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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful,thats the only word I can say,loved it,all emoions portrayed so strongly yet so subtly.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update... perfect flow of emotions

The way you took it to the conclusion was simply awesome...the right blend of panic-when Nidhi saw cheerful atmosphere in the house,

My heart dipped. Is baba again trying to get me engaged to someone?

revulsion-when she confronted Col. Verma asserting her stand,

My lips trembled with fear but I bit them in order to keep my strength. I couldn't fell weak. And he need to know, that it's my life that he is deciding upon.

I stood straight with a rage away from Dadi Bua's hands. Every pore of my being was burning in anger.

"Nahi baba...Koi roka nahi hoga aj yahan" I said with a determination and he looked at me with killing eyes.

Romantic triumph- when they celebrated the success of their love,

He smiled and cupping my face, placed a soft lingering kiss on my forehead. The softness of his lips against my skin, send goose bumps down my body.

"Abh yaqeen aya..." He parted away and asked and in reply, I hugged him tightly the next moment.

My heart was jumping in joy. I could literally feel butterflies dancing in my stomach.

His warmth, his closeness seemed to have made me forget all about the pain, anger and frustration, I went through last last few weeks. Even my surroundings.

A few moments later, when I felt his arms around myself, I realized that I have took him by surprise with my hug.

I tried to back out, not wanting him to feel awkward but he held me tightly in place. An involuntary smile got placed on my lips sensing that he has let loose of all his reservation.

He didn't utter a word but his silence said it all.

gratitude-to have friends in high places,

"Thank you souch Anji...Tu janti nahi tu ne mere liye kia kia hai?" I was truly feeling blessed to have a friend like her in my life.

"Dosti ke liye kuch bhi" She said as she hugged me tightly for a bit and left.

Contentment- to heart's content for a new beginning

That was the rain, which made me realize my love for this amazing man...and now it witness our official togetherness too.

Rains will always stay special to me cause of this man who was standing beside me with his killing smile and who have my heart for eternity.

Simply Awesome...👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect end of beautiful lovestory...though it is begining of AshNi journey..! Loved all parts very much. Take care and give us the pleasure of reading ur stories.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

pt.2 konse pg or hai



Page: 1, 5, 13 & 19
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepa17

Very nice nice concluding part. Loved it.


Anji Nidhi friendship commendable.

Nice prank by CV on Nidhi.

And the rain showers to bless them.. Awesome👏



thanku so much dear...
am glad u liked it...
anji nidhi bond is surly so strong...
that prank almost gave a heart attack to nidhi...
;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bc123456

Like button , does not say anything it was a beautiful end , the whole story was written so sensitively . Really loved all the parts of it , please keep writing and enthral lying us ,👏



thanku so much dear...
glad u liked the emotional journey of ashu nidhi and cv too...
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

lovely conclusion to a beautiful OS Ana..liked the flow of emotions.



thanku so much sujatha g...
happy to see u liking it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyotinayana

Very beautifully written thanks ana



thanku dear... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao




Ana,

Most beautifully written Os I have ever read on ASHU and NIDHI.

Thank you very very much. Waiting for more from you. Take care.



thankubso much jayashree...
i m glad u liked it yaar...
will try to come up with an os...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonyjknum

beautiful,thats the only word I can say,loved it,all emoions portrayed so strongly yet so subtly.



thanku so much dear...
glad u enjoyed this journey :D

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