If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118 - Page 100

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Bawa Bhaiya, please clear a point here...
A person either thinks he is a good guardian or not of an orphan child...
Prudently, aap koi bhi bachha uthaa ke nahi le aaoge, jab tak aap iss baat se sure na ho ke u are capable enough to take care of the child.
Now in case of Ashu bringing Wendy home, there are 2 reasons behind... 1 being, he had always taken care of her ever since her parents died in dat mishap, so he was used to it both emotionally n physically..
2nd being, Nidhi too capable enough to take care of wendy in both d ways, as she too had loved the lone kid ever since she was brought in a hampered state after the accident...
So in the eyes of the Ashni couple, they were capable enough to take very good care of both the children together, and luckily both the children were happy together...
Now where has the question raised that Rohan-Anji were to be better guardians than them, when Ashni have already been excellent... There was no 2nd doubt abt the fact dat, both of them were finally very efficient as may be d case wid Rohan... So how does it prove them be better?
Another point, you have been trying to show the story of a lonely child, wo kya Ashni ke saath rehkar nahi ho sakta tha?afterall Wendy is new to this environment too...
Bhaiya, please do not hold any offence against me wid the questions I'm raising... But, like I had told u right after ur update, that, it seems like bachhe koi ball hain, n the adults are playing passing the parcel, without understanding the fact, that the children in hand are living beings with their own strong emotions...
I agree that children are adaptable, but that does not mean to keep moulding them every 5 minutes...
Bachhe phool ki tarah hote hain... Unhe constant tarah ki dhoop-chaaw na mile toh wo bhi murjaane lagte hain...
You must have read those cases I was discussing wid Mudra Aunty... I've seen in real sense, the little children loosing the proper psyche of that a child shud have...
They grow up really quickly, or do not want to grow up at all...

I again am apologising if in any manner I have hurted anybody's sentiments... M sorry yet again...

Originally posted by: sshirley

aap bhi unique piece ho mudra😆😆😆

😆

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Ji😳

Originally posted by: sshirley

Not possible ryt now.. she is busy at the home front..

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Originally posted by: sshirley

Aarti and Aazeen .. I totally second you on the points you made to Bhavit,,

And Bhavit, pl. pl. don't mind our comments and questions. They are NOT to discourage you, Please don't get disheartened and stop writing.. we are all just trying to help you get a better perspective... pl. try to understand it in that light.. You can be quite a good writer.. you have the skills. .. I am sure you will get better.. even I didn't write well the first time,, I am sue no one can get everything right the first.. and frankly, this story is really complicated for anyone to begin writing... it takes to begin writing with a challenge like this... Frankly even I don't think, I would have taken it up as my first foray into writing.. so, hats off to you and the other first time writers who have taken up this daunting challenge.

So, Bhavit, take all this criticism constructively because that's exactly what it's meant to be. I am sure.. you will do really well in your next update..

Bhavit, I sincerely apologize if my words have hurt you. That was never my intention, nor the intention of anyone else here.

Originally posted by: bawaswift

So sorry Shirley and many thanks...

Me a good writer... never sis... 😆

I am taking all the words so costructively, that i am leaving to write ever...

Sorry to disappoint you all

A man can also be emotional n apologetic.. n so cud be Rohan and Ashu

Thanks...

Hello ,

In my view, everyone has their own right to think something should happen this way or that way..
Simple reason.. agar har koi ek hi jaisa sochte ho toh.. koi ladai jhagda nahi hota.. koi court / wourt nahi hota...

So everything is right.

Bawa, what you have thought is right..about Rohan / Ashu / etc in your own way.. similarly, what Aazeen /Aarti / Shirley / Me have thought is our own stories... or our own ways... and donot take it personally... this is only a story and everything is about fictional characters.

and I am proud that because of that twist, the story has taken this mode.. a critically acclaimed one. Romance may appeal everyone.. but twists like this are not easy to write...and get applaud for it.

and this story is not written by a single person. Still it has taken such a good shape... how well the next writer takes up is a real challenge... and in my view, till now everyone succeeded in this. Pansy mam should give all of us very high marks.

So no hard feelings and no worries...
We all have started inkling our ideas into two words in this forum... we may not be world class writers... but definitely, all have come a long way from what we were at the beginning...

We all should be thankful to the forum.And Bawa... you are the integral part of this kTLK theme park / circus... you cannot say this... want to see your positive response by tomorrow .

Very well said Mudra..

Originally posted by: sshirley

Bhavit... that is what I was afraid of..

pl. don't leave writing like this... mera aisa koi matlab nahi tha.. pl. take up this challenge once again..

n u r absolutely right - even men have emotions, so who better to write about those emotions than u? you are the only guy amongst us writers so pl. write.

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hello ,

In my view, everyone has their own right to think something should happen this way or that way..
Simple reason.. agar har koi ek hi jaisa sochte ho toh.. koi ladai jhagda nahi hota.. koi court / wourt nahi hota...

So everything is right.

Bawa, what you have thought is right..about Rohan / Ashu / etc in your own way.. similarly, what Aazeen /Aarti / Shirley / Me have thought is our own stories... or our own ways... and donot take it personally... this is only a story and everything is about fictional characters.

and I am proud that because of that twist, the story has taken this mode.. a critically acclaimed one. Romance may appeal everyone.. but twists like this are not easy to write...and get applaud for it.

and this story is not written by a single person. Still it has taken such a good shape... how well the next writer takes up is a real challenge... and in my view, till now everyone succeeded in this. Pansy mam should give all of us very high marks.

So no hard feelings and no worries...
We all have started inkling our ideas into two words in this forum... we may not be world class writers... but definitely, all have come a long way from what we were at the beginning...

We all should be thankful to the forum.And Bawa... you are the integral part of this kTLK theme park / circus... you cannot say this... want to see your positive response by tomorrow .