If I should meet thee-part 12 Pg 118

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Aazeen02

@Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#971

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu

Arre bhai Maasi ki hasiyat se toh unhe holidays main mere paas bhej sakti ho naa????

Pehle main toh mil loon apne bachho ki maasi se... 😆 then will decide to send them there at ur place...
Chuttiyon mein kuch waqt ke liye its ok... Bhej denge... 😃

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Pehle main toh mil loon apne bachho ki maasi se... 😆 then will decide to send them there at ur place...
Chuttiyon mein kuch waqt ke liye its ok... Bhej denge... 😃

😆...😆 😛

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PMithalee

@PMithalee

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Originally posted by: Pardeshi.Mithu
Mujhe pata nahi ye FF kya hain...par bacho ki baat chal rahi hain toh Aazeen don't worry agar kal ko tumhaare bache ho aur tumhe nahi chaahiye toh mujhe de dena main unhe paal lungi 🤗 What say?

Sorry Frnds but this comment of mine is purely intended to Aazeen! it is not related to anyone, not even the FF! It was just dat I was searching for Aazeen and found her in this thread and just made a stupid comment only for fun and for Aazeen! I have no idea what this FF is about I mean the storyline so plzzz don't take this comment of mine in any other way or into any other direction. ...

I promise from today I won't enter any unknown thread of which I have no idea...but pakka promise this comment was just for fun and only for Aazeen! Hope you all will understand me and forgive me if I have hurt anyone! 🤗 😛

I know in past I have done somethings, acting as a defense lawyer 🤣 and have seen how it backfired 🤣
So I have promised myself since then that if I defend anyone in future it would only be if I am paid for it 🤣 😉 🤣

Edited by Pardeshi.Mithu - 11 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Mithu.. Aazu, yahan bhi aap dono shuru ho gaye...

koi baat nahi lage raho lage raho..

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mudraswathi

@mudraswathi

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

Originally posted by: sshirley
Mithu.. Aazu, yahan bhi aap dono shuru ho gaye...

koi baat nahi lage raho lage raho..

Hello Shirley😃

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Aarti and Aazeen .. I totally second you on the points you made to Bhavit,,

And Bhavit, pl. pl. don't mind our comments and questions. They are NOT to discourage you, Please don't get disheartened and stop writing.. we are all just trying to help you get a better perspective... pl. try to understand it in that light.. You can be quite a good writer.. you have the skills. .. I am sure you will get better.. even I didn't write well the first time,, I am sue no one can get everything right the first.. and frankly, this story is really complicated for anyone to begin writing... it takes to begin writing with a challenge like this... Frankly even I don't think, I would have taken it up as my first foray into writing.. so, hats off to you and the other first time writers who have taken up this daunting challenge.

So, Bhavit, take all this criticism constructively because that's exactly what it's meant to be. I am sure.. you will do really well in your next update..

Bhavit, I sincerely apologize if my words have hurt you. That was never my intention, nor the intention of anyone else here.