a Rabbit, Rohan horse and Anji elephant...and the use of clay actually depicted the Aryan's state of mind really well 👏👏

Thank you so much.. I wondered if it was too philosophical. but m glad no one felt that.

Nidhi really trying hard to be strong, Ashutosh trying to give his 100% to his family and his profession...A good father but a doctor also... Rohan, a business man with no emotions for others... And Anji...does she exist...

yes u have analysed all characters perfectly

I just loved this chapter and of course as I said earlier now I know the difference between writer and immmature writer...

Thanks a lot Suku,

@Bold - oh come on, now you are embarrassing me.. you were not bad yourself Suku..

Awesome shirley !!

Thank u madamji😃

So who's the next writer ??

Originally posted by: aardhan

Hai Ram! When will I catch up in this thread? I have to start again from Chapter 9...

But, in the meantime... Pansy and all my writer friends of the FF - Suku, Poonam, Bawa, Aazeen, Mudra, Shirley, Alka (have I left anyone?🤔)...

Wish you all a very happy and prosperous new year!

Originally posted by: sshirley

Whos next? hmmm... what about a certain someone called Sukirti? kyun Suku?

Originally posted by: pansy123

Who's writing next?