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Bishal

@SwastikAshNi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Read both two parts Ana-Selfless Ashu and Responsible daughter but determined lover NNidhi-perfect AshNi wala feeling.Can't wait to see how their Love wins after so many big big hurdles-loved the progression of the OS

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Ana,

Waiting for your update.Aj rat se kal subah ho rahi hai. update kab milega?

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rayafan17

@rayafan17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Ana.. Was just able to read it.. There is no way you can think of leave writing asnhi stories .. Could feel their pain...

Jaldi se update karo

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Aardhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Wow Ana, beautiful continuation. 👍🏼

You drew us all into this Ashni world where there is strife and turmoil. This time Ashu;s thought are so well etched. His worry for Nidhi, then hesitation to see her when Anji called but finally forcing himself as he has no option. Liked how he cared for her and made her promise to look after herself. Liked this Nidhi as well, she is more attuned to Ashu here. And this time was he the one who broke the relationship and made Nidhi promise not to see him?

He wants her to agree to marriage! 😲 Thank God Nidhi stopped him. Very gripping OS Ana, nicely describing their pain. So will they be out of their misery soon, will they reunite? Hope you ahve a happy conclusion in mind! 😃

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bc123456

@bc123456

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Waiting for a happy ending

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

am sorry for being late..
but the last part is a kind of tricky for me...thats why taking time :P
will update today...for sure...

take care you all..
and hope you had a very nice weekend...

luv ya
Ana

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Tyro
cant wait for the next part//

will update today...so sorry for being so late... :)

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
beautiful dear
just awesome

thanku kiran...
glad you liked it yaar😳

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Tonight???

Please release naa...

so sorry for being late anjani...
will update today...had a writer's block😕

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: saibanu
This is such a beautiful piece of writing Ana , too good ⭐️

This touched my heart , so nicely you portrayed inner turmoil of Ashu and Nidhi ...But please give a happy ending to this OS ...cant see them suffering so much

Please continue karo , will be waiting 😃

thanku so much sai...
am glad you liked this os till now...hope i will b able to do justice to its end😳
you surly willn't see them suffering anymore😃