If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 101

Originally posted by: sshirley

Very well said Mudra..

Bhavit, I realize, I encroached/trespassed on your creative territory... but it was unintentional and I sincerely apologize.. really sorry.

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hello ,

In my view, everyone has their own right to think something should happen this way or that way..
Simple reason.. agar har koi ek hi jaisa sochte ho toh.. koi ladai jhagda nahi hota.. koi court / wourt nahi hota...

So everything is right.

Bawa, what you have thought is right..about Rohan / Ashu / etc in your own way.. similarly, what Aazeen /Aarti / Shirley / Me have thought is our own stories... or our own ways... and donot take it personally... this is only a story and everything is about fictional characters.

and I am proud that because of that twist, the story has taken this mode.. a critically acclaimed one. Romance may appeal everyone.. but twists like this are not easy to write...and get applaud for it.

and this story is not written by a single person. Still it has taken such a good shape... how well the next writer takes up is a real challenge... and in my view, till now everyone succeeded in this. Pansy mam should give all of us very high marks.

So no hard feelings and no worries...
We all have started inkling our ideas into two words in this forum... we may not be world class writers... but definitely, all have come a long way from what we were at the beginning...

We all should be thankful to the forum.And Bawa... you are the integral part of this kTLK theme park / circus... you cannot say this... want to see your positive response by tomorrow .

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Thanks Mudra di for your kind words.. 😊

Positive is my response Di... but i am shocked how the writers who updated the idea, have come up shooting me at once...

I may be giving negative response.. but as per my knowledge, i have given only an emotional trauma of the Ashni n Ronji...

I totally agree with you that we are only inking our ideas to the fictional characters.. And if i am taking it personally... then plzz you read the critic once again... where i have been pointed out to take things as the worst... I was only giving a n idea that how different cud be opinions..

I never ever let Aryan or Wendy go loose to others... It was done later..

I am an integral part of this Loveliest forum... thats why i am giving my point here.. otheswise i wud have not..

I feel responsible for where i am mistaking... but i am sad over being taken mistook...

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Plzz dont say sorry Aarti.. I know i have not done any justice to the update.. n i knew these questions wud raise.. but i am happy that you have come up with them.. No one even thought abt them at that time..

@blue... I am surprised to read this 😲 To me that was the first thing that came to my mind. I could not understand why AShni were thinking in terms of giving up a child. They must know that since Nidhi is the mother she will always have the upper hand in any custody battle, even if Rohan has re-married. The fact that he has so far ignored his son is a big disadvantage...hence my line of questioning here.

This does not mean that you did any mistakes here. As I said earlier, your update has added a very nice emotional touch to the whole scenario, created tensions between characters and that is important. So other than that one aspect, everything else was good to read. So please, do not apologize. And as a writer you have a perspective and in this case it was the emotional aspect that took top priority, so you have concentrated on that. And it is definitely not your fault taht no one raised the issues I did here...😊

I wanted to take the emotional level as a whole.. Nidhi cud not see her sister suffering as in one of the chapter it was her wish to adopt Aryan.

I agree, that's what I read in the last one... and Nidhi could not blame Anji after knowing her helplessness but at the same time she had walked out of there refusing point blank to hand over ARyan...

Rohan did not ask for Wendy, but only suggested Ashu if he can get away from a child he only loves.. He actually wanted to let Ashu realise how he must be feeling without his son, Aryan.

Hmmm, that is a good point to raise. Maybe another line of two, maybe a thought from Ashu about how he would miss Wendy if she was taken away could have helped here.

But again, Ashu can question Rohan's reasoning, as he is actively seeking to get back into his son;s life knowing very well that he will never have another biological child, this son whom he had ignored till now was his only blood connect. Ashu, I think, should have been more forceful with this arguments with Rohan and blamed him for being blind and selfish that he cannot see other emotions, especially a mother's!

Yes, Rohan was made so selfish in some last updates thats why i took the character in the way..

Yes, Rohan is selfish and you have maintained his character as it should have 👏

Abt the case.. In my opinion... many families try to solve their problems at home itself.. and i also tried to take the initiative ahead... Giving away Wendy was not a decision, but only a thought.. ! But, letting Aryan go to his biological father cud make some sense..

Bawa, I think my question came from the fact that Ashni could so easily talk about giving away a child... especially Nidhi, however sacrificing she may be to talk of giving up her own son, the one person who has been a constant in her lonely life till now so they can keep Wendy, a relative stranger and only to make Ashu happy seems a little off.

The other point that people try to solve issues at home itself would be true had Rohan tried to do that... but he did not. He called Nidhi and Aryan and unfeelingly handed over the custody paper case. So, this is already a case in court.

If I can suggest what should have been the end of the Ashni convo is that they decide they will not let any of their children go to Rohan, and decide to fight tooth and nail in the court. Now that kind of a fighting finish would have been great. Rohan may be a father, but he has been portrayed selfish and if it were not for Anji's situation he would not take a second look at Aryan... so he does not deserve sympathy. That is my opinion.

The next writer took the update as you may have read by now...

Have not read next chapters yet, so I do not know what has happened or how ti has proceeded... but I can see some troubles that this review may have caused... once again sorry for the bad timing of this review. I had no idea what I was stirring up... I will soon read the next updates and comment. Have not done it yet... and its my fault that I am lagging behind.

Sorry that i chose to write in that way..

I am sorry Pansy Ma'am..

Bawa, what have i done? Why are you asking sorry... did I make a mistake by writing these comments? I am sorry I just wrote what I felt when I read this chapter... Since I am lagging behind I do not what happened next, and I have still not read the rest of the chapters. So once again I hope you have not taken this personally... I just wrote the way I felt when I read this update.

Originally posted by: aardhan

Bawa, i am not sure what all this is about... is my comment to chapter 8 reason for this? I am sorry I just wrote what I felt when I read it... as you know I am lagging behind. I have not read 9 yet, so I am not sure what the issue is over here...

I just wrote comments for 8 as that was the last chapter I had read... BTW, I still ahve to read the rest to see what is happening here...

Originally posted by: aardhan

Originally posted by: sshirley

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thank you so much Suku, I m glad you liked it.

Well, frankly, I am amazed to see the kind of writi ng you inexperienced youngsters have churned out.. it was just unexpected for me at least - esp. a few chapters were a delightful surprise.

Haan pata hai, pahli baar me kabhi aap ka review mila jo aaj milega?😆